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Yugi's critique thread????; BECAUSE SURE WHY NOT
Topic Started: Mar 19 2015, 12:57 AM (1,298 Views)
Yugikun
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maybe if you're lucky the random avatar will sync up to the character you're reading right now
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So hey

I’m going to update my ranking topic soon, but something that I know was mentioned was the lack of SOTF characters (the only one being nominated being Kimberly). I also want to read more SOTF in general, seeing as the only version I’ve been able to read in detail is V3 and even then it was mostly inactives. So, I decided to make this thread.

You guys give me characters for me to read, and I’ll read/critique them when I’m done. I’m fine with any version, providing it’s a character who I haven’t already posted thoughts of on the wiki or is already on the queue/Kimberly. One nomination per handler, only kids who are either dead or have a completed story, and no nominating characters who aren’t yours. If you want to see what my critiques will be like, check these pages on the wiki.

I’ll start with a queue of 12, since that seems like a good number to start with.

queue
Edited by Yugikun, Mar 20 2015, 12:01 AM.
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Let's see, let's see...

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Thanks so much for offering your time like this, sir.

If you don't mind, I'd really appreciate feedback on Ian Williams. All the relevant links are in my sig. :)
Constructive criticism is always welcome! Feel free to send me a PM if you have any pointers or feedback you'd like to share!

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Hey, Yugi! Cool to see a new critique thread.

I'll toss this guy your way. Feel free to move him to the very back of the queue and don't be worried at all about offending me if you can't fit him onto your plate - he's got a lot of miles on him.

Thanks!
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Cooould I get your thoughts on Cathryn Bailey pleeeease?
Edited by Maraoone, Mar 19 2015, 06:09 AM.
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Maraoone
Mar 19 2015, 06:01 AM
Cooould I get your thoughts on Cathryn Bailey pleeeease?
I'm going to move her back to the end of the queue due to her currently still alive status, but sure?
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Bella Bianchi, please, since you've threaded with her and all.

Ah shoot, read that it's only dead kids. I'm sleepy. Feel free to put her on the back of the queue, same as Cathryn, or ignore my silliness.. X_X
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Maraoone
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yes thomas why
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OH IT'S ONLY DEAD KIDS. Really sorry for that, didn't read properly. Just switch her out for Juhan Levandi please. His link is in my signature under 'V5 Characters'
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G062 - Olivia Fischer prayed a thousand prayers in Ye Not [37/107]
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