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Slam's Creativity Thread
Topic Started: Feb 15 2011, 03:34 PM (3,536 Views)
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So, believe it or not for a member of this site, I actually occasionally write stuff that isn't SOTF related.

I'll give you a moment for that to sink in.


Now that you're over that shock, have my first piece that I'll share with you all. It's a little poem for a writing contest those of you in chat may have heard me bitching about and how it's creatively confining with its limited titles. Normally I'm not one for poems, but hey this came out quicker than a story so it'll go here first. I've had to use an image because zetaboards are jerks and won't let the text go the way that I want it to so nuts to them.

Senseless

Constructive criticism or comments of non-criticism nature on anything I do is always loved. Unless you put me down, in which case I will cry in a corner after accepting it. But will still love it.

masochist me.

Opinions on any single item in here are welcome.


First page item's gone forever thanks Photobucket
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So here's another thing I just came up with, I suppose it might qualify as another poem but frankly I think of it more as Flash Fiction.

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One of these days I'd love to write something upbeat.
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So since it doesn't look like I won this totallyobviouslyriggedandfavouriteplayingstupidcontestomglamos I can post up this story I wrote ages ago for all to see~

The Bubble


Personally I dunno what I was smoking with the ending, but please thoughts, criticisms and opinions share all around.
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Untouched

Bouncing up and down
The flowing river in my heart abounds
But when I turn around there it is
And I can swim.

Winds in the trees and a gentle breeze
It’s the day I wanted for months and weeks
Now it’s here and I’m out in the clouds
Wind in my hair, wind in my gown

Everything is going perfectly
Life is everything I want it to be
Except I turn around and look behind me
And there’s one thing not there.

A beautiful, clear horizon rolls in front of me
Grassy meadows, grassy hills
Clean, green, completely sheen
This empty landscape is all I need

I look around across the world
Every little detail now unfurled
All to myself, all to me
This barren land is all I see

Peaceful solitude of perfect silence
Mine alone, mine forever
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Glad you like it dawg
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Two in one day? Good God I must be on drugs.

Does Not Yet Have Title


I'll probably turn this into a serial.
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Okay screw the last serial because I had no idea where it was going. This one I've actually more or less already written so I know it'll have a definite end, but I'll upload it in chapters for the sake of ease of reading and not having to write it all at once. Plus it actually has a title.

The Good Doctor


Comment now, comment when it's done, whatever suits you. For once I'll upload from start to finish.
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Got ourselves a little 'un here. I started doing a Let's Play of The Walking Dead (Great game, go check it out if you haven't already) with Lee as a total jerk, but then I started to think I wasn't really nailing what parts of Lee's character are set by the game, so I kinda gave up fairly quickly.

Ah well, have the unfinished result. No real spoiler risk since it's only of the first ten minutes or so, but hey.

The Adventures of Lee the Asshole


Course I've only finished one episode so far, so it's not like I couldn't go in and fill in the rest of it, but I don't really want to write a story with my Lee not being anything like what parts of Lee are canon.
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It's close enough to Halloween that I'm allowed to do my annual treat of writing something scary, or in this case just taking a story I came up with last year and actually writing it.

The Cellar of Blood
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Woot published.

Also thanks go to Jace for being a big hand with editing.
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I finally got round to doing that thing I've been talking about doing forever. Yay!

Now I just have to actually keep adding to it.


lol my attention span.
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For anyone familiar with the This is War series, I went and did a Fizz verse for the hell of it.

Behold my bitchin' rappin' yo.
Edited by Slam, Jul 16 2014, 03:28 PM.
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I was watching Lordi's Hard Rock Hallelujah and just had an urge to write a story for the gal in the music video. Impulse writing, yo.

Hard Rock Hallelujah
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I wasn't really sure what kind of feelings or thoughts I was trying to get across, but hey.

Windowsill
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