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Audrey Reyes; Production Value
Topic Started: Jul 10 2015, 12:28 AM (502 Views)
Namira
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Hi Kervin. I'd like a bit more detail on Audrey's relationship with her parents, as there isn't much beyond her feelings about moving around - there are a few places where you kind of touch on it but don't go into greater depth that could use expanding. Plenty of Catholics don't have any problem with LGBT people, for instance, so why is she particularly worried about her parents' views?

Also, how did they react to her attempting to change her own accent? This has some serious implications regarding how she feels about her own racial identity and I think it needs further exploration.
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