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He continued looking down at the sound, ignoring Matt’s ridiculous question. Something as trivial as whether he was hungry or not was so far removed from what they were doing, what Matt was saying, what Nate was feeling.

He thought back to Alvaro. Alvaro, he’d realised, had lost something during this, and maybe that’s why he acted the way he did. Whether that was what had set him off, Nate would never know, but he’d come to terms with it, as much as he didn't want to. Alvaro had changed, just like Nancy no doubt had too, and just like so many people must have by now.

Had Matt changed? He must have, if he could act like this, but it wasn’t the same. Matt wasn’t doing it out of fear, or whatever Alvaro’s motivation had been. If he was afraid, he was hiding it too well.

Nate couldn’t understand how someone could be so cold. This time, he knew that he didn’t want to.

He brought his head up. Even if Matt had his back turned, Nate wanted to face him when he replied.

“Are you going to kill me?”

He wanted to see, for sure, if this was really the person Matt had become.
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