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My Pain
Topic Started: Oct 1 2005, 11:46 PM (31 Views)
Ruby
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Let the rain fall from the heavens like the tears from my eyes..
Heh...well, was bored, so decided to write some poetry =3 And we all know I suck, so let's just get to the poem lol


My Pain


Don't wanna live,

Just make it all go away.

All the pains, all the tears...

Save them all for another day.



Just go away,

Leave me alone!

Let me dwell in my sorrow today,

Let me take it on my own.



These pains are nothing,

Yet tears flow by.

I try to stop crying,

But it hurts deep inside.



Like rivers of grief,

My tears symbolize my pain...

No time to be happy,

No point in trying to change.



If I try, I fall,

Deeper into the darkness...

Deeper into the cold.

It's better not to try at all.


*yawns* Well, off ta bed^^


-I'm finally home...-

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Crying Devil
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pw3nd by teh iori
lol very emo... coarse what else to expect from you =P but yeah good poem, i like ryming ones

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Ruby
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Let the rain fall from the heavens like the tears from my eyes..
Well, I find that writing poetry helps me ease some pain. Just to get it out on paper, it's like almost allieviating it. I also find that the more I write sad poetry, it tends to leave me feeling better. I'm trying to be as depressed, but I do think that poems like these are neccessary to me. Thanks for the complement thos, I wrote it in Algebra class >_>


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