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| Nereginn | Apr 4 2006, 11:20 PM Post #106 |
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Problem there.It'll take time to get rid of.I my computer won't let me so Crad does it. I'll tell him though.Thanks. |
 A-tisket, A-tasket, The scarecrow's out his casket Turn of the lights and lock the doors Hoping that he passes. I brought a bat to a mosh-pit (Well what you do then??) I split some craniums in half And caved a few in Before long I'm standing there alone I shut the party down For Bone Thugs, Tech N9ne, Kottonmouth and Esham | |
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| Duo Himura | Apr 4 2006, 11:30 PM Post #107 |
The Betrayer of the People and a Tyranical Capitalist Pig-Dog
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*blinks* Um... Digi looked at your latest submission, if that's what you're referring to, I actually haven't. However, you shouldn't withold any information from the GM before you get approved. If you don't want to show EVERYONE, you can talk to her through a PM or email or whatever, but Digi has to know at some point, and given your current record, I'd be pulling out all the stops if you're trying to convince her you're at the level for this RP. Nereginn... I don't really understand, but you can't keep those up while they're hotlinked, so I'm going to get rid of them myself. You can host them or whatever some other time, but until then, they're gone. |
 Aku Soku Zan.  Can I get a "Sieg Zeon"? Cibo canem domare potes... Pecunia hominem domare potes... Sed nemo et nihil Mibuis Lupos movere potest! | |
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| Digitaldreamer | Apr 5 2006, 03:12 AM Post #108 |
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...And...why are you deleting every post? That's only going to make anyone else who reads through this thread really confused, it's not going to cover your tracks with all the replies to it. Really, deleting everything is rather pathetic. Just listen to what we're saying, you don't need to delete everything. |
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| Crad | Apr 5 2006, 03:18 AM Post #109 |
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im deleting every post because although i do like the site (and to whoever made it its really good ) alot i jsut realized theres to many restrictions that jsut drain the fun out of it for me sorry bout that though ok thats it your annoying me you keep changing my mind about not joining and joining so i ask you MAKE UP MY MIND WILL YOU but here it is again Name: Neku (FA version 1.0) Age: Unknown Gender: Male Race/Species:Lycan Distinguishing Marks: A bite make on his right shoulder. Whatever they're from: Original Character. Family: He (accidentally) killed his father and ran away to keep from killing his mother. Likes : MEAT!!! and all forms of nature. Dislikes: people who destroy nature for personal game. Fav. Saying: Go away!! Hobbies: Hunting and drawing natural scenes from jungles. Physical Weaknesses: silver (duh) Physical Strength: Full moon. (increases strength 2 fold) Powers: able to turn into a wolf or Lycan (werewolf) at will with complete control over himself Weapons: Twin katanas and a bow Physical description: Has yellow cat eyes, white hair, 6’5ft tall (7’ft as a lycan) He wears long jeans with a black shirt and a black vest over that, over all of this he wear a black cloak with a hood concealing his face Personality: Mysterious, he keeps to himself History: Bitten as a young child by a wolf he soon found out that he had been cursed with a disease known as Lycanthropy raging out of control every full moon and feasting on the nearby villages livestock. When his blood thirst could no longer be controlled by simple cows he killed a human which when he awoke he found out that it had been his father who was out tending to a wounded sheep that night. Unable to forgive himself for killing his own father he ran away from home so he would not hurt anyone else who he held dear. As he grew into his prime he began to notice that he had stopped aging and so he was immortal. After several years he began to learn how to control himself and the wolf inside of himself even so he could not control the killer instinct, so every full moon when he changes he continued to kill but at a smaller rate and, so he got to the point he only had to kill once a month. At this time he was 230 years old but still kept his 33 appearance. As the years grew and time passed and technology advanced he learned to use guns but, still preferred to use his bow to hunt. He also learned of a secret clan of Lycans known as the Yanikonu meaning bloodmoon of which he joined and learned many fighting styles, sword styles and developed his fighting skill where he eventually became the best and most skilled fighter in the Yanikonu. As time continued to pass even though he lost count of how old he was he became very wise and after several thousand years he became leader of the Yanikonu. THIS PART DEPENDS IF I GET INTO FA OR NOT How Neku was first introduced to the FA After being seen in a not to far off town as a Lycan Neku was running away from people chasing him. When a few good marksmen managed to shoot him in the back it caused him to start rapidly bleeding and start to slow down and run out of energy at a faster pace. After a while of running and suffering a couple of major shots Neku came upon a building named (from what he later heard was known as) “Sakura no Yumi” where he collapsed on the front yard, (hoping some1 would see him) reverting back to a normal form with a hood over his head. OK 2 things this last part wasn’t very good because I didn’t think it through very well and I also ask that you (the admins and members of FA) forgive me for getting a little bit jumpy and posting this but I thought I should have it ready just incase I also realize that I didn’t punctuate it very well either but I probably will have to redit the character a couple more times in which I will also edit this last part ALL COMMENTS ON HOW TO IMPROVE ARE WELCOME AND MUCH APPRECITATED AND WILL TRY TO BE PUT IN ON FUTURE VERSIONS OF THE CHARACTER (DON’T BE SURPRISED IF I GET MAD BECAUSE I MIGHT BUT I WILL STILL CONSIDER YOUR COMMENTS) Sorry bout all that im just in a really awkward mood right now GREAT SEE what nereginn did now im regretting deleting all my post |
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Hallelujah by Jeff Buckley Baby I've been here before I've seen this room and I've walked this floor, I used to live alone before I knew ya And I've seen your flag on the marble arch and love is not a victory march It's a cold and it's a broken Hallelujah | |
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| Digitaldreamer | Apr 5 2006, 03:49 AM Post #110 |
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So, asking to use proper grammar and spelling is restricting? Also...DUO'S the creator of the board and you mouthed off at him earlier... Right, anyway...um...just because I'm being nice to you doesn't mean I'm trying to get you to join. Look…I know this may seem rather harsh, but you simply aren’t at the right skill level for this game. This game is for very literate, advanced role-players, and you simply do not qualify. You even misspelled the house name, for God’s sake! For future reference, it’s “Sakura no Yume”, not “Yumi”. Maybe in awhile you’ll mature enough to be at the right skill level, but until you learn to use better grammar and spelling I’m going to have to say no. Wait awhile, and maybe when you’re better…but for now, you’re rejected. If you still want me to go through your application and give you pointers I will, it would help you get better…but the fact remains that you’re simply not ready for this level of RPing. Terribly sorry, I hope you’ll be able to continue working on improving your game. Your Friendly Neighborhood GM, Digitaldreamer |
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| Crad | Apr 5 2006, 03:55 AM Post #111 |
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HAHAHA thats funny yumi and to think the one time i didnt go back and look how to spell it and when i said to restricting i didnt mean the spelling in punctuation How do you know how good a role player i am i dont think you should judge some1's roleplaying skills simply based on there charecter its supposed to be more on how they use it but its your RP your choice |
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Hallelujah by Jeff Buckley Baby I've been here before I've seen this room and I've walked this floor, I used to live alone before I knew ya And I've seen your flag on the marble arch and love is not a victory march It's a cold and it's a broken Hallelujah | |
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| Nereginn | Apr 5 2006, 03:59 AM Post #112 |
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That's okay Duo.You're just doing your job.Can I go without the signature and avatar? If not I'll find a way through this, but...thanks for trying dude. |
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A-tisket, A-tasket, The scarecrow's out his casket Turn of the lights and lock the doors Hoping that he passes. I brought a bat to a mosh-pit (Well what you do then??) I split some craniums in half And caved a few in Before long I'm standing there alone I shut the party down For Bone Thugs, Tech N9ne, Kottonmouth and Esham | |
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| Duo Himura | Apr 5 2006, 04:08 AM Post #113 |
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Yeah, you can always NOT have a signature or avatar. It's just an option to personalize your account and make your posts stand out, though NOT having one probably accomplishes that just as well around here. |
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Aku Soku Zan. Can I get a "Sieg Zeon"? Cibo canem domare potes... Pecunia hominem domare potes... Sed nemo et nihil Mibuis Lupos movere potest! | |
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| Digitaldreamer | Apr 5 2006, 04:09 AM Post #114 |
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Actually, we can judge your RPing ability based on how well you create a character, and yours is a generic Gary Stu, complete with "OMG MYSTERIOUS!" enterance. Generic angsty past, generic overpowered-ness, no flaws, and it's quite clear from your writing that you're the type to try and be the center of attention. That, and your writing isn't exactly going to win the pulitzer prize. I can tell just from your writing sample that how you use the character won't change much. Maybe with a lot of practice you could be better, but FA isn't the place to practice. I encourage you to keep practicing, but for now this is a definite no. Thanks for trying, anyway. |
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| Nereginn | Apr 5 2006, 04:24 AM Post #115 |
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Sorry Crad, but in all honesty, she (didn't you say you were a she?) has you pegged. You're a moderate role-player and do hog the attaention if you see fit. It's funny really.I can't think of any way you'll get in either.You were the kind of guy who hardly tries to improve at things you're not good at.Remember this is my oppinion and I have a rite to it. I was going to join this, but I kinda don't feel like it.Sorry. |
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A-tisket, A-tasket, The scarecrow's out his casket Turn of the lights and lock the doors Hoping that he passes. I brought a bat to a mosh-pit (Well what you do then??) I split some craniums in half And caved a few in Before long I'm standing there alone I shut the party down For Bone Thugs, Tech N9ne, Kottonmouth and Esham | |
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| strawhatpirate | Apr 5 2006, 04:44 PM Post #116 |
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TT.TT i want ot join but im scared that i might be bad at it..... so Tokubi wanted me to be Genjin but i decited to make my own charactor...... O_o i havent even told Tokubi that i wanted to do this.... oh well she will/might read this post. um... i wil make a new post and make my charator later... (O_o hey digi i seem a little late to join the role play. Am I still allowed to join?) yeh i will post later (oh and i will use this name. tokubi knows it, it is Yueny...  wierd name...)
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| Crad | Apr 5 2006, 08:59 PM Post #117 |
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wow i kinda half expected you guys to be mad at me so im surprised thats all you said digi |
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Hallelujah by Jeff Buckley Baby I've been here before I've seen this room and I've walked this floor, I used to live alone before I knew ya And I've seen your flag on the marble arch and love is not a victory march It's a cold and it's a broken Hallelujah | |
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| Dragonzroolx9000 | Jun 30 2006, 09:58 AM Post #118 |
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ZOMG SUPA CHARRIE IDEA!!!!1111oneoneone Name: Nasake Ookami Age: 16 Gender: Male Race/Species: Human (exposed to radiation from Seirei) Distinguishing Marks: Two parallel-line scars just below collarbone Anime/Manga/Whatever they're from: Original. *locks in safe* Family: He can't remember their names, he ran away when he was 10 years old Likes: Cool, humid weather, water, rain, winter Dislikes: Hot days, deserts, small spaces, overly hot summers Fav. Saying: "... You might say I have a 'furry little problem'..." Hobbies: Swimming, skiing, drawing (although he isn't fantastic) Powers (if any): Nasake can turn into a werewolf (his last name being quite coincidental)-- a werewolf with the power to shoot ice beams. These can freeze close to anything except really hot stuff. (And just to make things less complicated, when he turns back human his clothes are already on X3 ) Physical Weaknesses: Human- Although he does play a few sports, Nasake is not very muscular and can't lift a lot of weight, and he is not very enduring to pain and injury. He is kind of a klutz and can sometimes be pretty clueless as to his surroundings. He also transforms at midnight and stays a werewolf until sunrise. He can't remember anything that has happened when he had been a werewolf, only that he has done the latter and that he needs to get home. He has a strange necklace with a locket in the shape of a paw print that he only wears on the night of the full moon-- It keeps him from transforming. However, after midnight the locket starts sapping his power slowly until he has to transform before it kills him. In short, he has to transform every full moon or he would die. He can also transform at any time during the night of that phase if it's after midnight, meaning he has to get somewhere secluded so he can transform and not hurt anyone. Werewolf- The werewolf side of Nasake has a mind of its' own, meaning that Nasake's conscience cannot control what it does. Basically, it could run around like hell and kill a dozen people and Nasake can't control that until sunrise. However, even a werewolf has weaknesses-- The werewolf is highly sensitive to light and heat, and can be deterred easily by either. Its' ice beams are easily reflected, and their trajectory can easily be altered with a mirrorlike object in their path. Physical Strengths: Human- Nasake is a very good runner-- Throughout his lifetime, he had to run a lot to get to somewhere safe to transform. His legs are very strong due to this. Werewolf- The werewolf Nasake is strong. Very strong. As in pick-up-a-rigless-semi-truck-and-throw-it-strong. It could run thru a cement wall and make it seem like it walked through a sheet of paper. It can also run very fast, enough to overtake a car on the highway. The werewolf has an array of instincts that resemble a wolf's, but have been extremely radical in the werewolf's case. It will attack any living thing, human, animal or whatever, that it senses, helpless or not. It's a living incarnation of pure cold-bloodedness. Weapon: Human- None Werewolf- Claws, fangs, ice beams Physical Description: Human- Nasake is about five foot six, and roughly 180 pounds, only guesswork because he never cared to and/or got the chance to weigh and measure himself, with dark blue unkempt hair, almost black, and green eyes. He's always wearing his super-baggy, old, and faded jeans and black T-shirt. Werewolf- The werewolf is around 300 pounds and a good 9 feet when standing up straight, with demonic yellow cat eyes and sky-blue fur. It has a mohawk-like mane, colored dark blue that goes from the forehead down to the top of the creature's rump; There is also a smaller chest mane, that starts at the base of the throat and ends parallel to the base of the back legs. The werewolf's general physique is somewhat out of proportion-- Enormously muscular front legs with large handlike claws made to rip your insides out, with a somewhat large wolf's head, comared to small, normally sized wolf hind legs. Small lines of dots trace across the werewolf's body, joining a irregular shapes at each joint. (I'll post a piccy of the werewolf when I get home) Personality: Nasake is a realtively quiet person, almost shy, but toward any friends he is quite laid-back and relaxed. In stressful sitations, he has a habit of running his fingers thru his hair and pacing a little. He is rather frustrated with his killer werewolf alter-ego thing, and is always trying to get around it in some way. History: Nasake's family was one of the very few survivors of the Angel incident. He was only 3 years old. Nasake can only remember very little, but he remembers a bright silvery flash and a prickling hot feeling just below his left collarbone. Later on, he discovered the scar. A few years later, when he was 10, he transformed for the first time, and nearly massacred his family. He decided that for their own safety, he would have to run away. And he did. When Nasake was 13 he discovered the mysterious locket which let him stave off his transforming for a while. Now, 3 years later from then, Nasake has decided that a cautious settling-down in a boarding house in Ohio would be a reasonable choice. He has no idea what he's getting himself into. ~~~ Weeell, if there's anything I need to change, tell me. |
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| Digitaldreamer | Jun 30 2006, 02:29 PM Post #119 |
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Hmmm...interesting character. I like him. The only thing you need to get rid of is the Ice Beams, I think being able to go a general rampage is enough. Still, the whole transforming EVERY night could be a problem...it might be better if you just change it to the night of the full moon and the nights that follow when it's almost full. Every night would probably cause a few too many problems. Right, that's all I got. If you make those changes he's accepted, though I ask that you wait until the next "day" to introduce him. |
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| fightingcomet | Jun 30 2006, 02:54 PM Post #120 |
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...I want to join...is it allowed? O_O;; (I want make sure first.) |
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