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| Ka Tokubi | Aug 11 2006, 07:58 PM Post #31 |
Godforsaken Scapegoat
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Could you answer that first question please? It's currently the most important, which I have been trying to get out of you and Sor for a while... |
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| Dragonzroolx9000 | Aug 11 2006, 08:08 PM Post #32 |
FAAAAAAANSERVICE~!
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*headdesk* Sorry! Me ish stoopid... Anyway... Hmmmeh. I'll ask Sor, she didn't quite say if we were part of the five samurai peoples... ^^;; |
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| Sorcina | Aug 11 2006, 08:10 PM Post #33 |
Is waiting for something to happen.
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I am so that means that your one too. |
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| Ka Tokubi | Aug 11 2006, 08:11 PM Post #34 |
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Okay, thank you! |
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| Sorcina | Aug 11 2006, 08:50 PM Post #35 |
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I was wondering if Kikan's pendant could be magic. |
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| Ka Tokubi | Aug 11 2006, 08:57 PM Post #36 |
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There is magic in the C:SI world, like the magic Youmikai used to create Akama. But it is not common, and even less often fused inside objects. I suggest that none of the characters know/have any magic. If they do, it would be very very basic and almost useless in fighting. Only a few very experienced warriors and scholors know enough magic worth using. |
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| Sorcina | Aug 11 2006, 09:30 PM Post #37 |
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Yeah since my character doesn't know her past she won't use the magic in there, because she doesn't know it has powers. I was thinking that it's actually apart of something bigger and it glows when another piece of it is near. So the only magic it has is the ability to detect the other pieces of the pendant. |
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| Ka Tokubi | Aug 11 2006, 09:39 PM Post #38 |
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O___o but I can't think of what that would have to do with the story if she didn't use it...(so I don't see what purpose having it be magic would serve) |
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| fightingcomet | Aug 11 2006, 09:43 PM Post #39 |
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The Second Samurai (FINALLY! XD) Name: Heike Tsunoshi (OHEMGEE, his name doesn’t start with a K! Amazing!) NOTE: His name is written in traditional Japanese style- his surname first, then his given name. WHEE~! XD Age: 20 Gender: Male Likes: The tea his sister makes, windy days, fighting gracefully Dislikes: Being called feminine, being klutzy, having his hair in his face/down Physical Weaknesses: He’s klutzy. And is often reprimanded for it, especially by his sister. In battle, he tends to be more careful, and is slower, but graceful. Physical Strengths: He may not look strong at first glance, but the accuracy of his strikes think otherwise. Weapon: A double ended spear, carried on his back when not in use. The length partly makes up for his lack of speed. Physical Description: (include eye & hair color, height, weight, clothing.) Tsunoshi’s auburn hair is always pulled back into a low ponytail, even when he’s sleeping. His hazel eyes contain green flecks, and his feminine features (He and his sister look so much alike) are often the cause of some heated battles. Standing at 5’ 6”, 143 pounds, Tsunoshi’s older sister pokes fun at him, saying he’s too slight to be a samurai. For clothing, Tsunoshi wears a long sleeved, dark blue kimono over his khaki colored pants, with the traditional foot wear. Personality: Tsunoshi gets angry if people call him feminine- he’s worked hard to become confident and strong, and doesn’t want anyone to think less of him. His dream is to become well-known as a strong samurai. He’s kind and has a determination not known when he was younger. He loves his father and sister very much, and writes letters to them when he’s away- his father recently come down with a cold, so he worries about him. When speaking to his sister, they are often sarcastic and knowing- one can usually tell what the other is thinking. History (optional if you are one of the five Samurai): Tsunoshi came into the world one cool winter morning- a boy, to his parents delight. They had a girl, Noriko, 4 years earlier, and had wanted a son for some time now. And for a while, they lived happily. Tsunoshi and Noriko played with the other children outside of their parent’s restaurant, coming in for snacks. Some of the other boys made fun of Tsunoshi because of his long hair- it made him look like a girl! They laughed, and Tsunoshi fought with them. Whenever any of the adults asked if he was a girl, or told Noriko that her younger sister was cute, Tsunoshi glared at them. When Tsunoshi was 7, his mother became very ill and died. His parents ran a small restaurant, well-known for its unique flavors and blends of tea. The restaurant continued to prosper, but without their mother, it seemed…pointless. It was her dream to own the restaurant. Noriko wouldn’t let their father sell it, and made her own tea recipes that, surprisingly, sold well. Tsunoshi was forced into taking orders for tea and food, and delivering them to the table. Big mistake. His first day, three people ended up with hot tea in their laps, and food everywhere but on the table. Noriko yelled at him for messing it up, calling him klutzy. Then she called him girly when he cried, her mouth twisting into a smirk. He shouted “I’m not girly!” and stormed away. His father went to comfort him, and gave him a tie to pull his long hair back with. “Maybe people won’t confuse you as a girl with this.” Tsunoshi took it, and from that day on never wore his hair down, except when washing it. At the age of 16, he started training to become a samurai to gain the confidence and respect he deserved. He became stronger through the use of a double ended spear, and gained confidence. But the children who called him girly continued to do so. Tsunoshi vowed to become a strong samurai and be known as one- not a girly man. Now, Tsunoshi is a part of the escort for Yamakawa-dono’s daughter, Koujo-hime. He doesn’t know how well he’ll do on this mission, but he’ll do his best to protect her- it shouldn’t be too hard, considering the great Hitoji-sama and Ruoko-sama will be going, as well! He just hopes they won’t make any jokes about his looks…Hitoji-sama looks prettier than him! Writing Sample: “So, when are you leaving? Watch that pot, don’t let it boil over.” Noriko said, fixing a new batch of tea leaves. “Sometime next week. And I know, sister.” Tsunoshi huffed, turning the heat down. He had just gotten the news- he, along with four other samurai, would accompany Hitoji-sama and Ruoko-sama to escort Yamakawa-dono’s daughter, Koujo-hime, to her wedding. It was supposed to be dangerous, with many obstacles along the path. He could tell she was worried. Noriko put the fresh tea leaves in a bag, and began to brew her new recipe. “How long will you be gone?” He shook his head. “I’m not sure. It depends on how much trouble there is on the way.” He propped his chin in his hands. “You worried?” Noriko let out a bark. “Ha!” Tsunoshi blinked, straightening. “Me, worried? Come on- they won’t attack someone as pretty as you.” She smirked. He stood, fuming. “I am not girly!” “I never said you were.” “You implied it.” “Possibly. Tea?” Noriko filled a cup with the finished batch, holding it out to him. Tsunoshi took the cup from her and sat back down, swirling the mixture thoughtfully. Noriko sipped her own cup of tea slowly. “You’ll be fine.” “Huh?” Tsunoshi stopped moving the cup and looked at her, surprised. “I said you’ll be fine. Don’t worry about us here- you just worry about coming back home.” Tsunoshi smiled. His sister always knew what to say to him… “Just don’t have one of the other samurai mistake you for a girl.” At this, Tsunoshi almost dropped his tea. “Hey!” --- And that ends my horrible writing sample! XD So, does my character suck, or what? I know his personality needs A LOT of work, because I don't like it. ToT Some help there would be nice, and I could edit this... ...My favorite part? The dialouge between him and his sister. ^^ *dance* |
 "So even if you stumble and makes mistakes...that's not useless. Think of it like fertilizer. Sure it feels like crap...but it will help you grow!" (Kyoko-san, Furuba)  "Impossible is just a word to let people feel better when they quit." (Vyse, Skies of Arcadia Legends) Digislave #26987 | |
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| Ka Tokubi | Aug 11 2006, 09:52 PM Post #40 |
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No, he won't be attacked, he just might get molested XD. Random attacker: Oh, you're not a woman!? He's accepted. But something just occured to me, why didn't he just cut his hair as a kid? Most little kids have short hair, and besides, there's always the belief that if you shave your child's head, their hair will grow better. |
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| fightingcomet | Aug 11 2006, 09:59 PM Post #41 |
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...oh my. XD That would be funny... ^^
YAY~! XD *dance* Thank you! ^^
...Cause I didn't think of that. O_O;; And I have some strange addiction to teh long haired guys... Do you want me to change it?[/color] |
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"So even if you stumble and makes mistakes...that's not useless. Think of it like fertilizer. Sure it feels like crap...but it will help you grow!" (Kyoko-san, Furuba) "Impossible is just a word to let people feel better when they quit." (Vyse, Skies of Arcadia Legends) Digislave #26987 | |
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| Ka Tokubi | Aug 11 2006, 10:01 PM Post #42 |
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No, I don't think it really matters since it's "in the past"...I just found it rather wierd and unexplained. |
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| fightingcomet | Aug 11 2006, 10:14 PM Post #43 |
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Hmmmm...then let's just say he wanted to have long hair like his father. ^^ (the easy way out...) |
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"So even if you stumble and makes mistakes...that's not useless. Think of it like fertilizer. Sure it feels like crap...but it will help you grow!" (Kyoko-san, Furuba) "Impossible is just a word to let people feel better when they quit." (Vyse, Skies of Arcadia Legends) Digislave #26987 | |
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| Ka Tokubi | Aug 11 2006, 10:16 PM Post #44 |
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Or maybe because he wanted to look like A GREAT WARRIOR OF THE WIND!!!!XDXDXD... |
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| fightingcomet | Aug 11 2006, 10:49 PM Post #45 |
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Maybe. XD Hey- that may be why he likes windy days so much! ^o^ *dance* |
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"So even if you stumble and makes mistakes...that's not useless. Think of it like fertilizer. Sure it feels like crap...but it will help you grow!" (Kyoko-san, Furuba) "Impossible is just a word to let people feel better when they quit." (Vyse, Skies of Arcadia Legends) Digislave #26987 | |
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