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| Topic Started: Jan 20 2012, 11:08 AM (799 Views) | |
| umop-ap!sdn | Jan 20 2012, 11:08 AM Post #1 |
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Name: Joey Polpetta Gender: Male Age: 18 Grade: 12 School: Aurora High Hobbies: Weightlifting, football, cooking, eating, and intercourse. Appearance: Joey is 5'6" 240 pounds. He has a square face with a strong jawline. His face is always stubbled with hair, and he'll have a beard if he doesn't shave every morning. He is very strong, but his muscles are masked by a big round belly, which juts out from under his strong chest. Joey is full Italian, olive skin, dark eyes, jet black hair. He keeps his hair spiked up with plenty of gel. He walks with his chest puffed out, shoulders back, and a slight waddle. Biography: Joey grew up in a very Italian family. His parents are very permissive, and he is very independent. He's close with his mother, who babied him as a child. She is an amazing cook, and is still trying to break the habit of pinching his cheeks. His father is also very proud of him, but still recognizes his limits. Joey's mom has taught him the basics of cooking, and his genetics have taught him the basics of overeating. Coming from a permissive, low expectation family, Joey is incredibly laid back. He doesn't get stressed about school, doesn't fight with his parents, and stays away from drama. He's always calm, sometimes to the annoyance of more anxious people. Joey doesn't expect people to expect things from him, and lazily wonders through life, perfectly content with joining the working class, as previous Polpetta generations have. In kindergarten, there was an incident where another child called Joey fat. Joey was, in fact, a rather large little boy, and he responded by pushing the boy down. Even as a child he had confidence in himself and never let himself feel inferior to anybody. When the teacher called home, Joey received praise. Joey is easy going and friendly, but unnecessary jabs at his pride will provoke him. Many kids thought of Joey as a bully, given his stature. But the kids who weren't too intimidated to talk to him found that he was actually a very friendly, playful, goofy guy. Joey is very charismatic, and quickly befriends anybody who gives him a chance. This trend has continued in high school, he quickly becomes chummy with anybody who introduces themselves, but misses out on meeting any of the quieter kids. Joey's family is big into football and wrestling. However, due to their general laziness, their fandom ends at observing. Joey played football his freshman year, and discovered he was too slow and unmotivated. His second year he became the teams water boy. He enjoyed being on the field without having to run and tackle, but also felt like he was a joke. Quitting after the first game, Joey found his current passion in the weight room. He'd been strong beforehand, but now he's dedicated himself to pumping his guns even bigger and bigger. Joey lifts big and eats big. He's gained muscle mass doing so. His body fat masks this, but when he flexes (and Joey loves to flex) his biceps swell up into grapefruits. He is easily amongst the strongest in his grade. His sense of humor an charisma have made him popular with the ladies. He's gone all the way plenty of times, and the girls just think he's the cutest butterball. He often asks, "Why ride the stallion when you can ride the toro?" Toro being Italian for bull. Joey is a bit of a meat head. He's big, he's relatively handsome, he's good with ladies, and a little thick. His favorite class is lunch. He's too lazy for anything aerobic in gym, and doesn't even bother trying in academic classes. He's in sophomore level math, and just barely passing lit. He usually tries to charm his way to a C, but to no avail. Now that Joey's a senior, he's let himself fall even further behind. He's currently on the verge of having to repeat senior year. His aspiration is to manage a sports team, or to be some kind of coach. However, Joey doesn't know how to go about becoming either. Joey has an incredible libido. Joey's doesn't even try to hide when he gawks at girls. He whistles and winks every time a pretty girl walks by. When he meets an attractive girl, he has no boundaries. He tries to see how far he can get her to go. Sometimes it's straight up rebuttal, sometimes it's hot kinky sex. Joey likes to roll the dice, and feels girls who say no are missing out. The girls Joey attracts are always the flirty ones who like male attention. Girls who don't appreciate being stared at think he's a pig. The idea of a woman in charge really gets his blood pumping. He has discovered he in very into BDSM, but not in a hardcore way. He keeps a pair of handcuffs in the back of his truck. One year his very attractive middle school math teacher had him stay after class so she could have a talk to him about his comments. The idea of staying after class with a hot teacher reminded him of a porno he'd watched, and he had to walk to her desk with an erection. Unsure what to say, she simply asked him to leave. Advantages: Joey is among the strongest of his class. He lifts five days a week, and has packed on serious muscles. This also contributes to an intimidation factor. Joey also has a large group of friends, and is always making new ones. Disadvantages: Joey is literally a big target, and also slow. Brute strength isn't going to do him any good if he's being stalked by an assassin. He's also not the brightest kid ever. Having a large group of friends may also bite him in the ass when he has to kill one of his pals. His intimidating frame may also cause scared, trigger happy students to kill before he can greet them. Edited by umop-ap!sdn, Jan 22 2012, 05:25 PM.
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It's kiss or kill and shoot to thrill when you do what you do. I would not die for anyone, but I would kill for you. G009 A contestant, a seeker, an abstainer, a klutz, a case of survivor guilt, a repenter, a star crossed lover, a star crossed lover, a damsel in distress, a hot mess, an inspired dreamer, an unwanted ally, a pawn B034 A scout, a follower, a tracker, a rebel without a cause, a slaughtered guinea pig G017 A victim, a survivor, a team player, a doubter, a hunter, a person, a schemer, an instructor, a nomad, a deserter, a self-appointed savior, a repenter, a failure, a hypocrite's scapegoat Achievements Unlocked!
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| Outfoxd | Jan 20 2012, 11:35 PM Post #2 |
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Hi Loco, I'll be looking at your profile. Italian should be capitalized in Appearance. Don't forget to bold Biography. You probably don't need to say he resembles Wario. The description you provide with that example is descriptive enough. Like to say you'd have a good start, but there's a few things I'd like to see elaborated on. You say he's interested in sports, but do you mean watching them? Whether playing or watching, it'd help if we knew what sports specifically. "He's currently on the verge of having to repeat senior year, but Joey is usually able to tap into his charm and talk his way out of such things." This statement I take a little issue with. Regardless of how charming a student may be, I don't think he'd be able to talk his way out of something hinging on his academic performance. This might be something worth reworking. There are a few grammatical errors that could use fixing. For example, you write "Joey has had a number of relationships, nearly all of them sexual The idea of a woman in charge really gets his blood pumping." Is a run-on. I think you meant to end the sentence at nearly all of them sexual. Just be sure you check thoroughly for grammar and spelling issues the second go around. Thanks for submitting, and I look forward to going over this again! |
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| umop-ap!sdn | Jan 20 2012, 11:56 PM Post #3 |
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Great points. Let's try this again! |
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It's kiss or kill and shoot to thrill when you do what you do. I would not die for anyone, but I would kill for you. G009 A contestant, a seeker, an abstainer, a klutz, a case of survivor guilt, a repenter, a star crossed lover, a star crossed lover, a damsel in distress, a hot mess, an inspired dreamer, an unwanted ally, a pawn B034 A scout, a follower, a tracker, a rebel without a cause, a slaughtered guinea pig G017 A victim, a survivor, a team player, a doubter, a hunter, a person, a schemer, an instructor, a nomad, a deserter, a self-appointed savior, a repenter, a failure, a hypocrite's scapegoat Achievements Unlocked!
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| Outfoxd | Jan 22 2012, 01:47 AM Post #4 |
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One more question I'd like to see answered. You say he's been in many sexual relationships. What are the nature of those? He's only 18, so that might put a limit on it unless he's going through girlfriends at a fast rate. Has he run into trouble because of his sexual appetite? What kinds of girls does he usually attract? |
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| umop-ap!sdn | Jan 22 2012, 12:02 PM Post #5 |
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It's kiss or kill and shoot to thrill when you do what you do. I would not die for anyone, but I would kill for you. G009 A contestant, a seeker, an abstainer, a klutz, a case of survivor guilt, a repenter, a star crossed lover, a star crossed lover, a damsel in distress, a hot mess, an inspired dreamer, an unwanted ally, a pawn B034 A scout, a follower, a tracker, a rebel without a cause, a slaughtered guinea pig G017 A victim, a survivor, a team player, a doubter, a hunter, a person, a schemer, an instructor, a nomad, a deserter, a self-appointed savior, a repenter, a failure, a hypocrite's scapegoat Achievements Unlocked!
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| Outfoxd | Jan 24 2012, 12:08 PM Post #6 |
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