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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 2 2005, 01:13 AM (58 Views) | |
| Crying Devil | Sep 2 2005, 01:13 AM Post #1 |
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pw3nd by teh iori
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Her Pain Laughing at her pain she walks through life Complaining of the hate and all the strife She sees her own relfection and dosent know who she is She dosent share her pain, its hers... not his There is more to this world than she think, yet she will never know Her smiles are lies, and when asked if shes sad she says "no" The pain forces her to smile and nobody knows she is hurt She plays her innocent games and is labeled a flirt She cries behind closed doors and smiles when people look in She beleives loving herself would be the ultimate sin She dosent feel the warmth shes looking for She's never happy with what she has and is looking for more Her emotions are closed and she tries to no longer feel Will she continue to cry, or will her wounds heal? AH... I just had to write this... it's about a friend of mine |
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| Anime_Chick | Sep 2 2005, 04:46 AM Post #2 |
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The 'Ranting' Queen.
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-Coughs- >.> <.< Nice poem, though why do I think it's about me. :unsure: |
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| Ruby | Sep 11 2005, 06:36 PM Post #3 |
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Let the rain fall from the heavens like the tears from my eyes..
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Yea, I could ask that question myself...oddly, I feel like it's meh...but, I suppose assuming isn't wise...Oh well...it was a great poem, I really liked it^^ |
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| Crying Devil | Sep 11 2005, 09:43 PM Post #4 |
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pw3nd by teh iori
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hehehe funny thing is that I had both of you in mind when I wrote that... so it literally is about both of you hehehe |
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