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Skraal
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I can't really say much about Preston. He wasn't terrible in pregame, but his posts were all, like, 3-4 sentences long maximum, so there's not much to critique.

His only island thread has Mitsuko2 roleplaying him at the same time as 3 of her other characters. Her posts switch between perspectives so frequently that barely any time is given any particular one of the characters. After a few posts in this crowded thread, Preston sacrifices himself to save one of Mitsuko's other characters, and his death scene is written entirely from the perspective of his killer. Overall, he felt more like an NPC than an actual protagonist, even in his own story.

Another character, please.
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