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Everyones a Critic v2
Topic Started: Nov 13 2007, 11:08 PM (2,373 Views)
Bukowski
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Well, I was around the good ol' v1 board and I was reading through this thread and I liked it a lot. So, for v3 pre-game, -much like spontaneity- I'm taking it back, anyways post up and tell me the characters you want critiqued, for me personally I'd like them to have at least a memory or a thread under there belts, but others are probably fine just basing it on the profile.

Well, now that the crappy introduction is done we can all get started and get help with the creative process :D .

"My man got too familiar and I’d ended up having to whoop his ass, man, you know. Because he would step across the line. Habitually. He’s a habitual line stepper.” - Charlie Murphy


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Ciel
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((OOC: Good idea, Bu. I've been thinking about making a topic like this for a while now.))

I've been asking around now, but I really need the opinions of the members of V3: Does the profile for Madison Conner look ready for V3? I just need someone to skim through it, not do a huge, detailed editing process (unless, god forbid, you don't mind doing that). Thanks all! ^.^
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G060 - Pfeiffer, Scout - 100% - Sawlaska Thunderfuck 5000 - START
G025 - Reyes, Audrey - 0% - Nunchaku - START END

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@Slack: Talked-critiqued with you earlier on AIM.

@Ace: I think she's got a nicely complex history...although the Madison-with-ominous-feelings-and-a-domineering-mother seems a bit too familiar. But that's just me. I remember she had a thread going...I'll look into that. I'd also like to know why Samantha killed herself unless it's something that'll be revealed during the actual game.

Anyone wanna have a go at reviewing mine?

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Namira
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@LaZ: Well I guess I'll go for Boxer, cuz that's the mind frame I'm in atm ;)

Well he comes across as... dense really, naive at least. His relationship with EtV I would like to see a little more of. He seems as if he has something against those not in the 'main crowd' so to speak; refering to the way he was convinced quite quickly by Hardy that Ric was the culprit of the baseball incident, then was completely adament in declaring Ric guilty, despite denials. Still, I like how he's shaping up, I believe it will be interesting seeing him on the island itself as regards to alliances and such. :)
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Bukowski
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Any of my characters: Blood Boy, Evelyn, and Paul. But, I'd prefer it if neither Laz nor Meg did it (since I already got their criticisms), but yeah, it'd be very much appreciated.

"My man got too familiar and I’d ended up having to whoop his ass, man, you know. Because he would step across the line. Habitually. He’s a habitual line stepper.” - Charlie Murphy


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Mitsuko2
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If anyone want's to critique Serenity or what they've seen of Melina(her bio'll be up soon) then that would be appreciated.
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I'm pretty much with Chad on this one, i'd like it if any of my guys could be critiqued (Will Sigurbjornsson, Jason Foley, Gabriel Theobalt, Karl Van Buren.)
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laZardo
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The only thing I can say about Melina so far (since her bio's not yet posted though there is a story) is that she seems too much like BR!Mitsuko. o____O Then again, she hasn't gotten her chance in actual Pregame RP yet, so. =p

@Cyco: Yeah, been meaning to get to Boxer's strange relationship with EdTV. It's actually supposed to be something in "Memories," actually. :lol:

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Namira
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@ Chad

Blood Boy: He seems to me rather sinister (like I told you the other day) and more than a little crazy. But not in a conventional sense, he appears to have his own unique brand of insanity. Of course, there is an argument to suggest he's a lot more sane than everybody else is in some ways. His reasoning is a little like a demented rubber ball;you never know where it will end up next.

Paul Smith: Paul has an interesting personality, perhaps a little more insight into why he acts quite so crazy would be nice, but you've qualified a lot of it well, so that doesn't matter too much IMO. The hints of pyromania are also a nice touch.

@LaZ: LMAO, you know I'm not Cyco right? XD

If anybody wants to take a shot at mine I'm all ears.
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@Laz: WTF are you talking about? I'm not even part of this conversation!
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Chase
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is only doing this 'cause you're a mod!
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Multiple critiques on Braden, if anyone cares to.
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Ciel
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Actually, this isn't so much as a critique, but more as an idea that I need everyone's opinion on. I think Dominica is too cliche, so I've been taking some time out to think about her. I have an idea for her that I believe is very original, that no one has thought of before. It may sound strange, but hear me out....

Have any of you heard of The Most Dangerous Game?

A classic short story, in my opinion.

In my mind right now, I'm going to make Dominica into a new-age General Zaroff. Basically, Dominica is not going to be a powerplayer who kills anything that moves. No. Too cliche. Nothing interesting in that. That's been done to death over and over again. No, Dominica is much smarter. In her mind, SOTF is nothing more than the best hunting season she will ever participate in, because the prey she hunts down can actually fight back. She's not just going to gun down anyone in her path (although if someone tries to shoot at her, most likely she's going to fire back. Common Knowledge FTW!). She's only going to waste her bullets hunting down all the players she believe is worth their weight in gold. Ones that have racked up a large body count. If you actually think about it, she's a powerplayer hunteress.

Good idea? Bad idea? PM me if you have any comments. I know there's some kinks I need to work out, and I'll find answers to them as I go on. Until then, I'll just be putting the idea out there for everyone.
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G052 - Reed, Jasmine - 0% - Falchion - START END
G060 - Pfeiffer, Scout - 100% - Sawlaska Thunderfuck 5000 - START
G025 - Reyes, Audrey - 0% - Nunchaku - START END

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That actually sounds interesting. Good luck with it.
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Bukowski
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Joshua Goodman, por favor.

"My man got too familiar and I’d ended up having to whoop his ass, man, you know. Because he would step across the line. Habitually. He’s a habitual line stepper.” - Charlie Murphy


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If anyone doesn't mind, I'd love someone to critique my characters.
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