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V5 Concepts Thread; Let 'em loose here
Topic Started: May 8 2011, 04:08 PM (28,123 Views)
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Er, speaking as a nursing student, I'm gonna have to disagree on the septicemia thing. Septicemia is a term that has been used very loosely in the past, but in essence, you're talking about blood-borne pathogens. It's sometimes also used to refer to a "weaker" (relatively speaking) version of sepsis - a blood infection. However, the problem in that lies in the fact that septicemia is not a chronic condition - either it would have developed into sepsis and killed her when she was young, or she would have gotten over it and it would have went away. It wouldn't plague her for the majority of her life.

It's being used incorrectly here - but I'm not sure whether you meant that or another medical condition and you got the names confused.

Either way, don't give up - keep trying and making edits and we'll help you along as you go!
v4 Characters:

G23: Claire Lambert: Property of the Fabulous Mr. Toben

v3 Characters:

B65: Dorian Ibanescu: Coastline

Deceased:

B57 - Jeff Marontate: Cleaved
B120: Jim Middleton: Pummeled
G61: Anna Grout: Submitted
G62: Andrea Vanlandingham: Martyred
G39 Alexis Machina: Crushed
G23: Trish McCarroll: Defeated


natlei was sleeping in her bed when someone came thru her window "get away rapist" she said still half asleep and hit one of them in the head with her liucky frying pan then went back tyo bed them men the injected her with a sedative and carried her off
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I agree with Laurelena about the height thing (but leave the character pimping for the friends thread, please!), as 5'4" is a really normal height for a girl. Having said that, I'm curious about the line "most of her classmates hate her and are jealous of her". It seems as though that's a big assumption to make just for a girl who gets good grades and is partially deaf. Unless she's a total bitch to people, why would they "hate" her?

It's a definite improvement on the last version! Still got a little ways to go.
v4 Characters:

G23: Claire Lambert: Property of the Fabulous Mr. Toben

v3 Characters:

B65: Dorian Ibanescu: Coastline

Deceased:

B57 - Jeff Marontate: Cleaved
B120: Jim Middleton: Pummeled
G61: Anna Grout: Submitted
G62: Andrea Vanlandingham: Martyred
G39 Alexis Machina: Crushed
G23: Trish McCarroll: Defeated


natlei was sleeping in her bed when someone came thru her window "get away rapist" she said still half asleep and hit one of them in the head with her liucky frying pan then went back tyo bed them men the injected her with a sedative and carried her off
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