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Good bye; ....
Topic Started: Oct 1 2007, 05:28 PM (300 Views)
Yogurt_head
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Pika...pika....pika...PIKAPIKAPIKAPIKAPIKA!!
Pikachu Erikas personal alarm clock that she loves *cough* why couldnt mom get a quieter pokemon like a ANGRY CHARIZARD! "ok pikachu im awake stupidnogoodlittlerat..." she walked or FELL down the stairs slumped down to the kitchen and popped toast in the toaster as her little brother Jacob told me what happened outside on his bike and the starly he saw "Wow..."Erika said with most exitement she had " a starly cool! Im going to see lots of starlys today becau-BEEPBEPPBEEPBEEPBEEP!!!! the smoke alarm went of Dont worry mom its just toast!!! she said waving a dish rag under the smoke alarm. "because Im go on an adventure buddy." "wh-what y-your leaving" her brother said teary-eyed "Airda dont gooo *sniff*" "dont worry Jacob I will come back in a minute to show you my new pokemon! oh and tell Becca Im going too." "Ok Airda Luvb you" Bye Mom Dad Pikachu! as she walked out side to get a pokemon she ran in to Pro.Willows messager Tex -THUD- "hey Tex whats up!" "the Professer has no more pokemon but you can get a pokenav and escape rope" "ok but--" I have a strong feeling about you!" "alright" she sighed as she walked home. right before she got home a weedle followed her "hey lil dude" she said "wana hang with me" and she threw a pokeball at him she picked up the ball and let him out agian. hmm i like you lets adventer she entered the house showed weedle off and left for her adventure...DUMDUMDUM
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OOC: Alright, I guess i'll be the one to say this.... No.

I appreciate you're enthusiasm, but here at Legacy we try to hold to a slightly higher standard of writing for the enjoyment of all. This particular post won't do at all.

First of all, seperate it into different paragraphs, the way this is written just makes it WAAYYYY too hard to read. Not to mention make it easier to notice the difference between what is being said and what is being done, take a look at some of the other home posts as examples.

Second, this is supposed to be your house post... You make a post about leaving the house, we grade the quality of the RP and THEN give you the items. Then you head on to the pokemon lab to roleplay out picking out you're pokemon, but this requires mod interaction, not you saying you want a pokemon then picking it out yourself.

I don't want to seem mean, I would like to see you continue roleplaying at this site, but you just need to put a little more effort into the posts. Just look at other peoples posts, we aren't THaT picky about length and quality of posts, but we do like to see effort.

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