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Story of A girl - She is always strong.
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Liina Sep 2 2008, 03:08 PM Post #1
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Actually Karl wanted me to put it here, well he seems to like it. Hope you enjoy.

This is a story of teenagers, Meredith is 15 years old, Derek 17. Meredith's best friend is Cristina 15, Derek's is Preston 16. Meredith, Christina and Preston have been friends over 10 years, they were first friends to each other at all. Derek joined them, if he was around 8. He felt in love with Meredith, kissed her once, but that made her hate him. Derek's girlfriend is Addie, 14, who joined the group two years ago with Alex (14), George (12), Izzie (14), Callie (12), Erica (14) and Rose (14) moved there about year ago. Meredith is dating with Randy, they have been together for a month now. In my story is also Finn, Meredith's ex-classmate. In high school Meredith is in B class, Preston and Finn in D. They don't live in Seattle, they live about 10 kilometers from Seattle. I call it Randvere. Randvere could be little, with no school and shop. There is a football playing place, basketball and volleyball stage. Forest is about kilometer from the centre, where is old shop house (where now are living Alex's relatives), old school house (where now is place for people, who are with braindamage or can't handle with themselves) and old some kind of office house (where are also people living. There lives old man named Jossif Tsedreki, who moved there from Hungary. He is enemy, Meredith and her friends call him Jossifer Stalin, cause Stalin's first name was also Jossif. ). Meredith lives in flat with her granny, she actually lives with her mother in Seattle. Ellis Grey is known surgeon, but not world famous. She was commited to work. Derek, Preston and Christina lived in next house of flats. That was 2 floors house, Cristina and Preston lived on 1st, Derek up to Cristina. Alex and George lived farrer in village, they had their own houses, but they are neighbours. Izzie lives in one direction, around kilometer from centre, Callie, Erica, Rose, Finn and Addie lived in other village, bigger village. Mark was also there sometimes, he was friend of Derek and lived also in different direction. Enough, for intro, if you have questions, then ask. Now I start with that story around in July, when school is over and weather is beautiful. Meredith, Cristina, Derek, Finn and Preston sleeped in tents. Izzie, Rose, Alex, George, Erica, and Callie sneaked out, but Erica, Callie, Izzie and Rose somethimes sleeped in Erica's tent too. Finn sleeps usually with Preston, Derek is alone, Meredith is with Cristina, somethimes alone, when Cristina is at work. Yeah, Cristina and Finn go to work, Meredith plays tennis and football. All boys and Meredith and Christina play football, they all have skills, but Alex is really pro. Whatever, now is all.

Sunny July day...
Meredith is in home, chatting in msn. Another boring day, Cristina is at work, Finn is at work, Preston is visiting his relatives, George is also visiting relatives, Alex is in Seattle, Izzie, Callie, Erica and Rose are also away. Mark is somewhere unknown place and Addie is also unknown, so only Derek and Meredith are in home. They chat in msn. Neither one wants to go out, because it is too boring. Hours passed listening music and chatting. Derek signed out and Meredith chatted with her classmates, when her phone ringed. Finn. What does he want ? Meredith answered.
Meredith: Hey.
Finn: Hey, how are you ?
Meredith: Fine, you ?
Finn: Fine. Well, I am coming off work and maybe you want to go out. I am home in 10 minutes.
Meredith: Okay, call me if you are near to shop ( they call the old shop house still shop ).
Finn: Yeah. See you then.
Meredith: Bye Finn.
Meredith hung up. Oh, I should mention that Derek loves Meredith, Meredith loves Derek, but they don't know it, so Meredith is flirting with Randy and Derek is going steady with Addie. Finn likes Meredith really much and they are like flirting.
Now Meredith is changing clothes and looking for some money for case if she needs it. Then her phone ringed again. Derek. Strange. She answered.
Meredith: Hey Derek.
Derek: Hey, Mer. Want to go out ?
Meredith: Neah, Finn already asked me, but you...come if you want. Maybe Addie is home too.
Derek: Yeah, I actually want to talk to you.
Meredith: Okay come to builiding, so we can talk, I'll be there in few.
Derek: Okay, and for record I am there already.
Meredith: Okay. Wait for me there.
Derek: Don't worry I will wait.
Meredith: See you.
Meredith hung up. Strange day, she said to herself and left. She went to builing and Derek was there too.
Derek: Hey, you came. Come here. (hugs)
Meredith: What is wrong with you ?
Derek:We have been friends so long, that we can go over to hugging.
Meredith: Okay.
Derek: I have prepared myself for this and I am ready to say it.
Meredith: Okay, say it I am curious.
Derek: I want to say....this ( comes close to Meredith )
Meredith: What is wrong with you ?
Derek: Nothing, just...nothing. Let's go then.
Meredith: Okay, I keep this as secret.
Derek: Thanks.
They went to old shop house quietly. On their way Finn called and also Addie called to Derek. When Meredith and Derek reached to shop house Finn and Addie were already there. Derek and Meredith looked to each other and Derek went to Addie and Meredith to Finn. Finn kissed Meredith cheek and Addie Derek to lips.
Addie took Derek's hand then they went to football stage and sitted next to goal on bench. Addie spoke first.
Addie: I think that we could plan a party in schoolhouse.
Meredith: Good idea, like disco you mean ?
Finn: Yeah and you could talk to Bailey.
Meredith: What ? Are you nuts ?
Derek: Yeah, do it. I could help you. Bailey thinks that you are don't do anything bad.
Meredith: Fine, I talk to her, but you come with me.
Addie: Okay, I come.
Meredith: Finn and Derek you wait us here, we are going.
Derek: Good luck.
Finn: Yeah, I wish you luck too.
Meredith: Thanks.
Addie: Mer needs it.
Meredith and Addie went to schoolhouse and found Bailey there. She was as evil as always, that's was they called her the nazi.
Bailey: Hi, Meredith, Addison, what do you need ?
Meredith: Well, we thought that we could have a party this Friday and we need your premission to do it.
Bailey: Why ?
Addie: We would like to make it here.
Bailey: Okay, Meredith come with me Addison find me adult, who will responce about it.
Addie: Okay.
Meredith: Let's go then.
Meredith followed Bailey to anouther room, Bailey's office.
Bailey: So party. You know that I need your number and and one of you to responce it.
Meredith: I will give you my number and I will look after them. I promise that nothing unallowed will happen.
Bailey: I need someone else more, older than you.
Meredith: Derek for example ?
Bailey: Ask him to come here.
Meredith: I call him.
Meredith called to Derek and Derek came there fast. Finn came also and helped Addie to find a grown-up.
Back in Bailey's office Bailey talked about it and asked numbers and explained the rules and such staff. She finally agreed, but Derek and Meredith should make a plan and lot of paperwork. Addie and Finn found that Addie's mother agreed to responce. After Meredith and Derek came out, Finn took Meredith's arm and Addie went inside. Derek came with Meredith and Finn. They went out to old garage. Derek took smoks Silver LM from his pocket. Finn has dark blue LM. Derek gave Meredith also smoke and gave fire too. They sat there quietly and smoked. Then Addie called to Finn. They talked about party and then Finn asked Addie to come there too.
Addie: The Nazi is fine with that, she wants to see us Finn and my mother tomorrow at 1 p.m. Derek and Meredith, you have to go there at 2 p.m. with some papers and well, she said that you know it.
Derek: actually we do and we have to go and do those papers.
Meredith: Yeah, ( to Finn ) call me later.
Finn: I will.
Addie: (to Derek) Call me if you finish.
Derek: Yeah, Bye.
Meredith: See you later.
Finn: Bye
Addie: See you.
Derek and Meredith left. At first they both went to home and then meet at building. Meredith brought paper and Derek too. They both took pens too.
Derek: Well, first, who are coming ?
Meredith: I call to girls, you to boys and Rose.
Derek: Why I have to talk to Rose ?
Meredith: because you are Derek.
Derek: Sure.
They called all persons and they all agreed to come. They also made plan and everything.
Mistakes are painful, but you have to make these by your own to learn. And you are my favorite, the most common and the most painful one, sorry for everything...

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Liina Sep 8 2008, 08:52 PM Post #2
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Two days later...Party.
Derek and Meredith were there with Bailey. Derek brought loudspeakers and Meredith laptop. They just chekked music and made preparations. Christina came soon after them, before the party starts, cauze she brought chips and coke and alcohol and smokes and everything. Finn and Addie came earlier too. They agreed to clean this place. After a while everything was done and party people start to come. Bailey trusted Meredith and Derek, so she left. Addie's mother came should come later. Meredith turned music on. The first song was Bump'em up. Finn took Meredith to dance, Derek took Addie, Alex- Izzie, Callie-George, Preston-Christina, Mark-Erica. Rose danced with her boy Andrew. Some time was that dancing time. Then they statred to play blue-black-white.( Estonian game, quite good. There first is sepparated boys and girls. For exmple girls are first in an they can put some activity on colours. Like blue is kiss cheek, black is hug and white kiss on lips. Then girls put themself number. Like when is 5 girls then 1-5. After that first boy comes in and picks a colour for example white and then number like 4. Girl number 4 comes to boy and tells him that he has to do. And then all boys do it and after that is their turn to choose activities and numbers. ) First it was boys turn to pick activities. Girls waited in another room. Activities and number were following:

Blue - hug
Black - kiss cheek
White - Slow dance

1 - Preston
2 - Derek
3 - Finn
4 - Alex
5 - George
6 - Andrew
7 - Mark.

Rose was the first one who came in. She picked blue and 4. She hugged Alex and sat with boys. Then Cristina came. She chose 1 and white. Slow dance supposed to come later. Izzie picked 6 and black. She kissed Andrew and joined Rose and Christina. Addie was next. She picked 3 and blue. She hugged Finn really maddly. She wanted Derek. Next one was Callie. She picked 7 and also white. Then came Erica and chose 5 and white. Meredith was the last one. She knew that Derek is 2, he is always. So she picked 2 and white. Now was slow dance time. Derek gave Meredith arm, So did Preston to Christina and George to Erica, and Mark to Callie. Song was Dj - Cammy - I wanna grow old with you. Derek hold Meredith softly in her arms, he didn't see anything else. Dance floor was filled with them, it was really small room. Derek gently touched her ass and put her head to his neck. Then Meredith whispered he something.
Meredith: What the hell are you doing ?
Derek: I am having fun.
Meredith: Have fun with Addie.
Derek: Are you kidding me ?
Meredith: I mean it stop.
Derek: Okay.
Derek smelled her hair and moved close to her, their bodies were pulled together. Derek opened her mouth to say something, but song ended.
Izzie: Go out, now is our turn.
Girls numbers and activities.

Blue - kiss cheek
Black - slow dance
White - kiss + hug

1 - Cristina
2 - Meredith
3 - Izzie
4 - Callie
5 - Erica
6 - Rose
7 - Addie

Boys start to come. Well the thing or whatever stuff was following.

Preston - Black, Cristina
Derek - White, Meredith
George - Blue, Erica
Alex - White, Izzie
Finn - Black, Addie
Andrew - White, Rose
Mark - Blue, Callie

Then Addie's mother checked for second, saw that everything is fine and went away. Cristina brought another bag, where was vodka, tequila, scotch and some kokteils. Of course smokes too. She started to gave those out. Derek got 2 pack smokes, so did Meredith, 1 to Izzie, Erica, Rose and Andrew, Christina got 2 by herself too. Alex and Preston took first scotch, George came there too. Izzie, Erica, Callie, Rose and Addie took vodka, Andrew, Derek, Addie, Finn and Mark took another scotch. Meredith and Cristina took tequila. Kokteils were the first ones actually. Some time they drunk, then vodka was empty and Izzie, Erica, Callie, Rose and Addie drunk. The bottle was perfect for bottle rounding. They sat on round and made kokteil of scotch and tequila. to who bottle points has to drink it. First one was Cristina....
Well, they played and did everything interesting, I let them there and go out if that schoolhouse. Bailey decided to come controll them. She has no keys, those are in Meredith's pocket. Bailey called Addie's mother there too. She tried to call to everybody inside, but music was too loud, at least she thought that.
Back inside was cool party. Meredith looked her phone.
Meredith: Bailey called me, couple of times. What about you ?
Everybody: Me too.
Addie: My mother is calling me.
Meredith: We are so screwed.
Derek: Not yet. Well, I have not drunk mind. Addie, Rose, Callie, Erica and Izzie, you go to WC and laugh there, if you need to throw up then do it, but other ones need to make noise and nothing about throwing. Just make fun of George and Alex for example.
George and Alex: Hey ? Not us,
Derek: What ever. George and Alex you to choose songs and if you need to throw, then go to other toilet, but slowly, or that closet is also there. Rose and Andrew, you first hide bottles, then dance. I and Mer will open door, wait. Izzie and Callie, stay out, dance with Finn, Preston, Cristina, Mark.
Others: Fine.
Meredith: We need luck.
Derek: It's gonna be alright.
Meredith: Bet your ass that it will.
Derek: Nop, I bet on you.
Meredith: Jerk.
Derek: You are.
Meredith: Shut up.
Derek: Fine.
They were on door, both took deep breath and unlocked it.
Mistakes are painful, but you have to make these by your own to learn. And you are my favorite, the most common and the most painful one, sorry for everything...

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Liina Sep 10 2008, 06:30 PM Post #3
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They were on door, both took deep breath and unlocked it.
Bailey: Glad that you let us in finally.
Addie's mother: Really, I came to check on you.
Meredith: Sorry, I didn't hear any phone ringing, music is too loud.
Bailey: Then let us see the party.
Derek: You go ahead.
Addie's mother: Fine.
Derek looked to Meredith, who was still worried. Derek looked her like ''It's going to be fine.'' It gave Meredith some strenght and they went to party room.
Bailey: Like dance party ?
Derek: It is. Mer, would you like to dance.
Meredith: Sure.
Addie's mother: Where is Addison ?
Derek: She is in toilet, laughing.
Bailey: Is she okay ?
Meredith: She is fine, just... they are always on their own and laugh. This is normal.
Addie's mother: Okay, then I think this is good party and I can leave.
Bailey: I stay for a while.
Meredith: I send you out.
Derek: Me too.
They left to send Addie's mother out. At door, when Meredith started to close it Derekk stopped her.
Meredith: What, why ?
Derek: Wanna go out for a walk ? ( He showed smokes. )
Meredith: Okay, let's go, but I take mine too.
Derek: Don't I give you.
Meredith: Okay, let's go then.
They went to another side to schoolhouse. Derek gave Meredith smoke and they found there chair. Both of them runned there, but Derek was faster. Meredith tried to push him away, but then quit.
Derek: Who is so weak now ?
Meredith: I am. But I sit on your lap then.
Derek: Do it, but I don't move.
Meredith sat on his lap. Derek took softly touched her hair and ass. Meredith was really confused.
Meredith: Looked madly at him: What the hell is wrong with you ?
Derek: Alco ?
Meredith: This morning ?
She turned her face to his. They looked at each other eyes. Derek slowly moved his lips to hers and closed eyes. So did Meredith. Their lips met, this was like their first kiss. They both wanted that and kiss over 6 years...Magical for them. Callie came, just when they pulled their lips away.
Callie: Wow !
Meredith: We just smoked and he won't let me sit. That's all.
Callie: Deam right you are.
Derek: Yeah.
Callie: Well, actually Mer, we need you back in.
Meredith: Okay, let's go.
Meredith and Callie went in and Derek stayed there alone. He sat there a little, smoked and just time, when he went back, Addie, Finn and Meredith came out.
Addie: I looked for you. Randy is here.
She runned to Derek, gave him a hug. Derek hugged back, but looked to Meredith. Randy noticed that. He looked Meredith confused and then took her hand and they went together in. Inside Randy pulled Meredith to quiet room and locked the door. He started touching Meredith ass and breasts, kissing boobs and touching pussy, all the time Meredith was fighting against him. Meredith stopped him and tried to get out of room. She screamed, but it was too loud music.
Meredith: Randy, stop it.
Randy: You let Derek touch you and sex with you, then why not me ?
Meredith: I am virgin and Derek has never touch me. You are sick bastard.
Randy: I am sick of you. You drive me qrazy. So don't be shy, just LET ME DO IT !!
Meredith: NO, HELP ME !!!
Randy: Door is locked and music is so loud, noone hears you.
Meredith was in door crying and asking for help. For her luck Mark was on his way to toilet and he needed to pass this room. He heard Meredith screaming, he wanted to be sure that everything is fine and knocked the door.
Mark: Meredith, are you okay ? Why are you crying ?
Mer: Randy is keeping me here, door is locked, please help me out of here.
Mark: Randy, let her out ?
Randy: No, I will get her, I will get into her pants and I will get it right now.
Mark: I can broke the door, you sick bastard. Meredith be strong, hold on, I will get Alex, George, Derek and Andrew.
Mer: I'll give my best.
Back inside Randy has took off his shirt and jeans, he has only boxers on. Now he is coming to Meredith and starts taking off her top. Meredith is holding back and trying to escape away from him. She made one wrong choise and now is stuck in one corner, she is sitting and crying, Randy is smiling and coming to her.
Ran: Don't be so shy, I know you want it too.
Mer: No, I don't want it. At least not with you.
Ran: But just a little, you will suck my dick and that's all, okay I want to go inside you too, but just a little.
Mer: Never, with you.
Ran: I gave you chance to do it yourself, you refused and I have to do rape you.
Mer: No, you will not do it.
Randy came closer to her, he took off her top and trying to get rid off bra. Meredith heard Mark coming back with Alex, George, Andrew and...Derek. They were talking about something. Derek seemed really angry. Boys tried to unlock the door or just get it open. Inside Randy tried to get off her jeans now. Meredith was strong and fight against it. Finally Randy managed to kick her head against wall so strong that she went out. Boys behind the door noticed that it is so quiet inside.
Derek: MEREDITH !!! ANSWER ME !!!
Randy ( laughing ): She won't answer, not now. Her head is bleeding and she is easy to me now.
Derek: I WILL KILL YOU !!
Ran: You can try, but you can't get in.
Alex: I have an idea, Iz, give me your hairgrip, thank you
Iz: Take it ( gives it )
Alex: Derek, come away for a second. I will open the door.
Alex did something and lock was opened. Derek ws the first one, who got in.
Derek: You sick bastard. ( He punched Randy so that his nose started to bleed ).
Derek went to Meredith, looked her head, it seemed bad, but not too serious.
Mistakes are painful, but you have to make these by your own to learn. And you are my favorite, the most common and the most painful one, sorry for everything...

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Liina Sep 10 2008, 08:19 PM Post #4
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No comments :S.... well I hope I will get one.

Derek: Someone bring me something to clean it.
Alex: I'm on it.
Ran: I hope your girlfriend is going to die.
Mark: Shut up. ( He went and gave Randy 2 punches, so that he was laying on floor unable to move. Randy just laughed. )
Derek: Meredith, open your eyes, please, come back my friend.
Izzie: Maybe we should call her mothes, she is doctor.
Derek: I can handle it, trust me.
Cristina: You better handle with it.
Rose: Look what you did to poor Randy, who is taking care of him ?
Alex: Hey, Derek take it. And Rose, take care of him if you want to.
Rose: Maybe I do.
Derek: Now give me please plaster or something.
Alex: Take it.
Derek put it wound and hoped for the best. He waited for 5 minutes, then took her to his lap and went to other room and placed her on couch. Meredith was so numb. Derek sent Izzie to take cold water. When Izzie was back, he washed her face with that, then Meredith woke up. First thing she looked to others and then quikly sit and looked scared. Derek went and held her.
Derek: It is okay now, calm down...Just relax, you are safe now.
Meredith: Thank you.
Derek went and took her on his lap and hugged her. Meredith cryed, tears came like rain from her eyes. Derek whispered to her ear, so that only she can hear ''I care about you...too much'' Meredith whispered that she cares about him too. Derek tried to comfort her. Everybody was happy seeing that she is finally better. Mark and Alex went to Randy, took his hands, and carried him to Meredith. Meredith gave him slap and then keys to Alex, who kicked Randy out. Izzie gave Meredith her top and jeans back, she put those on and sitted for awhile. She felt so safe in Derek's lap.
Soon Addie and Callie went to clean up other room. Alex and George to party room, Rose and Andrew to away, Izzie to toilet and Mark help with cleaning. Only Meredith and Derek were sitting there.
Meredith: Thank you.
Derek: I would be stupid, if I would let him do anything.
Meredith: Thanks anyway.
Derek: It's nothing ( kiss forhead )
Meredith: Seriously, I need to make it up to you.
Derek: A kiss would be enough.
Meredith: Not now.
Derek: Of course.

Soon Meredith was enough good to go partying. Unfortunately then it was time clean up. They did it well and everything went like planned. At 11.p.m. they went out, when Addie's mother and Bailey came for key, Bailey looked the rooms and then they all went home. Derek sent Meredith to door and get his kiss. Meredith wished her good dreams and Derek too.

Days went and it was Monday. Meredith woke up at 9 a.m., cauze her tennis training was at 11 a.m. and she goes there by bike. Seattle is around 10 kilometers and she rides that distance around half an hour. This morning was like every morning at all. She woke up with alarm clock. First thing she gave her granny medcine, cause she is bedsick with desease with no cure. She made her granny breakfast, some sandwiches and coffee for herself. Meredith got her coffee and started to go to Seattle. She saw someone with motobike. It was Derek, he got it last day's evening.
Derek: Hey sweetie.
Meredith: Hey, I like your bike.
Derek: Wanna get ride ?
Meredith: I will be late for tennis.
Derek: I'll take you there.
Meredith: Are you sure ?
Derek: Sure I am, come on.
Meredith put her bike to old garage and sat on motorbike. Derek gave her headhelmet and trip started. Derek was like fearless and crazy driver, he had nice speed and Meredith enjoyed everything. She held Derek's waist and her head was on his back. For the record Derek is 1.95 meters, Meredith only 1,72 meters. Derek smiled all the way. Soon they were in Seattle, Meredith was still sleepy, so she asked Derek to make one stop and buy her coffee. Derek went to shop and returned with regular coffee. Meredith thanked him and they rode to tennis court. Her trainingmates were jealous if they saw her with so good bike. Boyfriend, that is their dream, so handsome and kind. First he stopped bike, then came off, took off Meredith's helmet and helped her down. Derek kissed her cheek and drove away. When Meredith was sitting on bench, everybody looked her with asking look. She smiled and changed her sneakers. Her trainer walked to this direction, where were Meredith and her training mates Helen, Ashley, Grete , Thomas, Ralf and Jagup. They were 2 years younger than Meredith. Their trainer was Taavi, handsome 19 years old and really sweet. He came to them.
Taavi: Good morning, sunshines, Helen-Ashley,
Mer: Please, I don't wanna play with Grete, please. I refuse.
Taavi: Shut up. Grete-Jagup, Ralf-Thomas.
Mer: What about me ?
Taavi: You are playing with me, but before tell me, who brough you here. I like that bike.
Mer: It was one of my friends. ( cell phone ) Sorry, I'll talk really little. Go ahead.
Taavi: And make it short, I'll bring my recket and then you'll finish.
Mer: Fine.
She looked at cell phone, it was Derek.
Mer: Hey.
Der: Hey, darling.
Mer: What do you want ? I don't have time.
Der: Well, I just wanted to hear your voice and...
Mer: What ?
Der: Bailey wants us to be her actors for summer.
Mer: Wtf ?
Der: Yeah, she will call you soon, just please accept, we got nice cash. We have to make a play and then we have shows on 6 of August, 21 of August, 8 of September, 22 of September, 28 of September, 07 of October, 14 of February 11 of April, 14 of April, 12 of May, 22 of June and 5 of July.
Mer: Our burthdays, kinda smart. I will think about it and I'll let you know.
Taavi came there.
Taavi: Meredith, end the call.
Mer: Yes, wait a bit.
Der: With who are you talking.
Mer: Trainer.
Der: So I don't have to worry ?
Mer: No, you don't.
Taavi: Give me the phone.
Taavi took phone from Meredith and told Derek not to worry and that Meredith has to go. Meredith was actually a bit disappointed, but went and played tennis. To be honest, then Meredith invented new sport in tennis, hit the coach. Grete and Helen went with her, Ashley, Thomas and Ralf were so nice, that they did nothing. Meredith was just like the bad girl in tennis, she didn't afraid the trainer like others, but just to mention Taavi was U-21 US 1st and world's 4th. Other trainer is Robert: US master in 2002-2004, after that he quit with proathlet career and started with trainer's. Meredith is bad in their both opinion. She is actually kinda good at it. She has really strong attacking shots and nice defence. She has really tecnique game if can say so. Okay, she is not perfect, the weakest things are volleys and powerful shots. She hates opposites with powerful shots, because she likes mind play more. To make opponent tired and then angry, after that is easy to win. Meredith has been in one competition and then she got 2nd place. Tennis club name is....Sinnet. That competition was inside the club, Meredith lost one game to Kristen, 18 played tennis 10 years, Meredith has played 3 years. At that time Taavi and Robert wanted to train her proffessional tennis player, but Meredith didn't think it is a good idea. After that she hasn't take part at any competitions, even if trainers wanted to get her to fire. Yeah, at that point she is good player, never nervous. Well tennis trainings are at Monday's and Thursday, physical is in Wendsday. They play football then, sometimes baseball too, usually football. Meredith was goon in that too, thanks to George, Alex, Derek, Preston and Mark. She used to do tricks and shot difficult for goalkeeper. For her was not hard to be stricker or goalkeeper, she had skills in everywhere. But today was tennis and Meredith played with Taavi, Robert looked with smile, how Meredith was about to win Taavi.
When they finished 1st set, Meredith won it 6:2, 4:6, 7:5. In 2nd, it was deal 1-1 in winning stand, 3rd was 4-5 to Meredith and game was in middle 30-30 deal. Meredith was serving and this was hard to Taavi, Meredith shots were so low, that nearly went over. Taavi was in difficult and after two points Meredith won. So Meredith Grey, noone in tennisworld won Taavi Himmer, US best player in U-21. That's when Robert came to her.
Rob: Congratiolations, Meredith. You did a great job.
Mer: Thank you. What do you need ?
Rob: Well....Seattle open is in 2 weeks, would you like to take part ?
( Okay, I know that this kind of competition won't exist, but in Liinaland it is real. :wink: )
Mer: You know my answer. No.
Rob: Please, you will win this, you are the best.
Mer: How you know it ?
Rob: Because you won Taavi Himmer, US best tennis player in U-21. You are the the best.
Mer: You can talk to my granny about it, okay ? He let me won.
Taavi: Meredith I really want to say that I did, but I didn't. Sorry. Just one competition. Please, you will do it great. I'll promise.
Mer: You can promise world to me, but I won't take part.
Rob: At least think about it.
Mer: Yeah.
Taavi: Your training is over, see you on thursday.
Mer: Yeah, see you.
Meredith sat on bench and took her water out. Ashley, Grete, Helen, Ralf and Jagup came there too. They were so tired and started to talk about their games and how much they want to take part at Seattle open. Helen knew that Meredith has a chance, but she was quiet. Helen asked Meredith to wait for her.
Hel: So ? What do you think about Seattle open ? Do you take part ?
Mer: It is nice competition and I won't take a part.
Hel: We all want it. It is our dream and you just let it go. What the hell are you doing Meredith ?
Mer: I am doing nothing.
Hel: Okay, what about that guy who brought you here. Is he free ?
Mer: I think he isn't, he and Addie are together for a long time.
Hel: Actually I ment you and him.
Mer: Neah, you can try of course.
They saw Derek coming there and when he saw Meredith talking with Helen, he went there.
Der: Hey sweetie. How are you ? ( hug )
Mer: Hey. First don't call me like that and I am fine.
Der: I knew it.
Mer: Derek, this is Helen. Helen - Derek.
Hel: Hey, nice to meet you.
Der: Same here. Um...Meredith, who was that guy who talked to me in phone ?
Mer: Taavi, he is there. ( Points where Taavi is. When Taavi heard his name, he came to them. Derek saw what a good looking man he was and got jealous. )
Taavi: Hey Meredith's friend. I am Taavi.
Der: Derek.
Taavi: Nice to meet.
Der: Same here. So I talked to you in phone ?
Taavi: Yes, don't think that I didn't want you to talk to your girlfriend, just training time.
Mer: I am not his girlfriend.
Taavi: Sorry, my bad.
Der: Very nice talking to you but we have to go Meredith.
Mer: Sure, see you guys next training.
Taavi: Sure.
Hel: Bye.
Derek took Meredith's bag and held her waist. Meredith looked strange, but then did the same thing. Taavi looked them and said to Helen '' He is the lucky one.'' Helen answered that she is the lucky one instead.
Mistakes are painful, but you have to make these by your own to learn. And you are my favorite, the most common and the most painful one, sorry for everything...

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