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Three sentences about your kid: Critique experiment.; Not at all professional.
Topic Started: Aug 11 2014, 08:56 PM (10,103 Views)
NotAFlyingToy
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the bass and the tweeters make the speakers go to war
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Give me a kid of yours to do. I read the first thread and the last thread, give you my opinion in three sentences or less.

No real queue, can probably churn them out really fast, I will be blunt.

Go!

EDIT: Only dead kids.
EDIT 2: Will vary in length of sentence. I tend to cheat if I have more to say by utilizing dashes. No guarantees that the sentences will be grammatically correct, Toben.
EDIT 3: Please make sure that you ask for a critique of your kid, not someone else's kid.
Edited by NotAFlyingToy, Aug 12 2014, 04:35 PM.
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SansaSaver
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COOL THIS IS COOL I LIKE IT YOU’RE COOL

un critique de Will, s’il vous plaît :3
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Dorothea Rodriguez
Ariana Simpson


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MurderWeasel
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You've been counting stars, now you're counting on me
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This sounds like a really cool idea!

Could you give Adam Morgan a look, please? Thanks!
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Juliette Sargent drawn by Mimi and Ryuki
Alton Gerow drawn by Mimi
Lavender Ripley drawn by Mimi
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Espi
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Beep Beep
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Gwen O'Connor if you please <3
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Emprexx Plush
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Paige/EP/Plush, they/them pronouns pls thanks :3
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This is a neat thing. I like this thing.

Garrett Wilde, if you would!
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Grim Wolf
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The Very Best
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Glad to take you up on this.

Jumping over to V4: Mirabelle Nesa.
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Jason Meyers and/or Veronica McDonald?
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Polibyss
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You like what you see?
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Garrett Cobbler please
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MrMissMrs Random
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Shut up I'm in the robot
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Rosemary Michaels if you would like. :)
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Cassandra Black.
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Un-Persona
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Throwing R.J. in this thingybobber.
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MK Kilmarnock
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Hate, hate, HATE!!!
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You didn't specify version.

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VysePresident
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Long-winded, meticulous, & thoughtful. Mostly long-winded though.
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Ian Williams, if you would. :)
Constructive criticism is always welcome! Feel free to send me a PM if you have any pointers or feedback you'd like to share!

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Character #2: Boy #66 Chase Rodriguez - Adopted from Pippin.
Designated Weapon: Silver Pill Box Containing Three Cyanide Capsules

Past - None
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NotAFlyingToy
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the bass and the tweeters make the speakers go to war
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Will Brackenrig: Nice early thread with a good introduction. Clusterfuck death thread that didn't really stand out to me as anything. I suspect Sansa of having a broken gentle kid fetish.
A list of the dying, a list of the damned.

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NotAFlyingToy
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the bass and the tweeters make the speakers go to war
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Gwen O'Connor: Seemed very solid early on. Definitely a good addition to Group Naptime. The poetry death still baffles me.
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