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Duncan McMahon
Topic Started: Mar 8 2009, 04:58 AM (335 Views)
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STILL THE BEST 1973
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Name: Duncan McMahon
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Grade: 12th
School: Bayview Secondary School
Hobbies and Interests: Video games, anime, the internet, D&D. Pretty much every aspect of the geek culture.

Appearance: Duncan is a fairly unremarkable person appearance-wise. He stands a little bit shorter then most men his age, and is somewhat skinny. His black hair goes down just above his shoulders, with a pair of bangs framing his face, and his eyes are a sort of dull green behind his black-rimmed glasses.

On the day of the abduction, Duncan was wearing a dark blue denim jacket, and underneath it a black t-shirt saying "We have nothing to fear but fear itself (and spiders)." Below that he wears a pair of blue jeans and a pair of blue and white sneakers.

Biography: Duncan grew up in the state of Iowa, born to Jeremy and Vanessa McMahon, and with a younger sister of 4 years, Melissa. When he started school, Duncan was frequently a target of bullies, until one day somebody stepped in to intervene, chasing off the bullies. And thus Duncan became friends with Maria Graham, the two becoming steadfast friends. Duncan had always thought of Maria as sort of a cool older sister. By the time middle school came around, however, he'd developed a crush on her, though he couldn't bring himself to tell her.

And it seemed as if he'd never get the chance. By the end of eighth grade, Maria's father died in a car accident, and the two of them soon moved out of the state. The two of them managed to keep in touch throughout high school. Finally, near the end of Duncan's senior year, his father got a job offer in St. Paul that he couldn't pass up, and things were set up that Duncan would spend the remainder of his school year at Bayview Secondary School. Remembering that Maria is also living in St. Paul, and is attending the same school, he began to wait in anticipation for the day he'd be reunited with his childhood friend.

Duncan could be considered a sort of geek-of-all-trades. Anime, D&D, MMORPGs, he's dabbled in them all, though not enough to establish an intense attachment to them; though he's still managed to attract the ire of nearby bullies because of it. He's developed some self-esteem issues as well. He has no plans for the future, and believes himself to be a nobody who's only future is to wind up in some desk job somewhere.

Advantages: He's somewhat intelligent, which could serve him well on the island.

Disadvantages: He isn't very fit, and his lack of charisma could hurt him if he were to try and gain some allies. His lack of self-confidence could also work against him.
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Enough expository banter! Now we fight like men! And ladies! And ladies who dress like men! For Gilgamesh...it is MORPHIN' TIME!

V5 hopefuls:
Hiro Fukuyama: "N-n-no, I-I'm not scared."
Lucy Rosenberg: "If you're looking for friends, I don't think I can help you with that."
Angus McDonald: "To hell with you! If anyone here deserves to live, it's me!"


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banthesun
 
She wanted those horrible metal balls to stop banging against her legs

ZombiexCreame
 
But would Celeste even want help from a guy that whips out his pistol without a second thought?
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Temporarily denied. Something I noticed is that in neither Duncan or Maria's bio it mentions them re-uniting or even talking at all once they were coincidentally rejoined at Bayview. If they were really that close (and if Duncan really did have a crush on her) that missing bit of information makes no sense to me. You can edit it into his and Maria's bios, if you like, or just Duncan's.

Also, there are some really obvious spelling and grammar mistakes in here that could be fixed.
v4 Characters:

G23: Claire Lambert: Property of the Fabulous Mr. Toben

v3 Characters:

B65: Dorian Ibanescu: Coastline

Deceased:

B57 - Jeff Marontate: Cleaved
B120: Jim Middleton: Pummeled
G61: Anna Grout: Submitted
G62: Andrea Vanlandingham: Martyred
G39 Alexis Machina: Crushed
G23: Trish McCarroll: Defeated


natlei was sleeping in her bed when someone came thru her window "get away rapist" she said still half asleep and hit one of them in the head with her liucky frying pan then went back tyo bed them men the injected her with a sedative and carried her off
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Fixed. I think.
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Enough expository banter! Now we fight like men! And ladies! And ladies who dress like men! For Gilgamesh...it is MORPHIN' TIME!

V5 hopefuls:
Hiro Fukuyama: "N-n-no, I-I'm not scared."
Lucy Rosenberg: "If you're looking for friends, I don't think I can help you with that."
Angus McDonald: "To hell with you! If anyone here deserves to live, it's me!"


The Dead


banthesun
 
She wanted those horrible metal balls to stop banging against her legs

ZombiexCreame
 
But would Celeste even want help from a guy that whips out his pistol without a second thought?
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Approved.
v4 Characters:

G23: Claire Lambert: Property of the Fabulous Mr. Toben

v3 Characters:

B65: Dorian Ibanescu: Coastline

Deceased:

B57 - Jeff Marontate: Cleaved
B120: Jim Middleton: Pummeled
G61: Anna Grout: Submitted
G62: Andrea Vanlandingham: Martyred
G39 Alexis Machina: Crushed
G23: Trish McCarroll: Defeated


natlei was sleeping in her bed when someone came thru her window "get away rapist" she said still half asleep and hit one of them in the head with her liucky frying pan then went back tyo bed them men the injected her with a sedative and carried her off
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