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V5 Concepts Thread; Let 'em loose here
Topic Started: May 8 2011, 04:08 PM (28,092 Views)
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Ok this is my first idea for a character so I hope you all like it

Rose Coburn

She is English-French and is 18 years old. She has long brown hair which flows down her back and is usually tied back in a ponytail, pale white skin and amber eyes. Her height is 5'4 and weighs 120 pounds. She usually wears a pink or white polo shirt, denim skirts and a variety of different coloured tights.

She was born into a very wealthy family and her parents were very protective of her.Despite this she does know how dangerous the world can be.She was also born partially deaf in her left ear thus meaning that she had to wear a hearing aid in that ear. Her parents were also very pushy so she often got As in all subjects which is one of the reasons she gets bullied. She also got bullied because of her height, the fact that her parents are very protective over her, that she is deaf among other things.. But as this has been happening most her life she has got used to it and now they don't bother her and she doesn't respond to their insults.

She is very socially awkward because of the bullying and most of her classmates hate her and are jealous of her but she did find refuge in a student teacher and the two still keep in touch which gave Rose a massive boost of confidence making her a more gentle and forgiving person. When her parents noticed their daughter being down all the time before the student arrived they gave her a violin to play so she could truly express herself and ever since she has had a natural flare for the instrument.

One day Rose hopes to become a heart surgeon therefore she studies human anatomy a lot of her free time as well as trying to make new friends but most people just see her as a daddy's girl and a geek but she does try to not let this get to her although it does still sometimes bring her down. Also because she is socially awkward she can easily get on the wrong side of people although she tries her hardest not to let this happen.




Edited by CCH098, Jan 6 2012, 02:27 PM.
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thanks you two for all your suggestions I know I made a big mistake there so I cleared it more editing on the way soon and any more suggestions will be very helpful thanks again.
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Ok here is V2 of Rose as usual any feedback or comments would be very much appreciated.


She is English-French and is 18 years old. She has long brown hair which flows down her back and is usually tied back in a ponytail, pale white skin and amber eyes. Her height is 5'4 and weighs 120 pounds. She usually wears a pink or white polo shirt, denim skirts and a variety of different coloured tights.

She was born into a very wealthy family and her parents were very protective of her.Despite this she does know how dangerous the world can be.She was also born partially deaf in her left ear thus meaning that she had to wear a hearing aid in that ear. Her parents were also very pushy so she often got As in all subjects which is one of the reasons she gets bullied. She also got bullied because of her height, the fact that her parents are very protective over her, that she is deaf among other things.. But as this has been happening most her life she has got used to it and now they don't bother her and she doesn't respond to their insults.

She is very socially awkward because of the bullying and most of her classmates hate her and are jealous of her but she did find refuge in a student teacher and the two still keep in touch which gave Rose a massive boost of confidence making her a more gentle and forgiving person. When her parents noticed their daughter being down all the time before the student arrived they gave her a violin to play so she could truly express herself and ever since she has had a natural flare for the instrument.

One day Rose hopes to become a heart surgeon therefore she studies human anatomy a lot of her free time as well as trying to make new friends but most people just see her as a daddy's girl and a geek but she does try to not let this get to her although it does still sometimes bring her down. Also because she is socially awkward she can easily get on the wrong side of people although she tries her hardest not to let this happen.
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ok thanks for the feedback I will edit that bit and a few more little tweaks then I should nearly be there so thanks again
Edited by CCH098, Jan 6 2012, 04:19 PM.
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