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I've got no critisism here, I love the way you've used formatting to emphasise the fading of the voice, and just how well you captured and portrayed the emotion.

I'm loving it here, cant wait for the next lot!
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Criticism or thoughts on my writing are welcome and appreciated - always looking to improve!
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