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Espi Reads: V5; Is this a terrible idea I THINK SO YES
Topic Started: Nov 19 2013, 07:20 PM (2,015 Views)
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Who is this sassy lost child
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Hrm, if you're open again, would you mind critiquing Natali Greer?
"Art enriches the community, Steve, no less than a pulsing fire hose, or a fireman beating down a blazing door. So what if we're drawing a nude man? So what if all we ever draw is a nude man, or the same nude man over and over in all sorts of provocative positions? Context, not content! Process, not subject! Don't be so gauche, Steve, it's beneath you."
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party wurmple never sleeps. only dances.
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Given that this filled up instantaneously last time, gonna sneak a request in as soon as possible :P
I'd love to see your critique of Owen Kay!
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*insert dance song here*
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If you could critique Jack McDonald, that'd be nice.
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Jack McDonald is a SELF-INSERT YAY.
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Badb
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Trained for combat by a cabal of hacktivists.
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critique zoe leverett thank you
V5:
B035 - Ray Gilbert - DECEASED - Guy Fawkes Mask - Too Far Gone
G029 - Zoe Leverett - DECEASED - Machete - To Really Be Alone, To Pick At All the Bones
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[18:10] <Laurels> WWJD? Fuck corpses, apparently

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[15:16] <Naft> My college once nearly burned down because someone tried to make a bong out of dollar bills and the fire alarm didn't work
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Long-winded, meticulous, & thoughtful. Mostly long-winded though.
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Ian Williams, please?
Constructive criticism is always welcome! Feel free to send me a PM if you have any pointers or feedback you'd like to share!

Character #1: Boy #37 Ian Williams - Now with 55% less self-insert.
Designated Weapon: Polaroid Instant Camera With Film (Enough for 8 photographs)

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Pregame - None
Island - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | (Final Thread - Glass
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Character #2: Boy #66 Chase Rodriguez - Adopted from Pippin.
Designated Weapon: Silver Pill Box Containing Three Cyanide Capsules

Past - None
Pregame - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | (Last seen in - Diversions)
Island - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | (Final Thread - Drawing to an End)



(Relationships Planning Thread #Pi)
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Espi
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Beep Beep
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Queue's closed.
V5: Cut Short


V6: Broken Down


V7: Unprepared
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Espi
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Natali was short and sweet. I think her story did what Zarina aimed for with her; she had a nice, quiet story and a nice, quiet death. She made a good trio with Adam and Maynard, balancing the three out quite nicely. A pretty good story overall, if too brief to really be much more than pleasant.

Owen will probably take a while, sorry for the delays.
V5: Cut Short


V6: Broken Down


V7: Unprepared
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