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What is it?; My newest poem.
Topic Started: Oct 6 2005, 09:12 AM (42 Views)
Wolf
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How can I begin to live
If you won't let me go
And all the love I had
There's nothing left to show
I tried to run away
And get so far from here
But I was locked inside
And now I'm left in fear
As I write this down
I try to look away
But as I close my eyes
It seems here to stay
I can't stop it from coming
And you will know it's here
When the entire world
Quakes with fear.
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DarkMonk
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Well for one I was wondering if the answer is death, I doubt it sense death would be too cliche these days.

Also I liked the begining. The end I dunno if you were rushing, but it doesn't flow as smoothly.
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