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| What is it?; My newest poem. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 6 2005, 09:12 AM (42 Views) | |
| Wolf | Oct 6 2005, 09:12 AM Post #1 |
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How can I begin to live If you won't let me go And all the love I had There's nothing left to show I tried to run away And get so far from here But I was locked inside And now I'm left in fear As I write this down I try to look away But as I close my eyes It seems here to stay I can't stop it from coming And you will know it's here When the entire world Quakes with fear. |
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| DarkMonk | Oct 6 2005, 12:08 PM Post #2 |
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Well for one I was wondering if the answer is death, I doubt it sense death would be too cliche these days. Also I liked the begining. The end I dunno if you were rushing, but it doesn't flow as smoothly. |
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