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| Digitaldreamer | Jan 29 2006, 07:39 AM Post #1 |
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Yes, I know the title is cheesy. Bare with me while I explain everything here... Basically, this role-play is very, very complicated. On the outside it’d seem like a simple story about a bunch of…less-than-normal people living in a boarding house, but there’s more to it than that. Years ago, there was a war. World War III, I guess. With the weapons the world has now, it was really more of a great, almost mindless slaughter. When citizens asked why it happened, they were given all sorts of political answers, something about how one country wanted the others land or whatever…but that was wrong. Before the war, a meteor fell from space. Within this meteor was a strange shimmering crystal, which gave off a hypnotic sort of light. Or at least that’s what the second scientists who went to check it out said. The first weren’t heard from again, after all. The second team of scientists brought the crystal to their lab and studied it. The crystal carried some sort of strange power, a power level that their machines could barely handle. Some scientists even claimed that the crystal was alive, that it had spoken to them, that it had a will of its own. Of course, no one believed that. A religious man finally named the crystal “Seirei”, which means “holy ghost”, as he believed this was the holy ghost incarnated into something solid. Though most didn’t believe this, the name stuck. Of course, when the rulers of various countries heard of this, they wanted the power of the Seirei for themselves. And predictably, because humans are selfish by nature, the country whom originally owned the crystal wouldn’t give it away. Fighting broke out. Thousands were slaughtered. WWIII happened, and hardly anyone even knew the real reason it happened was over some stone. And of course, as with all wars, a sort of arms race happened. The countries tried to develop the best weapons as quickly as possible….the country with the Seirei took that a bit far. They thought ‘if the Seirei is so powerful, why not use it as a weapon’? They tried combining it with weapons, but it didn’t work. The only thing bits of the Seirei would combine with was a human being. More specifically, children. With this in mind, hundreds of children were taken and experimented on in what came to be known as the “angel” project. All eventually failed. Small samples of the Seirei alone were enough to kill a person, and those that did have the right blood type received some sort of mutation. Of course, the public never heard about it. On occasion they saw the sillouttes of SOMETHING on the news, but they never found out about the angel project. Most of the public never noticed anything was up. Until people started dying. One day, it was reported that an entire city had been wiped away. It was gone, just like that. It happened at random, all over the world, entire cities were destroyed, millions murdered. It seemed the government's latest "angel" chose no sides. It just killed. Then one day it all just stopped. The war ended, and people went back to their normal lives. No one spoke of the “angels” again. But all over the world, children still walk the streets, seemingly okay with the fact that they don’t remember half of their life. Teenagers hide in back alleys, perfecting powers they should not have. Adults who did know of the project are constantly watching, constantly searching. They know the angels are reawakening. Their powers are forming, their memories are resurfacing. Seirei is awakening again. It’s not happy. While the world seems to be fairly normal now, the government is searching for potential angels behind the scenes. Above all, for their main weapon, the “perfect angel”. To stop them? Or is it to control them to start another war? No one’s entirely sure. Not that many actually know. Your character can be anything. They could be an ordinary person who just moved into the boarding house, “Sakura no Yume”, unaware of any of the mess. They could be a person from another world who sensed the danger and came to try and stop it. Or they could be one of the forgotten angels… Whatever you choose, this will be one hell of a ride. Okay, done with the drama. Lemme explain about your characters. You can chose to be a character from any series (anime, manga, video game, book, etc.) and bring them into this world. They can already live there, as if it were an AU, or they could have somehow ended up in the "normal" world by choice (they sensed something bad was happening somewhere and chose to come) or not by choice (sent there, fell into a plot hole, whatever.) If you don't want to be a character from a series, your character can be an original character, but remember that the character has to be believable. The character must have flaws, weaknesses, etc, etc. Everyone will be living at the boarding house known as "Sakura no Yume". No, you can't live anywhere else. It's fun forcing all these characters into close qaurters anyway. Your character can be, as I stated above, an oridinary person who just wanted a nice place to live and ended up in this mess, or they could be someone from another world who is trying to fit in. Experiments: Your character is one of those left over from the angel project. This doesn't mean they had Seirei implanted in their body, as they would have died had it been implanted. But your character was exposed to the rays of the crystal, so they mutated. This means your character has powers and probably has amnesia keeping them from remembering the crap about getting them, fun~! Your character can already know that they have powers and be adapt at fighting with them, or they can be just discovering them now. No angel's power is the same as the others, and depending on how powerful it is, that power drains a bit to a TON of energy as it's put to use. I'm considering having a few of these characters actually be 'angels'...so I may PM a few of you and suggest it, look out! Right...so, that's the deal. A few rules! 1. If you can’t spell very well, please type your post first in a program that has spellcheck, like Microsoft Word. Use spellcheck, then copy and paste your post into the posting area. This makes things a lot easier on everyone, as then we avoid hard to read posts and thus avoid much confusion. 2. Discription is good. Adjectives are your friends. 3. Romance is allowed, between canon characters, between original characters, it doesn’t matter. Shonen ai and shojo ai are allowed as long as you keep it PG. But please, if you’re going to have your character, say, crushing on Zoro, don’t expect him to automatically fall for that character. It’s the other players’ decision. 4. Post. Check the boards regularly. If you haven't posted in two weeks, I'm afraid you'll have to be removed from the game. I don't want to do this, but it will, essentially, come down to whether or not we want the game to hang. Which we don't. 5. The max number of characters that you are allowed to have is four~! Yes, more than one, but make sure you keep track of them all. 6. Abide by the usual RP board rules, check em' if you can't remember. 7. Duo, if you apply for this RP and then hold it up like you have with my other ones I will kill you. I don't care that you're a genius and one of the writers for the webcomic, I will kill you. I know how you are with these things and I know you get busy, so I'm saying this now. 8. You get three warnings, one for every time you break the rules. After the third warning, you’re out. 9. If you read this, tell me how corny the name of the RP is for the password to join. XD FINALLY, THAT'S IT. Here's the application form! Name: Age: Gender: Race/Species: Distinguishing Marks: Anime/Manga/Whatever they're from: Family: Likes Dislikes: Fav. Saying: Hobbies: Physical Weaknesses: Physical Strengths: Powers (if any): Weapon: Physical Description: (include eye & hair color, height, weight, clothing.) Personality: History: Writing Sample: If you're from any of my other role-plays, you don't need this. I've already seen my crew write, you're already qaulified so don't worry about it. Right...so...that's it. ^^ On we go! Oh...Luffy's taken by me and I believe Zoro is taken by Saiyako...I need to talk with her to get their SOOPER SECRET PLOT POINT RIDDEN PAST worked out first, though...just know they're taken for now. |
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| Charlett | Jan 29 2006, 08:03 AM Post #2 |
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Name: Usopp Age: 17 Gender: Male Race: Human Distinguishing Marks: Long Nose Anime/Manga he's from: One Piece Family: Father, who left to find a good job. Mother died, and Usopp has been waiting for his father to return ever since. Likes: Lying, Playing with friends, telling stories to Kaya/anyone who'll listen, bugs Dislikes: Jerks who make fun of his nose, having his lies pointed out like they were LIES or something Fav. Saying: "I am the Great Captain Usopp-Sama!" Hobbies: Inventing different weapons Physical Weaknesses: physically weak, a coward Physical Strengths: Smart and resourceful Weapon: Slingshot, Gunpowder Stars used most Physical Description: Usopp is a medium sized character, who has curly black hair (Natural permed!). Usopp always wears overalls, and a striped wrap that goes around his arm. It's like an archer's protective guard, or at least, that's what Usopp says... Personality: Usopp is always energetic, and probably one of the only characters who can truly keep up with Luffy's energeticness without getting completely exasperated. Usopp is a lying master, and usually uses it to help his friends, or keep his skin... History: Usopp's parents, who were once workers under Kaya's parents, were not very wealthy, but Usopp didn't mind. He got to play with Kaya when they were kids! It was then that Kaya's father died, and her mother died of sadness afterwards. To gain some money, Usopp's father Yasopp left to find a better job, and his mother died of a sickness soon afterward. With nowhere else to go, Usopp moves into Sakura no Yume in an attempt to find a decent place to live, that doesn't cost too much... --- Name: Kaya Age: 16 Gender: Female Race: Human Distinguishing Marks: Nothing special Anime/Manga she's from: One Piece Family: None Likes: Candies, Usopp's stories. Dislikes: Her sickness Fav. Saying: "Usopp-San, what are you going to tell me about today?" Hobbies: She is too weak to have any real hobbies... Physical Weaknesses: Her sickness Physical Strengths: Kindness, a strange aura of peace and healing Weapon: If anything, a parasol Physical Description: Kaya is a typical blonde haired, blue eyed cutie. She is very short and weighs practically nothing because of her terrible sickness that robs her of energy. She wears a white dress at all times, and never, ever gets it dirty Personality: Kaya is shy, cute, and not outspoken at all. She is extremely kind, and do whatever is in her power to help her friends. She just can't do much anymore... History: After her father died, leaving her mother and she behind with lots of debts, Kaya and her mother were sent from wealthy aristocrats to the poorhouse, with her childhood friend, Usopp. It was then that her mother died of heartbreak. Kaya began to lose hope of life as well, and came down with the same heartbreak that her mother did. If it weren't for Usopp, she would probably be sleeping next to her mother and father at this moment. She lives in Sakura no Yume only because Usopp does as well. Because she cannot work from her sickness, Usopp has two part time jobs to pay for both of their rent. Writing Sample: "Eaaaaaaarrrg!" Usopp cried, sucking on his index finger. That darned iron bar just HAD to fall on his finger, didn't it? "Stupid thing!" The sniper cried, standing up and slamming his foot into the bar... "Eaaaaaaarrrg!" "Usopp-San..." Kaya murmured, settling down next to the sniper, "Be careful next time," She smiled at her friend, knowing just what would cheer him up, "Tell me a story, Usopp-San, one of your amazing adventures when you were young." The Great Captain Usopp-Sama stood and smiled, "Of course! Anything for you, Kaya! Now, once upon a time..." |
 Because I love Pearl, dangit! Saberae made it for me, and I collected the sprites! Thanks again, Saberae! Sanji: "We have enough meat, but we're out of bread and spinach, and the water's low, it sucks..." Luffy: "That IS a problem, because I do so likes me spinach..." -One P1ece, Ragweed's AU doujinshi --- "ROFS? Rolling On the Floor... Starving...?" Phoenix Wright, listening to Sal Manella's l337 | |
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| Strawhat Dragon | Jan 29 2006, 09:08 AM Post #3 |
Forum Robin, Irken Tallest, Psychonaut
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Forgotten Angels is the password. Name:Zeralu Age:1600(looks 16) Gender:female Race/Species:half human half dragon demon Distinguishing Marks:scar across left eye. Anime/Manga/Whatever they're from:My anime imagination Speech: Ancient Dragon language, can talk in English but sometimes replaces Gs with Ds. Family: None Likes: Meat, dark, friends, challenges, sweet things, shiny things. Dislikes: Light, vegetables, bitter stuff, death, cute, cuddly things. Fav. Saying: Make me mad, and you won't have a happy day. Hobbies: Flying, hunting, archery, sword fighting. Physical Weaknesses: Not much muscle so can't lift very heavy things, wings small enough only to fly myself, left footpaw is injured for life and can not be injured again or will pain me beyond life. Physical Strengths:Sharp teeth and claws, is able to blow fire for a while, hypnotizing eyes. Powers: Hypno eyes, shadow claw, and dragon fire Weapon: Sword called Dragon Wing and a long, slim, but strong, bow with swan feathered arrows, along with teeth and claws. Physical Description: Waist length silver hair, on silver eye(left), one red eye(right), wears a black kimono with silver and red dragons on it, height-6ft 8in(she's tall!), weight-115 lbs. Personality: Mysterious, dark, yet can be very hyper, also talkative sometimes. History: Parents killed at the age of 15, father was a dragon demon and mother was a human.Escaped to the mountains until wings were big enough to fly and I flew to a volcano for 300 years.Then I decided to travel and meet new peple.. Writing Sample: Zeralu walked along the travel-worn road.She was humming a soft Dragon song when something shiny caught her eye.Her strange eyes traced it to something glinting in the road.She put her clawed hand on her sword Dragon Wing in case it was a soilder in armor. "I wonder what that could be? Hmm, I should idnore it,but it's so shiny!" She walks over to it and finds a shiny gem. "This will do nicely with Dragon Wing's other gems, but until I put it there, I'll just sit here and stare at it. First thing first, need to det out of this sun." Umm, ta-da? |
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| Dragonzroolx9000 | Jan 29 2006, 11:52 AM Post #4 |
FAAAAAAANSERVICE~!
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Name: Coryn Age: The eagle is 12, the boy is 16 Gender: Male Race/Species: Golden Eagle Distinguishing Marks: Oddly bright yellow eyes, small notch on right side of beak Anime/Manga/Whatever they're from: My imagination! Family: Their names are lost to us... *dramatic background music* Likes: Long journeys, solitude Dislikes: Being in a very crowded place at one time, very annoying people Fav. Saying: Whoever said I was a showoff? Maybe I'm just presenting my skills. Hobbies: Hunting, flying conditions, weather Physical Weaknesses: Sense of smell is pretty poor; can't lift anything beyond 90lbs. Physical Strengths: Sight, hearing, flight maneuverability and speed Powers (if any): Telepathic communication Weapon: Talons, beak, and gravity. Physical Description: A two-foot-long and two-feet-high raptor with rust-red feathers and a few black feathers on the back; underbelly feathers are downy and white with brown speckles; Yellow eyes that glow in the dark a bit Personality: Likes being alone, but isn't cocky or anything; pretty much has the typical attitude of a 14-year-old boy. History: In the duration of the big arms race of WWIII, one country had devised a cunning yet ethically atrocious plan; if they transplanted the brain of a human into an animal that was very big and very dangerous, they could definitely have something going on there for some heavy assault troops. So they began doing experiments on the very few willing human subjects and smaller, easier animals to work with, such as horses and large birds of prey. After many weeks of pure failure and death for most of the subjects, they had one success. They had managed to surgically downsize the brain of a 14-year-old boy, who was forced into the experiment by his insane mother, attach a special chip, which allowed telepathic powers, in a certain center of the brain enabling speech, and transplant it into a golden eagle. They named the succesful sum of their work 'Experiment X-33'. However, a single yet disastrous flaw had wormed its' way in: This creature had still the personality, beliefs, and point of view of the boy. A big debate ensued. Half the scientists on the job wanted to keep the creature they had created for guiding them; the others wanted it destroyed because it refused to take any orders. Neither side was backing down. While the scientists squabbled, a mysterious young girl had made her way through the facility and saw Experiment X-33. She was supposed to be the next subject for tests, but since this success, she wasn't needed. She had escaped her cell and found him in the cramped cage. She used a lockpick she had fashioned and had freed the bird. In less than ten minutes, he was out of the hellhole and into the fresh air. He ditched his experiment name and went for Coryn. Never answering for anything else. He now has decided to take refuge in the rafters and attic of a boarding house once abandoned, but now all of a sudden it is packed. That would equal a not-too-happy Coryn. Simple math. ~~~~ Fee-yew! |
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| Digitaldreamer | Jan 29 2006, 03:02 PM Post #5 |
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Charlett: But of course, you are accepted! Squee, Captain Usopp-sama and Kaya, wonderful~! Strawhat Dragon: Ummmm....I'm sorry, but I think I'll have to deny this one. Your character is way too overpowered. That and I'm unsure if we can have another half-dragon character...I already have one slated as one of the bad guys. I suppose you can keep her, but you need to seriously power her down. Given how she's had six hundred years, her abilities are accurate, but still far too powerful for this role-play. How about a spell has been put on her which has made her forget half of her abilities and has lowered her power-level significantly? I'd suggest getting rid of the hypnotic eyes and the bow and arrow, mostly. Also, the personality needs work. You can't be "dark and mysterious, yet hyper" at the same time. I'd suggest cutting the dark and the mysterious thing, it sounds cliche anyway, no offense. She seems like the type to be hyperactive and rather talkitive, yet rather morbid. Also, may I point out to you that it's probably best not to switch from third to first person in the application? It's very confusing, and it worries me that you may do it in game, so don't do that. Stick with third person and remember that after a comma or a period in a sentence, there is a space seperating it from the next sentence or part of sentence. Other than that, we're good I suppose. Dragonzroolx: Ohhh, I love your character~! He reminds me of Tobias from the Animorphs, is that where you got the idea? Regaurdless, I love him. ^^ He's a welcome addition to the Sakura no Yume. you are it's okay if you come into my house...the birds are already talking to me, I do Would it be okay if Hikaru already knows Coryn's there and knows he can talk and everything? It'd be amusing to have her be all "Oh, whatever you are, come on in~! The birds are already talking to me, I doubt I can get much more insane~! ^^" She believes Coryn's a real person, but she'd be constantly joking about how she's clearly going insane. Is it okay if I have things like that? |
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| Japanese Fuzzy | Jan 29 2006, 04:34 PM Post #6 |
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Is Mine okay Digitaldreamer? :ph43r:
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| Strawhat Dragon | Jan 29 2006, 04:53 PM Post #7 |
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Okay I will switch my stlye of typing. Also she doesn't have a bow and arrow, Hypno eyes, and she has a curse that made her forget how to use many of her powers and it lowered her power lever. She is very hyper and talkative (she still doesn't like the light! She's sorta of like the real me) and can she be one of the forgotten angels? Every dragon trait she had is gone. Is this better, or does she need more work? |
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| Envy | Jan 29 2006, 06:35 PM Post #8 |
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The passwprd is: Forgotten Angels. Name: Tori (She doesn't have a last name, I guess. O_o) Age: Appears to be about 18. Her real age is unkown Gender: Female Race/Species: Demon (I love anime clichés) Distinguishing Marks: A scar on the right side of her neck. (It's very small, and her hair covers it up) Anime/Manga/Whatever they're from: None. My own original character Family: Father (demon), and older brother Dante. Likes: Being alone and fighting. Dislikes: Loud people, being in crowed rooms and her brother Fav. Saying: "Just shut up and no one will get hurt." (actually, I say that all the time. O_o) Hobbies: Singing, writing and listening to music. Physical Weaknesses: Is way too head strong and she thinks she can handle even the most dangerous of tasks by herself. Physical Strengths: Has a very strong power within her, but she can only use it for a few minutes at a time. Powers (if any): (Explained above...) Weapon: Her powers and a dagger, given to her by her mother Physical Description: She's about 5'7" and she weighs about 102lbs. She has blood red eyes and silver hair(yay, more anime clichés-ness). She wears black pants with chains and lots of zipers on them, a long back and white striped sleeved shirt, black boots and black fishnet gloves. (Yay for wanting to be goth...) Personality: Is very uh, not nice very to be with. She hates being with other people, well, mostly everyone. She's usually found sitting along writing one of her many stories and listening to music. History: She was banished to the human world for some unknown reason. Now, she is living a life without anyone. No friends, no family. Although, her brother does stop by every once in a while to talk, but it usually ends in a fight. So, now trying to live a normal life and forget who and what she is she joins the boarding house called, Sakura no Yume. (Wow, that sounded really....Lame. O_o) Writing Sample: I'll just use a small bit from a story that I'm writing right now. I don't want to think of something new to tyoe up right now. v.v" I stop and stair the gate to Kong Studios. In aw, I though to myself, that this couldn’t be the right place. “Damn. This place looks like something fresh out of an old horror movie.” I said, taking out a piece of paper. Looking at the address, I found out that this, of all places, was Kong Studios. Yay, finally done. 
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| Ka Tokubi | Jan 29 2006, 07:51 PM Post #9 |
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Name: Hong Su-yo Age: 15 Gender: Female Race/Species: Human Radiated by Seirei Distinguishing Marks: Two scars on shoulders Anime/Manga/Whatever they're from: OC Family: Parents dead, foster parents Likes: Singing, Fashion designing, dancing, soda Dislikes: Obnoxious boys (and obnoxious girls too for that matter…but there seems to be less of those –‘___-‘…), too much homework Fav. Saying: “…”(when not happy)/”Awesome” (when happy) Hobbies: see “likes” Physical Weaknesses: Gets tired easily and is not very strong Physical Strengths: Determined, powers from Seirei radiation, and she's a pretty decent student Powers (if any): Angel wings grow, at first randomly, then later at will. They let her fly. Angel’s tears: This ability is very difficult to activate and only works when she’s at a deep emotional limit of sadness or anger. It can heal one person (mentally/emotionally, or physically) but is very emotionally and sometimes even physically draining on her. Weapon: Uh…she punches people when she’s angry O.o… Physical Description: Eye color: Jet black Hair color: Black Height: 5ft Wieght: 100lb Clothes: Normal: White T-shirt with “tenshi” Kanji on it/Blue and purple tank-top with Melancholy on it; Denim shorts or jeans; blue tennis shoes School: Sweater vest and white collar shirt with dark blue tie and dark blue knee-length pleated dress Personality: Su-yo is generally friendly with most people but if she meets a quiet person, especially if they are strong or smart, she will either be very afraid of that person or be very competitive. She gets angry easily if she thinks someone is making fun of her or her friends. History: When Su-yo was young (like, an infant), her parents were involved in the earlier stages of the Seirei project but there was an accident in the lab during an experiment. Su-yo’s mother who loved her a lot had always carried the baby around with her even when she worked (she was high-er ranking so she sort of got away with that –‘___-‘…). Su-yo’s mom and dad were killed in the explosion and Su-yo was exposed to the radiation of the Seirei. At first, the scientists and the government were careful of her because they weren’t sure what the radiation would do, but when nothing happened, they tried to get her adopted but everyone was suspicious of her. Right now, her “foster parents” (actually government agents, disguised to make her more comfortable and normal) have put her in Sakura no Yume. She doesn’t remember very much of what happened when she was little but sometimes she’ll have nightmares that she doesn’t understand. Recently, the two scars on her shoulders (which no one seems to know anything about) have gotten really itchy. Often she’ll scratch them so much, she’s afraid she might have made them bleed, but it never seems to. Sometimes, though, she’ll come back with some white fuzz on her hands that remind her of down-feathers. She ignored it at first, but after this reoccurred a few times, she got suspicious. One night, she was having a nightmare again. There were lots of explosions and people screaming. She was lying on the ground with fire all around her and she didn’t know what was going on. Suddenly, she was up in the night sky, flying! It was like she was awake, but she couldn’t be…When she looked around, she saw that there were two large, silver, feathered wings coming from her shoulders. They shocked her so much she almost fell out of the sky. She caught herself just in time. Then she flew back to her dormitory. The wings folded and slowly disappeared. She laid down in her bed and went to sleep. When she woke up the next morning, she wondered if her fly through the night sky was possibly not a dream. No, it couldn’t have been real. But as she got out of bed, a single perfect silver feather laid on the ground. Could it be? No, she often made costumes and it could have just fallen off of one, but she hadn’t made any costumes with feathers recently. She picked it up. No, it was too fine quality to be from one of her costumes, but maybe someone just accidentally put on in that bag. No, it was just a coincidence. She was just dreaming one of her weird dreams again. She put the feather in her drawer and forgot about it. But her shoulders didn’t itch at all that day, and that was strange. That night, she dreamed again, of the fire and explosions and screams again. But this time, she remembered a strange, almost freaky yet also almost seductive light. And the screams were now a word. Seirei…seirei… What was that? What was Seirei? It sounded familiar. Oh, that was right, she had read something about that on the Internet, but figured it was just and urban myth. She always loved to read insane and cool stories when surfing on the net. Could she have been remembering a Seirei radiation? She knew that the people who gave her money to live on, weren’t her real parents and that her real parents were dead. She never thought about her parents, she had never known them. She sometimes wondered why no one wanted to adopt her, but that was just normal, after she got older. Most people didn’t want to adopt a teenager. They all wanted cute little kids. She had figured she was just unlucky. Could the “seirei” be real, and not just a story. Could the death of her real parents have something to do with it? Could maybe, the radiation and the flight, not have been a dream? OOC: Okay, that’s my character @.@…please don’t call her a mary-sue just because she grows angel wings at least she’s not super tall and skinny and blond… I hope that everyone can just mostly treat her normal and everything is good. And if you don’t like the history and want me to transfer some of it onto the actual RP, that’s okay too… I already created her (except her name has no dash in it, she has no last name, and she doesn’t have angel wings. The Tshirt was the only thing I already created). So, I didn’t mean for it to be this way if it’s not good. |
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| Duo Himura | Jan 29 2006, 08:49 PM Post #10 |
The Betrayer of the People and a Tyranical Capitalist Pig-Dog
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Aww... I got my OWN special warning? I feel so loved... for I am DUO! Unintentional slayer of RPs! For the record, I'm helping Digi at the moment, whether I play or not will depend on whether I'm still interested in a week or two when my enthusiasm for this sort of thing usually wears off... and then I may still do an NPC sort of role, just to avoid holding everyone up again... though I guess my time would be better spent defrosting the OP RP... Okay, this is for Strawhat Dragon. Right, well, for starters, no on the forgotten angel bit, Digi's hand-picking those. As in, if she wants you for it, she'll contact YOU. Don't ask her. Second, you need to repost your ENTIRE entry. It is a REAL pain to scroll down because you posted that you were changing certain things as a separate post, just make a new post that includes your changes. Even though you got rid of this, out of curiosity, how can one be half human, half dragon, and half demon? Or is a "dragon demon," something else entirely? And... um... well, frankly, I think it's pretty obvious you didn't take Digi's advice and throw that into a spellchecker of some sort. MS Word is recommended. But... how to say this... your character sounds like she suffers from Multiple-Personality disorder. You can't be dark and mysterious AND hyperactive... it just doesn't work that way. When you say "pain you beyond life," do you mean that the left 'paw' is like your Achiles (sp?) heel, in that hitting it again will kill you? Or does it just hurt. And um... I don't how EXACTLY to put this... you may want to work on your writing some. I don't know if Digi can help you there or not... One of the forumites should be able to, though. Edit by Digi: Duo, you need to SAY who you're pointing this all out to. XD Added it for you. |
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| Strawhat Dragon | Jan 29 2006, 08:55 PM Post #11 |
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Wow, who are you Duo Himura? I've never seen you before! Oh, and you have completely confused me, I'm only 12! I will edit my orignal post then, I'm just really confused now. |
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| Digitaldreamer | Jan 29 2006, 09:25 PM Post #12 |
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Pointer to everyone: DO NOT ASK TO BE A FORGOTTEN ANGEL! These characters are….well, I can only expect very good role-players to handle properly without making the role too wangsty or hijacking the role-play entirely. There aren’t going to be very many of these, and if someone is one, only that person and myself will know it. It’s more fun that way. Basically, if I see your character and think they’ll make a good forgotten angel, I’ll contact you and ask. If you ask me, I’m probably not going to give you the part. If you don’t get contacted and you wanted to be one, don’t worry. I have plans for each characters part, so don’t feel like you’re getting shunted aside. There is no main character in a role-play, after all. Everyone takes their turn at getting the spotlight, this role-play won’t work without that. J.A. Lover: Ah, sorry, you posted your app just as I was making my post for the other three. As for the application….I’m sorry, but no. Your character is pretty Mary Sue-ish. She has no flaws! Give me a PHYSICAL weakness, meaning PHYSICAL, not just meaning she can easily be tricked! Maybe she’s clumsy? What’s she so active in? She can’t be strong in all areas of her body, she’s only nineteen after all. Give her a physical weakness, and be more specific about her strengths. The physical description is…..very off. Your character cannot be seven feet tall and weigh only one hundred pounds, that is way too thin for that kind of height. Lower her height, give her more weight. Her personality…what are her FLAWS!? Does she have a quick temper? Maybe she’s easily depressed? Maybe she’s a bit oblivious to things around her? No real person doesn’t have any personality flaws, give her some. Mira’s history is….well…I guess it works, except for the last bit. No one considered the ‘angel’ to be some sort of male diva, no one ever saw his face. Anyone who ever did died. Your character cannot have survived him attacking her home while she was there, because she would have died. You could make it so maybe she was off at a friends house when the ‘angel’ killed her family, but she can’t have seen his face. My last request is that you run your posts through some sort of spellcheck before you post. You’ve got a lot of misspellings in there and a spellcheck would really help me when I read through your posts. If you can fix all that, then I suppose we’re good. Just keep in mind that your character isn’t an ‘angel’, she’s just one of the aftereffects from the project and to the government really isn’t too worried about her. Strawhat Dragon: Duo is my Co-GM, and the admin of the this board. This is his board, so I suggest you remember who he is. He asked you questions, so you should answer them. He wants you to repost your application so we can see the changes made instead of just editting it and saying you did. He asked you: Even though you got rid of this, out of curiosity, how can one be half human, half dragon, and half demon? Or is a "dragon demon," something else entirely? When you say "pain you beyond life," do you mean that the left 'paw' is like your Achiles (sp?) heel, in that hitting it again will kill you? Or does it just hurt. Also, he suggested you use spellcheck, as did I. MS Word is recommended. Envy: Can you elaborate more on this “strong power” of hers? What does it do and to what extent? If you don’t want people in the RP to know, you can just PM me the info. I have to make sure she’s not overpowered. Other than that, you’re good to go. Ka Tokubi: Well, I really like your character. She’s accepted. ^^ I have some things I need to talk to you about though, so expect a PM. |
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| Envy | Jan 29 2006, 09:34 PM Post #13 |
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Oh, sorry. See I knew that I would forget something! DX It's just mainly the power that she got from her dad. But she was never tought how to use/control it. So she trys to keep her powers a secret. But, like I said before, she can only use it for a short amount of time. But, when she does use them she's pretty powerful, but not too powerful. SHe can still be hurt and all that good stuff when she's using her powers.
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| Digitaldreamer | Jan 29 2006, 09:39 PM Post #14 |
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But what does the power DO!? What is the power!? Is it to create force fields, shoot energy beams, control an element, what does it do!? |
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| Envy | Jan 29 2006, 09:43 PM Post #15 |
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Yarg! I hate being tired! I always forget things! TT________TT Uhhh...It makes her change into a demon looking creature and she gets a little bit more powerful. o______o" Yay. I just love forgetting things....TT________TT |
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