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Jimmydalad catches up on Version 6 and other things
Topic Started: Sep 4 2017, 09:37 AM (514 Views)
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Greetings and salutations SOTF!

So I disappeared for all of V6, so I thought what better way of catching up on what I missed than people holding me to reading and critiquing their characters? My critiques will probably focus upon things that I liked about your character, what themes seem to be prevalent in their narrative and things that I may not have necessarily liked too. I'd prefer to read things from Version 6, Version 5 and some of the more recent minis. Also, the kids should preferably be dead. With that in mind, here are some rules about asking for critiques:

1. One child per handler. Once I finish critiquing your first character, you are free to put another into the queue.
2. Only nominate your own characters. I think this one should be fairly obvious.
3. Limit of 10 characters per queue. As much as I'd love to read everyone, there are a lot of kids and only one me.
4. Tell me if pregame is necessary to read or not.

With that in mind, I'm ready for an analysis of Version 6 (and other versions should they be requested)!

Current Queue

Serena Waters - Inge
Jewel Evans - MurderWeasel
Olivia Fischer - Maraoone
Nate Turner - Slamexo
Alessio Rigano - RedAstaire
Kimiko Kao - Deamon
Cass Prince - dmboogie
Jeremy Fraiser - Yugikun
Jordan Green - Randomness

Completed Critiques

Arthur Bernstein - CrossbowPig
Edited by jimmydalad, Sep 6 2017, 03:15 PM.
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Hey, maybe you could give Arthur Bernstein a shot? I'd prefer if you read his memory thread, while Meanwhile is optional as I'm not totally done there yet. He runs into quite a few major players, so I think he should whet your appetite at least a little for what is to come.
~~~~~ "We were wrecks before we crashed into each other."

NOW: V7

SOON: V7

DEAD: V6

MAYBE: V?
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Would you kindly read Serena Waters?
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Heya, Jimmy! Since you said recent Minis, would you be up for giving Jewel Evans from TV2 a shot?
V7:
Juliette Sargent drawn by Mimi and Ryuki
Alton Gerow drawn by Mimi
Lavender Ripley drawn by Mimi
Phillip Olivares drawn by Ryuki
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I've added everyone onto the list! Feel free to continue submissions until we reach 10!
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Heyyyyy, could you give Olivia Fischer a read?
Edited by Maraoone, Sep 4 2017, 12:33 PM.
V6 Characters:
G062 - Olivia Fischer prayed a thousand prayers in Ye Not [37/107]
Previous Threads: Sæglópur - Until all our yesterdays are lighted fools... - the way to dusty death - a concrete cave - I'd Say That I've Had Worse Days, but Then I'd Be Lying - Get Me Away From Here, I'm Dying - Until Then, You Are Free - Cast in the Name of God
Memories: Sometimes when we reach for the stars...
Weapon: Lobotomy pick.

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"Mara was a mistake." - Cicada, 2017
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Nate Turner por favor? (Pregame optional but knock yourself out)
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Hey look I have a relationship thread

V6 Amigos - Spoilers!

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I'd appreciate an analysis of Alessio Rigano!
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You poor bastard.

EDIT: Here.
Edited by NotAFlyingToy, Sep 4 2017, 01:09 PM.
A list of the dying, a list of the damned.

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lol no remorse

Hearing more thoughts on Kimiko Kao would be wonderful.
Forrest Quin - At the Zoo
Bret Carter - On a date
Aliya Kimia Nemati - In Training
Arizona - Practicing
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I'd appreciate a read of Cass Prince!

pregame is totes skippable
a tribute for the dead and dying

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Welp, that's more for the queue! Only two spaces left till the first batch is finished.
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maybe if you're lucky the random avatar will sync up to the character you're reading right now
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Jeremy Frasier, if you may. Will specify some pregame threads later.
In a V7 near you!
Coming to a V7 near you!
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Would you mind reading Jordan Green? His pregame is skippable.
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And that makes 10! Submissions are closed for now as I begin to work on hashing out critiques!
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