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| Topic Started: Aug 9 2008, 05:43 AM (405 Views) | |
| MerDerGreysFan24 | Aug 9 2008, 05:43 AM Post #1 |
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Chapter 1 Meredith looks at the alarm clock on the nightstand beside her big bed it read 6:00 She then rolled over and closed her eyes. .She took at deep breath before she then shook Derek to wake up. ” Babe wake up we need to get going we have early surgeries." "Ummm... go back to sleep Mer we don't have to be in until later" “Derek I’m going to go take a shower when I’m out you better be up and ready to head to the hospital” Derek did not respond he just rolled back over and kept on sleeping. Meredith shook her head at his attitude this morning usually it was he that had to drag her from bed. "That’s no fair." "Yes. It is." Meredith gets up and walks out of her room and across the hall to the bathroom. Derek could not believe how lucky he was to have Meredith in his life after everything they had been thought. Derek would not believe it himself if had not lived through it. Derek lies there a few minutes and then he slowly gets out of bed. He had no clue what he had done to deserve someone so terrific and as wonderful as he had done to deserve someone so terrific and as wonderful as he had done to deserve someone so terrific and as wonderful as Meredith. Meredith was the only woman he truly cared about and that would never change. He was going to love her tell he dies He was going to prove it. Prove it by taking the next possible step... Marriage... He head blurry eyed into the bathroom to get ready for the day and another day with the love of his life. Another day of surgeries...Another day in the hospital that he had learned to love... He never for one moment regretted moving to Seattle because if Addison and Mark had not slept together it would never made his move to Seattle and Meredith and for that even through they had hurt him in the past he would be forever grateful. He did not want to say it. However, it had to be said .He owed Mark and Addie a lot for this. For him actually moving here .Even though it took him a lot to admit it he had to... Mark and Addison were only helping him to... Helping him by making him realize that he had to move on and love someone else .Someone that happened to be the most beautiful woman in the whole world. The woman that loved him and would fight for him... He even had become friends with them after Mark had moved to Los Angels to follow Addison because in the end of everything everyone was finally happy. Derek loves when Addison and Mark come to visit. It is as if the gang is all back together. He just loves to hear all there stories and how life is treating them... All the sudden the sound of Meredith being ill in the bathroom brings him out of his musings about everything and he heads into to make sure she is ok. "Meredith, are you ok?" All he could here from the bathroom door was the sound of her throwing up. He went to the door and started knocking and when he got no responds he tried the door luckily it was unlocked. "Meredith is everything ok?" Meredith wipes her mouth. "I think that I have the stomach flu that is going around ..." Derek was shocked by how pale she looked as he entered the bathroom he grabbed a washcloth to cool her down. Then he bent to her level and wipes her face she moans softly… “Thanks” “It’s what I’m here for now lets get you in bed then I will call Richard and request a personal day for both of us” “Derek you can’t do that people need you I’ll be fine” "No I told him that there was a possibility that I was going to call today for a personal day." "Derek you have patients that you need to..." Meredith leans over the toilet bowl and throws up again. “Babe you need me more so I’m not going anywhere” Once Meredith is done, again Derek helps her clean up and lifts her in his arms to carry her back to bed. Meredith snuggles into his arms and lets her knight and shining whatever take care of her. |
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| Ali<3'sMerder | Aug 9 2008, 03:07 PM Post #2 |
PD's Personal Pillow!
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great start cant wait for more
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 Only two people in this world have the rights to PD- Ali and LG! Pillow throwing all the way! Thanks to FreakyX at LJ for the avvie and banner! | |
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| greys5824 | Aug 9 2008, 04:34 PM Post #3 |
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Awesome start...can't wait to read the next update |
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| MerDerGreysFan24 | Aug 9 2008, 06:02 PM Post #4 |
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As soon as Derek left the bed room to call Richard Meredith got out of bed and headed for the closet to get ready for the day. She was feeling fine now and saw no reason to spend the day at home when she could be at the hospital doing surgeries. She understood everything the Derek was doing .She knew he wanted the best for her. However, she was never going to get pass being as dedicated to her work as she is. She always wanted to be a surgeon and surgeons never are supposed to get sick. They are supposed to be strong people that never let anything get to them. Just as Meredith was finishing putting on her shoes Derek reentered their bedroom. “What are you doing?” “What does it look like? Getting ready for work” “Mer…” “Derek I’m fine I’m not sick anymore” Meredith, please just stay home for today?" "No, I can't" "Meredith...” "DEREK! I need to go to work...” “Derek you just don’t understand what I have to go through everyday to prove that I can live up to and surpass her standards” “Mer no one expects that of you” “You don’t be see the looks I get or the pressure I’m under to do better then anyone else just because I’m Ellis Grey’s daughter” "That doesn't mean you have to try to live up to her standards. You make your own standards." "I have to be better then her. I just have to. Even though she died. I just feel like I am always being looked like as the person that is going to take over for the wonderful and talented Ellis Grey." Derek’s heart broke for her she was right he did not know what it was like to live under the strain of all that pressure. He was not surprised that she had never spoken of any of this because she liked to avoid what was bothering her until she could no long hide what was really going on. Derek had tried many times to get her to release all her demons but he had not yet had success. "Derek. I am going to go to work now...” "Well at least let Richard do an exam. Please." Meredith grabs her purse. "Fine! I will ask him...” “I will call him and set up an appointment" "I think I can ask him. I am not a little kid." “Ok if you promise “ “I promise” “You know I have my ways of finding these things out right?” Derek said with humor in his voice “I know” "I will just call him and tell him that you will need a check up." "Ok...Fine...” Derek left the room with an on smile on his face and Meredith just rolled her eyes at him. Meredith gathered her stuff and followed him. He walked to the front door. "OK... Since you are in such a hurry to get out of here. Make sure you eat something. OK?" "Derek you are acting like a father...” "Aww... Thanks hun! I love you too." Derek kissed her, he opened the door for her, and she walked out the door. "No kiss goodbye." "You really love doing this to me when I am sick don’t you?" Derek just laughed at the way she was acting because he knew she really did not mind the way he was acting about her being sick she actually loved it in truth. Meredith kissed Derek on the cheek and then walked away and got into her car. |
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| Inlovewithmerder | Aug 10 2008, 12:44 PM Post #5 |
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LOVE the story please update!!! |
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| greys5824 | Aug 10 2008, 10:05 PM Post #6 |
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LOVE THE STORY!!!! :bigx: |
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| MerDerGreysFan24 | Aug 10 2008, 10:48 PM Post #7 |
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Meredith soon arrived at Seattle Grace, and entered through the glass doors and headed for the locker-room to get ready for the day. If she were late for rounds, Bailey would stick her in the pit. Meredith sat on the bench in front of her locker. She was trying to figure out why she was feeling so drained lately it had started a few weeks ago after a long day at the hospital when she had gotten home that night her body felt like it was being weighted down by a weight vest. She knew that it could not be the stomach flu because it was not flu season. She just did not know what it could be. She searched her head. She asked people. She just could not think of any logical reason why she was sick. As she was headed to the Chef’s office as she promised Derek it hit her. Could she be pregnant? Could she be pregnant? She kept asking herself repeatedly if that was a possibility. She could not be pregnant she promised Derek that they would wait until they are married to have sex again. However, with her luck fate was not on her side. Meredith rushed into the chief’s office... "Meredith, hold on one second and I will be with you. I have to finish up this file." "I think that I need a pregnancy test." "What?" Meredith stopped with a wide-eyed look on her face and tried to process what she had just said to the man that was basically her father. Richard waited for her to regain her bearing and let her speak. “I think I need a pregnancy test.” "You think that you are pregnant?" "Yeah. I just really am confused because Derek and I had not sleep together since we talked about not having sex until we are married. “Meredith I wouldn’t panic until we know for sure ok?” “Okay” “I’ll run down to the pharmacy and get the test and to be safe I’ll run a blood test as well.” I just can't think of possible way that I can be." "Meredith it will be ok. We do not even know yet if you are. So sit down and calm down" “Do you want me to page Derek?” “No, it will be fine I don’t want to worry him before I have too” The Chief walked out of his office and to the pharmacy to get the test and came back…To Meredith curled up on the sofa with tears in her eyes and trail of dried tears on her cheeks. She could not think of anyway. Any possible way that this was true. That she was pregnant. That she was expecting a baby. Richard’s heart broke for his “daughter” but the sooner they knew the truth it would be easier to deal with. The test beeped...Meredith’s head popped up. Her whole body began to shake and she stated to hyperventilate. “I can’t…I just can’t” "Meredith we have to know...you have to know...Derek has to know...” Meredith was in her own world Richard’s words did not break her from her trance. Finally she spoke. “Can you look for me please?” Richard looks over at the test. He picks the test up and looks at it... he was not shocked at the results he was happy for them both. “Meredith it’s positive.” Meredith's world seems to crash around her. She cannot be pregnant but fate has dealt her this blow. “Richard Derek can’t know not yet.” “Isn’t this supposed to a great thing...A blessing...?” “Richard please he can’t know. He would leave me and that can’t happen please” |
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| MerDerGreysFan24 | Aug 13 2008, 12:07 AM Post #8 |
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Chapter 4 Richard could not figure out why Meredith was so upset about this. He figured she is scared but that she would not want to tell Derek. “Meredith why are you so upset over this?" “Because it might not be his baby” Richards’s mouth was wide open. He was not sure if he heard what she said correctly. “It was one stupid night it happened Derek proposed the first time and I said no because I wasn’t ready and he went off to have an affair with that nurse Rose. I was upset so I went to Joe’s because I thought I had finally lost the love of my life for the last time. Well Mark was there and he saw me and realized I was upset and came over to me we started talking and he told me that he had tried and that he had rejected by Addison once again. Therefore, we were dealing with our misery together and got drunk and slept with each other. “ "Hold on. Hold on. You Meredith Grey slept with Mark Sloan. You slept with the man that everyone called the Manwhore of Seattle Grace Hospital? In addition, don’t you remember the aftermath of what happened with Mark and Derek when Mark slept with Addie? I mean at least I thought that you would have some common sense." “I know it was stupid and now my life is ruin. Therefore, I do not get my happy ending. It was not as if I thought I would anyway.” Then a sob burst from her body and the chief was at a lost on how to comfort her Richard slowly walked over to Meredith. He sat down slowly... "Uh... It is going to be ok Meredith. I am sure Derek will understand." “Very unlikely he’ll see it as a betrayal I mean I did the same thing Addison with the same man no less there is no way Derek can come back from that twice.” “I just cannot understand why you would do something like that. You knew that Derek didn't act all that well towards Addie when he found out about her and Mark." “That’s why he can’t know” “But isn’t honesty the best thing in a relationship?" “How do I tell him that I did the worst thing possible?” “Mer I can’t answer that for you but I can tell you I’ll be here to support you in whatever you decide” “Thank You” “No thanks necessary you know I think of you as my daughter” “I love you for that” I have always loved you. No matter what that will never change!" Meredith gave him a quick hug and got up and left his office. As she walked, she was in a trance...As if she was not there in her body. It was as if she was a zombie. She walked not knowing into the pit. She walked right past Mark who was trying to get her attention. Mark looked at her as she passed him... Mark then ran up to her... "Meredith. Meredith...” Meredith stops walking... "Meredith are you ok?" Meredith stared into space. "Meredith...” Mark waved his hand in front of her face. “Uh…. Mark…” “Yeah I said are you ok?” “I’m fine thanks” Mark knew not to believe her but he did not want to say anything in front of the crowed pit. "Meredith I know something is wrong so come on we are going to go somewhere and talk" Mark reached out and touched her arm... "DON'T TOUCH ME!” "Meredith what is wrong?" "DO NOT TOUCH ME!" Mark took a step back... He had no clue why Meredith was acting like this. He never saw her this upset over anything. In addition, he really did not want to see her upset... |
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| Inlovewithmerder | Aug 13 2008, 09:30 PM Post #9 |
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Love the fic please update soon!!!! |
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| indigoscrubs | Aug 28 2008, 05:15 AM Post #10 |
getting hot and steamy with MCDREAMY !!
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UH OH .... PLEASE DONT LET IT BE MARKS update soon plese 
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 Der: I'm not gonna get down on one knee, I'm not gonna ask a question. I love you Meredith Grey, and I wanna spend the rest of my life, with you. Mer: And I wanna spend the rest of my life with you ( whole proposal speech wouldnt fit damn it ) | |
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| Deleted User | Sep 4 2008, 04:54 PM Post #11 |
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| MerDerGreysFan24 | Sep 15 2008, 04:16 PM Post #12 |
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Unbroken Chapter 5 Meredith turned and kept walking down the hallway and Mark followed her. She looked back and saw Mark following her. She turns around. “Please go I can’t deal with you right now…Please just go” “Not until you tell me what’s got you so upset” “I… I can’t” "Why? Why can’t you tell me what is wrong Meredith?" “Because it will change our lives and ruin my life with Derek” What could possibility do that? Come on its not like you are pregnant with my baby...” “Actually I am” “What? .... How is that possible?” "Well let’s see we slept together and now here I am pregnant." When Meredith’s words hit Mark’s brain he stepped back and collapsed against the wall and let out a breath he did not know he was holding and put his face in his hands. "You’re serious? You're pregnant?" "Yes Mark! I am" “Mer… I’m so sorry I never meant for this to happen” “Well we made a mistake and it did.” “What are you going to do?” “I’m not sure yet it’s barely sunk in.” "I know one thing. You have to tell Derek...This is seriously going to ruin our friendship." “I know that and I’ll never get to be happy with the love of my life. All because of one drunken mistake” "I am not going to let you see it as a mistake though. We, all of us, Derek, Addie, Me and you are going to care for this baby and give it all the love we can give them." At that moment, Meredith started crying and Mark could not stand seeing her in so much pain so he got up and pulled her into a hug just as Derek turned the corner to see them embrace. Derek slowly walked over to them. "What the heck did I just walk in on?" Mark released his hold on Meredith at the sound of his voice and lifted Meredith’s chin so that they were eye level. “I’m going to go so that you two can talk” Meredith did not say a word she just slowly nodded. Mark turned and left and Meredith slowly turned and faced Derek. “I think that we need to talk" Derek did not say a word he just waited for her to speak. She thought it would be better to just came right out and say it. “Derek I’m pregnant and Mark’s the father” Derek was stunned he really did not see that coming. “Uh… wow” “Derek I will understand if this is the end of us I really will” "I can’t believe this." “When did you sleep with him we’ve been back together for eight months? "Um... before we got back together or course." “I want to know when Meredith” “While you were dating that nurse Rose” "You slept with him while I was dating Rose?" “Yes look I know it was stupid and I was hurt I felt as if my perfect life was being taken away” "Meredith that is bull. I know that you always had a thing for him." “What… Derek no it was one drunken night we were both hurt by the people we love” "I don't believe you." “Well I’m sorry but it’s the truth” "So that's why you did it, seriously?" “I wish I could take it back I really do but, I can’t” “You’re right you can’t” "Please Derek; you can’t be mad at something that was a mistake to begin with." “Meredith you betrayed me and lied to me for months” “I’m so sorry” “I know you are but that doesn’t changed that it happen and now you’re pregnant with a baby that’s not ours and that’s what truly hurts me.” "You can still be apart of its life. It doesn’t have to be ours for you to love it." “Maybe in time but, not right now” "What! You can’t do that!" Just then, Derek’s pager sounded and he looked down as it flashed 911 to the pit. He was grateful to put a stop to this conversation for the moment. “I got to go” He turned a left without even saying I love you. Meredith looked at him rushing off and did not believe the events that just occurred... The weight of everything that had happen that day had finally caught up with her and she collapsed in a heap and began to sob. |
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| indigoscrubs | Sep 15 2008, 10:34 PM Post #13 |
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getting hot and steamy with MCDREAMY !!
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,....PLEASE FIX THIS PLEASE
 me need happy merder
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Der: I'm not gonna get down on one knee, I'm not gonna ask a question. I love you Meredith Grey, and I wanna spend the rest of my life, with you. Mer: And I wanna spend the rest of my life with you ( whole proposal speech wouldnt fit damn it ) | |
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