Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Welcome to Otaku Dreams. We hope you enjoy your visit.


You're currently viewing our forum as a guest. This means you are limited to certain areas of the board and there are some features you can't use. If you join our community, you'll be able to access member-only sections, and use many member-only features such as customizing your profile, sending personal messages, and voting in polls. Registration is simple, fast, and completely free.

Join our community!


If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features:

Username:   Password:
Add Reply
Her Pain; . . .
Topic Started: Sep 2 2005, 01:13 AM (58 Views)
Crying Devil
Member Avatar
pw3nd by teh iori
Her Pain

Laughing at her pain she walks through life
Complaining of the hate and all the strife

She sees her own relfection and dosent know who she is
She dosent share her pain, its hers... not his

There is more to this world than she think, yet she will never know
Her smiles are lies, and when asked if shes sad she says "no"

The pain forces her to smile and nobody knows she is hurt
She plays her innocent games and is labeled a flirt

She cries behind closed doors and smiles when people look in
She beleives loving herself would be the ultimate sin

She dosent feel the warmth shes looking for
She's never happy with what she has and is looking for more

Her emotions are closed and she tries to no longer feel
Will she continue to cry, or will her wounds heal?


AH... I just had to write this... it's about a friend of mine

Posted Image
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Anime_Chick
Member Avatar
The 'Ranting' Queen.
Crying Devil™
Sep 2 2005, 09:13 AM
Her Pain

Laughing at her pain she walks through life
Complaining of the hate and all the strife

She sees her own relfection and dosent know who she is
She dosent share her pain, its hers... not his

There is more to this world than she think, yet she will never know
Her smiles are lies, and when asked if shes sad she says "no"

The pain forces her to smile and nobody knows she is hurt
She plays her innocent games and is labeled a flirt

She cries behind closed doors and smiles when people look in
She beleives loving herself would be the ultimate sin

She dosent feel the warmth shes looking for
She's never happy with what she has and is looking for more

Her emotions are closed and she tries to no longer feel
Will she continue to cry, or will her wounds heal?


AH... I just had to write this... it's about a friend of mine

-Coughs-

>.>
<.<

Nice poem, though why do I think it's about me. :unsure:
Knowledge speaks, but wisdom listens.

Posted Image

Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Ruby
Member Avatar
Let the rain fall from the heavens like the tears from my eyes..
Yea, I could ask that question myself...oddly, I feel like it's meh...but, I suppose assuming isn't wise...Oh well...it was a great poem, I really liked it^^


-I'm finally home...-

Posted Image


Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Crying Devil
Member Avatar
pw3nd by teh iori
hehehe funny thing is that I had both of you in mind when I wrote that... so it literally is about both of you hehehe

Posted Image
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
« Previous Topic · Creative Writing · Next Topic »
Add Reply