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| A piece by me; Poetry not piano | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 9 2006, 07:42 PM (228 Views) | |
| schindler | Mar 9 2006, 07:42 PM Post #1 |
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Fulla-Carp
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I wasn't going to post this, but someone insisted that I should so. . . here's a poem I wrote on a recent trip to Mexico City. Sidewalks Passerby Out of your many faces Memories flash Now at days end After many feet have passed With worn shoe-soles And raised voices mingled Holding back and hindering An old silence Passerby Those of you I remember With thoughts And long held dreams Written on your foreheads On your throats and Rosy lips Mouthing emptiness The passerby Has passed on by me Any comments, critiques or suggestions welcome. Schindler |
| We're all mad here! | |
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| CrashTest | Mar 9 2006, 07:52 PM Post #2 |
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Pisa-Carp
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Very nice, I could feel the atmosphere around me as I read it! |
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| justme | Mar 9 2006, 08:09 PM Post #3 |
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HOLY CARP!!!
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very very nice
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"Men sway more towards hussies." G-D3 | |
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| Horace | Mar 9 2006, 08:17 PM Post #4 |
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HOLY CARP!!!
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I liked it! |
| As a good person, I implore you to do as I, a good person, do. Be good. Do NOT be bad. If you see bad, end bad. End it in yourself, and end it in others. By any means necessary, the good must conquer the bad. Good people know this. Do you know this? Are you good? | |
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| apple | Mar 9 2006, 08:19 PM Post #5 |
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one of the angels
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save all poetry. very nice |
| it behooves me to behold | |
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| JBryan | Mar 9 2006, 08:19 PM Post #6 |
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I am the grey one
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Any references to bare breasts you can work in are always helpful to lengthening attention span but otherwise, absolutely brilliant. |
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"Any man who would make an X rated movie should be forced to take his daughter to see it". - John Wayne There is a line we cross when we go from "I will believe it when I see it" to "I will see it when I believe it". Henry II: I marvel at you after all these years. Still like a democratic drawbridge: going down for everybody. Eleanor: At my age there's not much traffic anymore. From The Lion in Winter. | |
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| schindler | Mar 9 2006, 08:23 PM Post #7 |
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Fulla-Carp
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:lol: Thanks. I think. |
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| kentcouncil | Mar 10 2006, 06:14 AM Post #8 |
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Fulla-Carp
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It was a confusion of ideas between him and one of the lions he was hunting in Kenya that had caused A. B. Spottsworth to make the obituary column. He thought the lion was dead, and the lion thought it wasn't. - P.G. Wodehouse | |
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| Aqua Letifer | Mar 10 2006, 07:19 AM Post #9 |
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ZOOOOOM!
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I liked it! JB's got something goin' about the boobs thing, though. :lol: |
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| JBryan | Mar 10 2006, 07:22 AM Post #10 |
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I am the grey one
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I am already up to 3200 bucks playing the sluts this morning. http://www.vissor.com/interactive/assets/slut.swf |
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"Any man who would make an X rated movie should be forced to take his daughter to see it". - John Wayne There is a line we cross when we go from "I will believe it when I see it" to "I will see it when I believe it". Henry II: I marvel at you after all these years. Still like a democratic drawbridge: going down for everybody. Eleanor: At my age there's not much traffic anymore. From The Lion in Winter. | |
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