Wondering. 'Incomplete Lullaby'

Wondering. 'Incomplete Lullaby'; Mer/Der.....
Topic Started: Apr 28 2009, 08:48 AM (130 Views)
Mer.Der.Love	Apr 28 2009, 08:48 AM Post #1
Posts: 14 Group: Interns Member #136 Joined: September 1, 2008	hey guys i am working on a new fic but i was wondering if anybody would read. it is mer der with a few twists and turns along the way as per usual. i dont mind if i only have one or two readers, i guess i was just wondering if i would have any at all thats all. let me know and i will post the first chapter in a few days. thanx Jess.



greys5824	Apr 28 2009, 02:33 PM Post #2
Posts: 92 Group: Interns Member #76 Joined: August 8, 2008	Your new fic sounds good. Can't wait to read the first update



Mer.Der.Love	Apr 28 2009, 02:53 PM Post #3
Posts: 14 Group: Interns Member #136 Joined: September 1, 2008	ok so before i post the first chapter i just thought i would let everybody know that the first chapter is called "Incomplete Lullaby" shold be up tomorrow afternoon or the day after no longer than that though.



Liina	May 6 2009, 04:22 PM Post #4
Satan of GAO :) Posts: 6,706 Group: Chiefs Member #131 Joined: August 31, 2008 Favorite Character Meredith, Cristina, Alex, Izzie, George, Favorite Couple Meredith and Derek, Izzie and Alex	Waiting for it (Y) .
	Mistakes are painful, but you have to make these by your own to learn. And you are my favorite, the most common and the most painful one, sorry for everything...


Mer.Der.Love	May 30 2009, 03:49 AM Post #5
Posts: 14 Group: Interns Member #136 Joined: September 1, 2008	*“In good times, In bad times I’ll be on your side forever more, That’s what friends are for.”* Slowly making my way past the bar that my parents had stocked with the finest of drinks for this particular event I bend down and grab a hidden bottle of tequila. Before I can stand back up though I feel a hand on my ass; I have to admit this dress im wearing in no way says “ No don’t do that” as my mother so easily pointed out earlier with her “Whores’R’Us” comment. So here I am bottle of tequila in one hand and two salt shakers in the other and as I stand up I see my “Boyfriend” step around me while grabbing lemon slices in one hand and a bottle of champagne in the other. When I say boyfriend I don’t think anybody would actually call it a relationship although it is in way; You see at these parties that our overly snooty high society parents like to throw, I like to drink a little to much and I tend to end up in a bed, pool, spa, kitchen….. Really anywhere I can, with what ever willing male I can find at the time; And for the past few times this particular male has been more then willing. You see when you read this you instinctively think “Slut” because its simply an impulsive thing to do when you hear of a seventeen year old girl sleeping around; not because it hasn’t been done before, but because of the rise in this epidemic. Although before I explain the many factors and reasons behind my dis-like and obvious dis-taste for the society I have been raised in I must finish this short but very thrilling story and explanation of this night; the night when everything changed for a many people. So after a few to many tequila slammers and a bottle of champagne I once again found myself laying underneath a grunting and groining male being who I admit is HOT but who is so blatantly dumb and driven by his primordial instincts. So not five minutes after he is finished I jump up pull my dress up and do up the zipper so that the fabric once again becomes taught against my slim figure. With that I look down at the boy only feet away from me trying to zip his pants up and re-do his tie to the perfect state it was the last time his mother had seen him. As I walk or attempt something resembling a walk towards the door of the pool room I hear my father warning everybody that there’s ten minutes till mid-night, ten minutes until the new year…… ten minutes until the toughest year of my life begins. Pushing through the crowed I make my way towards the stairs that lead to the second floor of my house and standing there is my knight in shinning armour. My best friend Derek is standing there holding two glasses and a bottle of champagne I make my way to him a little steadier then I was five minutes prior and grab hold of his hand as he drags me up the stairs to my room, when we get in there he removes his jacket and puts it on my bed, I slip out of my heels and grab the bottle out of his hands. With this done we climb through my window onto the balcony that wraps around the second floor of my house. When were both there I pop the cork and start to pour the sparkling liquid into the glasses. As we finish this we hear that the count down has just begun. 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.……….. With that we lift our glasses and drain the flowing liquid out of them, bringing Our hands back down I throw my head up so that I can look Dereks in the eyes. I grab the bottle and lift it up above both of our heads. “To a friendship that doesn’t judge” I scream as he takes my hand. “To the knowledge that no matter what happens I will have somebody by my side through thick and thin” Derek yells in response to my comment. And like every year before we look into each others eyes and smile as we finish our yearly resolution. “To the knowledge that im not me with out you kid.” It was at this point that we fell to the ground wrapped up in each others arms and as we laid there I thought about the ups and downs the two of us had gone through and the knowledge that no matter what had happened through out the days and nights that followed this we always ended up back here every year with the same drink, the same person and the same promise to one another. I roll over to look at him knowing that this year would be one of change for all of us but specifically for the two of us and our friendship as for the first time we wouldn’t be just down the road from each other, we would make new friends and we couldn’t just be there in the blink of an eye for one another when something good happened or when something bad rocked us to the core. Incidentally after the mishaps tonight I would need him more then I ever had before, I would need my best friend to hold my hand through the tough times I was bound to face yet he wouldn’t be there this time. *Ok so i hope you like this.*



Liina	May 31 2009, 01:07 PM Post #6
Satan of GAO :) Posts: 6,706 Group: Chiefs Member #131 Joined: August 31, 2008 Favorite Character Meredith, Cristina, Alex, Izzie, George, Favorite Couple Meredith and Derek, Izzie and Alex	It is pretty good , update soon !!
	Mistakes are painful, but you have to make these by your own to learn. And you are my favorite, the most common and the most painful one, sorry for everything...


Carter	Jun 18 2009, 10:10 AM Post #7
O'Malley Forever Posts: 5,374 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: August 2, 2008 Favorite Character George O'Malley Favorite Couple Callie & Arizona	Nice Fic Jess. Hope you update soon.



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