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| -ACHE-; My shounen-ai. Be warned: Its Graphic. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 26 2006, 10:27 PM (100 Views) | |
| Roan | Sep 26 2006, 10:27 PM Post #1 |
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Ok, most of you on this forum are probably already familiar with this here story of mine, but for those who aren't: This is a shounen-ai, AKA Boy's Love story. Its about homosexual men and their relationships, both emotional and sexual. If you aren't interested in something like this, don't read it. Leave this topic now. If you do want to read it, the first 5 "Strokes" can be read here: http://ache.t35.com The reason I'm posting this topic now is because I just finished writing the newest stroke, Stroke 6: "Connection". I'll be typing it up and adding it to the site sometime this week. So yeah, go read and let me know what you think! |
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| Roan | Sep 28 2006, 10:34 PM Post #2 |
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/Double Post. Stroke 6, "Connection", is now complete and online. If you're too lazy, here's the link: http://ache.t35.com/connection.php I think a lot of you are going to be surprised by this chapter and the direction I took it in. Please let me know if you think its too much, too drastic for the plot, etc. Thanks!
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| Lou | Sep 28 2006, 10:58 PM Post #3 |
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Roan = love. Man love to be exact.
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| Roan | Sep 29 2006, 07:27 PM Post #4 |
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![]() Thanks. Man love is the best kind of love there is. |
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| Michael | Sep 29 2006, 07:39 PM Post #5 |
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I need to read stroke 3 and up. This stuff is a total boner kill. |
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| Lou | Oct 18 2006, 12:25 AM Post #6 |
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Roan, any more mansecks filled goodness coming soon?(lawlz, mansecks and coming in the same sentence) |
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| Roan | Oct 18 2006, 05:44 AM Post #7 |
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Actually, I just started writing a new chapter a few days ago. I only have a few paragraphs so far, but I'll be sure to let you guys know when its done. I'm glad people are interested. Makes me feel like what I'm doing is worthwhile. Thanks.
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| Roan | Jan 7 2007, 11:04 PM Post #8 |
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Ok, big news here. lol I've decided to scrap everything I've written in this story so far and start on a re-write. I'm still going to be using the same characters and relatively same situation and confilcit, but I'm just going to try to focus more on the emotional side of the story rather than the sexual side. I feel like focusing on the sex makes me come across as a sleazy writer and I don't want to be seen that way. I want to prove that I am capable of writing a compelling story. So, with that I'd like to announce that I have started writing the first chapter in the re-write, I'm about 5 notebook pages (Front and back) in, and I think a lot of you who were interested in the first version will be shocked at just how much I'm changing this. Of course, there will still be the sexual element to the story, but it just won't be hogging so much of the limelight. I want to give Kenichi, Takaguchi and their relationship a real sense of character, something that people can relate to even if they don't understand the love that is there. So yeah, I'll be sure to post here when I have the first chapter up, which should be in the next few days. |
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| Roan | Jan 20 2007, 12:40 AM Post #9 |
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lol Triple post. BUT THIS IS BIG NEWS. ![]() So yeah. For those interested, I've finished the first chapter in the re-write of my story, "Ache". You can view online here: Read Online Or you can download the .txt file here: (Viewable in Notepad. Right Click -> Save As.) RIGHT CLICK -> SAVE AS HERE And as always, I'd love to hear what you all think.
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| Lou | Jan 21 2007, 09:56 PM Post #10 |
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*does YES! arm movement" Mansecks! |
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| flashfox | Feb 11 2007, 09:59 PM Post #11 |
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Not sure if you deliberately made the opening choppy, but it is. The wording doesn't flow, it's very broken and fractured. An it also goes to the other extreme as well. Someomes you need to end sentences, and they keep going. you have some good stretches at times, i'll goo into this stuff in depth tommorow |
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