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| My Writings; Holy sh*t these poems rhyme. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 2 2005, 06:58 PM (99 Views) | |
| Wolf | Oct 2 2005, 06:58 PM Post #1 |
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Dispel Break my bones and you will find All I needed was my mind To get me through the path of life And free me from misguided strife I found that all my inner confusions All my pains, were mere illusions Created by myself from fear That I would not fit in here But the time has come to see the path To end the torment and dispel my wrath To accept myself for who I am And now I will do what I can To repave my roads and not trust in a lie This shell I shed will never die But it is a reminder of my past mistakes Learn from memories and my heartaches Thus I shall not turn and run again Turn around, believe and then Find the strength to break away So that I will help others someday Falling in Love I cry tonight, because I cannot take it I run tonight, because I couldn’t fake it The time has come to realize This isn’t a game and there is no prize I must stop the tears and end the fight All my lies, it ends tonight The time has come to be a man To learn it’s ok to love again She broke my heart, she tore it apart But now she's gone, that work of art She never even knew my love for her Because I was too scared of love so pure And now she’s gone, forever lost I want her back, no matter the cost But I cant live that dream any longer This whole experience will make me stronger I'll open up my heart again I will fall in love and then I can confess my love to her And this time I can be sure That she will not be torn away And in my heart she will stay But until that time has come for this man It will be hard to fall in love again. My Life My life's a pain I’m stuck in the rain I cannot refrain From grasping images stuck in my mind I just cannot see I will not believe I want to be free From all of the curses I thought I left behind I say I won’t go But still we all know That it's all a show And that I’m powerless inside I try to break free But cant even breathe This isn’t me If it wasn’t for that I would have died We learn to try And not to lie All the times I cried It never made a change in someone’s life And now I will choose To never refuse And fight the abuse No longer shall I suffer this strife This I will swear But you didn’t care Life isn’t fair I can no longer live this lie Setting me free I declare it to be You will all see That you cannot tell the truth from a lie. Shadows All of these shadows, held inside, All of the rules to which I abide, Never being who I want to be, I cannot take the shadows inside of me, I feel so lost, so lost within, Never would I do this again, All of these shadows, hunting me, All I want to do, is to break free. So pathetic, so alone, I have no place that I'll call home, To be this way, to never feel, All I want is for these wounds to heal The shadow inside, the darkness within, None of it came from my sin, It came from my mind, so dark and deep, Every night I close the door and begin to weep, I see so much, I need to cry, Never did I, want to die. But now that I know, this scar wont heal, The shadow inside is very real, I’m losing my mind, slipping away, The shadow seems to be here to stay, I cannot win; I can not fight, And now I'm consumed, by the night. Wolf Tears (A commission for a friend) The tears flow like a river As the wolf's heart grows bigger Showing compassion as never before As the pups come to her, more and more All of them lost and far from home Down by pond that they had known As she takes them in, they romp and yawn Eagerly awaiting the newborn dawn When the new day comes, so will their new lives No longer in the darkest of times. Dark Side You want me evil, the world will know That today I deal the final blow Your world is gone, your society shattered And all around the blood is spattered Morbid enough? I should think not. Because this is the beginning of what I wrought Demons below cower in fear Because they know that I am here Try and run, nothing can save you And nothing can stop what you're going through Bloodsoaked nightmares, terrors unheard Think your God will save you? How absurd. Your body will falter; your soul will be mine And nothing will help your, evil nor divine. New Life Here today, a new life begins As was foretold by howling winds Not human nor beast, but something inside I feel it stirring, coming alive In the form of a gift, this is a curse But from the trouble the shadows disperse And I use it to help others, to never betray And if conflicted with a problem to never run away Only when the solution is found, do I take my leave, I'll be by your side, whether or not you believe. Open wounds All I ever wanted to be was you. All you ever gave me were open wounds. And now I see, I see the truth No longer blinded by ignorance of youth No more lies, no more fears All of it contained throughout the years I'm no longer your slave, I set myself free But you just wouldn't let me be It wasn’t enough for me to beg and plead But you refused to control such lustful greed And now it has consumed you, you cannot be saved The demon inside will continue to rage Until I am the one who will set you free Despite all the things you have done to me I have forgiven your lies, I will forget my pain Bathe in the light of the Holy rain If you truly regret, then I will forgive But promise me, that you will let me live. Yesterday (A commsison for another friend) Yesterday, was the promise of a new day Silence gone and listen to the wind sway But yesterday's gone, I see sadness lies ahead I tried to sleep it off until you said "Listen to me now, I don't care what you say Your life will not always be this way, The thrill of tomorrow lies ahead, So wake up now, and get out of bed." So I rose to the dawn, to be with you, And the light blinded me, revealing the truth. Tears Tonight I cried out your name But it turned out to be in vain I dropped to my knees and shed the tears Of built up torment over the years I let it all out, it'll take me some time And when it is over, I'll seek what is mine I'll take back my feelings, my time and my life And my coldness will cut through you as a knife You shouldn't have awoken the darkness inside I shall not forgive the one for which I cried Until I find you, you can feign ignorance But the time has come for your repentance Soon you will beg and plead for me to spare you But you'll never see this night through Because all of these feelings, inside my head, Because all of those tears, can't be unshed. Untitled If you looked at me, what would you see? An empty shell of what you used to be. Passions gone and time that flows And what lies ahead, nobody knows To look at me is to look away To try and hide is to betray And in your mind, you think you are free But your heart knows, you can't escape from me And when you accept the fact that nothing is right You'll become lost in the forever of night Many others would choose to refuse And use blatant ignorance as an excuse And look in the mirror, thinking it's fine But this is where I draw the line Your mirror is not a mirror at all Your mirror is a painting on the wall That you yourself drew a long time ago Of what you wanted to be, it's all just a show But nobody's watching, they're drawing their own lies And making it up as they go along And fully knowing that they are wrong But when they run out of room, they'll have to look at the truth But then they'll ignore that, and blame that on the youth. Dark Corners A silent rage, a hurricane, Everything that I can't see and can't explain, Never being good enough for you And the loss of feelings that I hold true. Nightmares at night that kill your mind As I destroy your body and leave nothing behind A scream in the dark to be remembered by And nothing is left, as you being to cry You'll beg for sanity, to keep your life But now you see what it is to be cut with MY knife You wont just die tonight, your soul is destroyed And you are lost forever in the void I'll laugh at your torment as you beg to be set free Even when i let go you can't escape from me Here I am, now you want to fight? Fight me all you want, such a pitiful sight Too blinded by apathy to see I am you Dark Corners where I hide and I turned you true Now dance, puppet, dance! You're coming on next Keep on dancing, still feeling vexed I'll wind you up and you'll dance again And then you can dance with your homemade sin There's no happy ending here, you are mine forever more You could never fathom what I have in store A thousand and twelve more nightmares for you And I'll laugh at it all, it'll never be through. Together When we're together, and you're my girl, I think nothing of giving the entire world, And I would do anything, go anywhere, Just to show you how much I care, I would stop my own life to watch yours go on, I'll make the sun rise so you'll see the dawn, And if you're ever sad, I'll be there, You rest on my chest as I caress your hair And when the sadness is gone, it's just us again I'll be with you until the end, And when the end is near, I'll be here, Resting in your heart as we depart, And together we'll rise, open our eyes We rise off of the floor, go a little more, And see the way to heaven's door. Blood on the floor What I do behind this closed door I have to clean up the blood on the floor People who cross me find themsleves beaten senseless And nobody can escape, so dont f*ck with this Once I'm through with you, you'll be dead So enjoy the torture on your body, in your head Throw you to the ground and cut you some more And then I'll have to clean the blood off the floor. Tonight The moonlight shines over your eyes and breaks across your face And you still can't see why it's a part of the human race Tonight was the night to bring an end to it all But you couldn't foresee the unbreakable wall Shackled by this hatred you couldn't let die You wanted to end it so you couldn't live this lie But then my words whispered inside your head You grow ever furious, remembering what I said How I told you you're worthless, and broken inside I said to wake up, to stop living this lie You kept on refusing to listen to me But tonight, I have set you free. A Cry I'm stuck in the darkness where I can hardly see Can't make out the path or or see the rain in front of me I looked into your eyes but there was nothing to see No sadness no anger just a reflection of me Turn around and the light is gone And there's no hope of seeing the dawn I look around and I think I see hope But it's only my pride hanging from a rope There's nothing left in this world anymore And I cry out your name as I drop to the floor But you just pass me by and don't even spare a glance You just ignored me, didn't give me a chance. What can I do to escape my past And how can I make this life last When all that I did was try to be me But you covered your eyes so that you wouldn't see All the torment that you started And now I rest among the departed But that wasn't enough to satsify you No, you had to pull me back through I've been to heaven and I've been through hell And all of it is just as well Because now I see who you truly are You are someone not so far I look around and see that you are nearer Because I am looking in the mirror. If you've managed to read ALL of those, tell me what you think, which ones you liked, and what parts. (Side note: If you steal any of these poems as your own, God Himself will not be able to save you.) |
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| sniper | Oct 2 2005, 07:08 PM Post #2 |
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it's long |
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| MaLkAvIaNgIrL | Oct 2 2005, 07:09 PM Post #3 |
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I haven't yet read threw all of these, but I simply must say that you dear sir are quite simply an amazing poet. Maybe you didn't know it. In either case, j00 rock, don't stop, cuz j00 knock my socks off. |
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| sniper | Oct 2 2005, 07:12 PM Post #4 |
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well yeah it is nice |
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| Wolf | Oct 2 2005, 07:30 PM Post #5 |
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Yes, it is long. But I figured I would put them in one post to avoid being labeled as a spammer for making multiple posts. And if you have appreciation for poetry you'll deal with it. And thank you for the compliments. |
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| sniper | Oct 2 2005, 07:54 PM Post #6 |
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your welcome but it is nice |
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| Wolf | Oct 3 2005, 12:49 PM Post #7 |
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Oh, yes, I am currently accepting commissions for free, I can't come up with anything on my own lately. So give me an idea for a poem, something like a subject to write about, a rhyme to use, something, and I'll see what I come up with. None of you have read all of these yet? |
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| MaLkAvIaNgIrL | Oct 3 2005, 06:51 PM Post #8 |
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I have read most of them. Blood on the Floor is my favorite so far. "People who cross me find themsleves beaten senseless And nobody can escape, so dont f*ck with this" I luff it XD |
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| Sakura | Oct 3 2005, 10:40 PM Post #9 |
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Those are all very good.
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