Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Welcome to Survival of the Fittest, a RPing board loosely based off of Koshun Takami's Battle Royale, with its own unique plot and spin on the 'deadly game'. We've been around quite a while, and are now in our thirteenth year, so don't worry about us going anywhere any time soon!

If you're a newcomer and interested in joining, then please make sure you check out the rules. You may also want to read the FAQ, introduce yourself and stop by the chat to meet some of our members. If you're still not quite sure where to start, then we have a great New Member's Guide with a lot of useful information about getting going. Don't hesitate to PM a member of staff (they have purple usernames) if you have any questions about SOTF and how to get started!

Let the games begin!

Username:   Password:
Add Reply
V5 Concepts Thread; Let 'em loose here
Topic Started: May 8 2011, 04:08 PM (28,038 Views)
Aura
Member Avatar
Has seen that which cannot be unseen.
[ *  *  *  *  *  * ]
This is my first SOTF, as well as my first RP ever, and I would appreciate some feedback on my character ideas. I'm open to criticism, so here it goes...

Matt Masters is a seven-foot tall, 295 pound gentle giant. He is often teased for his height, but never fights back, because his mother always taught him that his strength should be used to protect, not cause harm. He has a single mom, on account of his dad left her while she was pregnant. He is very strong, and works at a construction site in his spare time. He is also training to be a wrestler.

Adonis Alba is a big, bad, bully. He loves to tease students smaller and weaker than he is. He and his buddies are always starting fights and causing trouble around school. His father always told him to be the best, no matter what he has to do, resulting in Adonis' current attitude. He used to be on the football team, but he was kicked off after threatening the referee multiple times.

Stacey Mordetsky is a spoiled, self-centered princess. She has been winning various pageants and beauty contests since she was a child. Her mother is a blatant stage mom, and showers her with praise and gifts, while her younger brother Jake is ignored. Her father is more sensible, wanting her to be less materialistic and trying to build up her brother's self-esteem. She loves using her looks to manipulate the male students, and goes through about one boyfriend a week.

OK guys, those are my characters. I accept your feedback, good or bad. It's the only way I'll get better.
Posted Image

Characters

Posted Image
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Aura
Member Avatar
Has seen that which cannot be unseen.
[ *  *  *  *  *  * ]
I gotta say, I like Little Boy's concepts. A history buff that wants guys to like her, and a skilled writer that turned his back on his talents. With his track record, I know that these characters are going to be great.

I have also reworked my own characters:

Matt Masters is now 6'7", and weighs 280 pounds. He does various odd jobs for a local construction site (making sure they have enough supplies, etc.) to help his mom pay the bills, as she has a pretty low-paying desk job. He also volunteers at a center for abused women and children (reasons will be explained in his full bio, but it involves his best friend, a girl he met a couple years ago.)

Adonis Alba is still a thuggish bully. He mainly teases, and his violent streak stopped being prevalent in middle school. And when I said that he got kicked off the football team for multiple threats against the ref, I meant multiple threats in the same sentence.

Stacey Mordetsky is still a self-centered brat. While she may not change boyfriends every week, per se, she still changes much more often than any girl her age should. She also recently took up modeling, and that made her even more popular with the male students.

So, what do you guys think?
Posted Image

Characters

Posted Image
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Aura
Member Avatar
Has seen that which cannot be unseen.
[ *  *  *  *  *  * ]
April Fools to you too, Kami.
Posted Image

Characters

Posted Image
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
« Previous Topic · V5 Pregame Planning · Next Topic »
Add Reply