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| Can someone look at my proposal? | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 5 2009, 11:06 AM (108 Views) | |
| dolmansaxlil | Apr 5 2009, 11:06 AM Post #1 |
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HOLY CARP!!!
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This is for my Special Education II course. The assignment was to create a proposal for a gifted ed program that would meet three times per year, but enable students to collaborate between sessions through another means. It's already longer than asked for so adding a lot more detail is probably out of the question. I just need feedback. Formatting is a little off of what I have in the original document, but close enough.https://buzzword.acrobat.com/#d=fU14hfmqJkCDmv9XscAjMA |
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| JoeB | Apr 5 2009, 11:22 AM Post #2 |
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Senior Carp
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Two small things. First, the paragraphs on the first page are neither indented nor double-spaced. Second, you mention congregated groups and congregated groupings. Is there a difference? |
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| dolmansaxlil | Apr 5 2009, 11:47 AM Post #3 |
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The formatting is a bit messed up in the transfer to Buzzword. In my original document, they're double spaced. There isn't a difference between the two terms, and they're often used interchangeably. However, I'll switch it for consistency's sake. |
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| Jolly | Apr 5 2009, 04:54 PM Post #4 |
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Geaux Tigers!
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Darn....I thought Soakie-baby had sprung for the ring... |
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so adding a lot more detail is probably out of the question. I just need feedback. Formatting is a little off of what I have in the original document, but close enough.




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