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Gwen nodded. "Yeah, that was a great description. If you put that in, it'll make perfect sense. Maybe you could put in the villains or antagonists, too, like their apparent motives and whatnot."

She finished off her cocoa and stretched.

"And once you've got that, maybe you could do the setting. Like dates, locations and stuff. Is it all in space, or do they land on planets and stuff?"
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