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V5 Concepts Thread; Let 'em loose here
Topic Started: May 8 2011, 04:08 PM (28,150 Views)
The Bearded One
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Wow, this thread exploded! Eight pages in just about two weeks. Clearly, I'm behind (spending too much time with SOTF-Mini). Anyway, here's my v5 idea:

Leonard "Lenny" Nast is the older of two children. His poorly educated parents got divorced several years ago, and it has caused some psychological problems for Lenny. He does moderately well in school, but not well enough to be accepted into more than a state college, and his father may not be able to afford to send him there anyway.

Lenny tries to make up for his lack of control over his family life by becoming the class clown, acting silly and self-deprecating, mimicking voices and accents, and generally doing everything he can to get his classmates to laugh. As a result, he's well liked by the other students, though he's seen as a bit of a troublemaker by the teachers and staff. He has a couple of close friends at school to whom he's confided about his terrible family situation, but for the most part, he puts on the mask of the entertainer.

Thoughts?


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The Bearded One
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"Brian Zhdanovic - The Russian Rebel" looks like a perfect person to be friends with my "Lenny Nast proto-stand-up comic" concept. Lenny's friendships tend not to be deep, but he enjoys making people laugh, mostly by doing silly voices & impressions, as well as observational humor.


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would anyone be able to give me some feedback on this character?
This looks about 1000% better than the prior version. In fact, he looks like he's got more weaknesses than advantages now. One possibility to even it out a bit is to say that he's learned a bit of first aid from his mother (the nurse); that can be a major asset on death island or wherever the kids get trapped.

I'll let someone with a bit more experience evaluating submissions speak with more authority, though.

(And welcome to SOTF, by the way.)


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