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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 6 2008, 03:23 PM (764 Views) | |
| Lathaon | Jan 6 2008, 03:23 PM Post #1 |
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[Captain Jarlson and Agent Two entering Dwarac.] ((Ariakas, how should I do this?)) |
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| Ariakas | Jan 6 2008, 03:27 PM Post #2 |
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((How should I know, this is entirely your plot. Of course it's a reaction to me grabbing Endral, but this is your land, your characters and your plot
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| Lathaon | Jan 6 2008, 03:28 PM Post #3 |
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((Yes, but it's your character I'm supposed to be finding, right?)) |
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| Ariakas | Jan 6 2008, 03:31 PM Post #4 |
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((No... you should be finding Eben, or whoever else high-ranking in Dwarfish society in Weissland who would agree to give you aid My character is not that much high-ranking at all, I'm thinking of something like an advisor or something.... unless that sounds too familiar ))
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| Lathaon | Jan 6 2008, 03:46 PM Post #5 |
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"So we're here. Any idea who's in charge around here?" Jarlson asked. "Eben. He might not be here, but I at least know where to look," the agent answered. "Follow me." The two of them eventually came to a large, important-looking building. There were guards at the doors. The agent stopped and turned to Jarlson. "You do the talking for now. If you can't get us past the guards that way, I will sneak in." The captain nodded and approached the guards. "You there. Who is in charge here?" |
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| Ariakas | Jan 10 2008, 09:52 PM Post #6 |
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((Okay, I will play. I guess the guards are all dwarfs? ))
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| Lathaon | Jan 13 2008, 01:14 AM Post #7 |
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((Yes. Did you want to control them, or do you want to wait until I get in there?)) |
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| Ariakas | Jan 13 2008, 01:29 AM Post #8 |
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((Here's your answer..
))Two of the five dwarfs looked to each other, looked to the two men ((or elves?)) before one of them opened the reinforced iron door slightly and called inside. Soon they were joined by another dwarf, more heavily armored and unusually tall for a dwarf. His beard was grey, and the skin in his face thick. He stood proudly as he addressed the two other. "What is it?" |
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| Lathaon | Jan 13 2008, 01:42 AM Post #9 |
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((Jarlson is human. Not sure about the agent though.)) "We are looking for allies," he said. "I am captain Jarlson, and this is my lieutenant." The agent nodded. ((Ariakas, please bump my other topic ))
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| Ariakas | Jan 13 2008, 01:43 AM Post #10 |
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"Allies?" the dwarf grunted at this. "What do you mean?" |
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| Lathaon | Jan 13 2008, 02:04 AM Post #11 |
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"We have come to ask for aid. The city of Endral has fallen and we do not have the numbers to restore the government with our forces alone." |
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| Ariakas | Jan 13 2008, 02:09 AM Post #12 |
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The dwarf nodded. "My name is Karte Angrimsson, I'm the lord lieutenant of the military of Dwarac and advisor to Lord Halder of the city." He gestured towards the door, "Please follow me so we may speak more in private. The two men ((I say it's both men)) followed Karte through the doors into the building. He led them through numerous stone halls, and down a few stairs until they reached a small room. It where only five chairs and a table there though three doors led to the room. Longs shafts crafted from the ground led the sunlight from above down into the room. The dwarf stood by the table and looked at the men, "Now, who sent you? You don't wear the uniform of the Army of Weissland." |
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| Lathaon | Jan 13 2008, 02:13 AM Post #13 |
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"You are correct," Jarlson said. "I was sent by Zach Amakiir, who in turn received orders from Elandir Daenthai and Mordain Thaendil." |
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| Ariakas | Jan 13 2008, 02:22 AM Post #14 |
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((Does people in Weissland know who Elandir is?)) |
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| Lathaon | Jan 13 2008, 02:30 AM Post #15 |
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((Some. I reckon most people will know who Mordain is, a few will know who Elandir is, and hardly anyone will know who Zach is. It's up to you whether or not Karte has heard of him and/or knows about him.)) |
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| Ariakas | Jan 13 2008, 02:34 AM Post #16 |
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((You need to make Elandir's position in Weissland more clear, it's beginning to irritate me ))Karte frowned, "And what is the sign of it then?" |
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| Lathaon | Jan 13 2008, 11:11 PM Post #17 |
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((Firstly, I don't understand what you said there.
Secondly, it is IMO as clear as it needs to be. Elandir works for Lathaon. That's pretty much all there is to it, apart from that he has a bunch of people working for him too. He believes that good is more important/should not be restricted by laws. He is paid in small amounts as standard and then receives rewards on top of that when he does well - which he usually does.))
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| Ariakas | Jan 13 2008, 11:36 PM Post #18 |
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((Yeah, he works for Lathaon. But what kind of work? Does he have the ability to order other people around, and if why, and if not why not? He's a mercenary, but for how long and for what payment? Is there a personal releationship? Does other people trust him? If they do, why? If not, why? Now I'm going with Karte not knowing who Elandir is, which makes your character loose credibility but I have no reason for doing so due to lack of info on Elandir)) Karte looked at the confused faces of the two opposing him, "The sign. The proof that shows that you truly are sent by Mordain Thaendil." |
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| Lathaon | Jan 13 2008, 11:54 PM Post #19 |
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"Ah," Jarlson said. "We have no such sign. I told you earlier that we were sent by Zach Amakiir, not directly by Mordain." ((He does whatever he thinks is best. The work varies, but Lathaon trusts Elandir's judgement. He can order his own men around, but not the general population. Well, actually he can order anyone around but only his own men are obliged to obey. He is a friend of Lathaon and had the beginnings of a friendship with Laki Greystaff as well. Lathaon is pretty much the only one outside Elandir's organisation who really trusts him. Generally, people who know of him do not trust him either because they know of his past, they don't know enough about him, or they question his motives. Elandir is sort of like a permanent mercenary because he has nobody else to turn to without going into hiding.)) |
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| Ariakas | Jan 13 2008, 11:58 PM Post #20 |
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((Create a thread where you explain that in a little bit more detail? What do you mean they don't trust him because they only know the past for example?)) The eyebrows of Karte went up and he looked surprised, "You mean you come here, asking for aid but can't prove who you really are?" ((Just make up something which proves who you are, coming here without a sign was kinda weird)) |
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))
I guess the guards are all dwarfs? ))
Secondly, it is IMO as clear as it needs to be. Elandir works for Lathaon. That's pretty much all there is to it, apart from that he has a bunch of people working for him too. He believes that good is more important/should not be restricted by laws. He is paid in small amounts as standard and then receives rewards on top of that when he does well - which he usually does.))
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