Duo Himura,Jan 20 2006

11:18 PM

BigDNA,Jan 19 2006

07:26 PM

Sitting in a dark dark room with no tv,no computer,no game system"Why me"though to myself why do I scare people"Why are y'all a scared of me" got out of bed and headed out through the door"I'm hungry I need something to eat"look at the food store across the street.

Couple Of hours later!!!

"What you don't have any food I don't believe this!!!!!!!!!  If this is a food store y'all have to have some food.  If I was a badguy I'll destory this place" :angry:
Store Owner: Don't destory me please I'll....I'll...I'll do whatever you what please don't destroy me!!!!!!!
Me:What I don't want to destory you.  I need to find out way are people afriad of me.


P.S I sign up on the other thread

Right.... well, I'm not sure if English is your first language or not, but either way yours could use some work. Particularly your use of verb tenses.

More importantly, I'm not really sure what this has to do with anything... at all... see, usually an introduction post puts you somewhere in the vicinity of where the other characters are. You aren't even in the right world yet. If you wanted to include something like this as part of a larger post, it works a bit better, but in the end, this is really irrelevant.

Aaaand.... I'm in a GM mood today, so I'm thinking I may start monitering posts around here to a greater degree... To continue with things that need to be fixed...

Writing like a script, where you put someone's name and then what they say, is not allowed in a role play. A role play post should include some description of some kind. If this is an inhibition due to English not being your first language (an introduction thread would be good to clear stuff like that up, by the way), then I'm sorry, but trying to play in a role play in a language you're not proficient in is probably a mistake in the first place, so the rules still apply.

Um... also, when writing normally, transitional phrases like "A few hours later" are put at the beginning of a paragraph, not by themselves. Also, I'm assuming you're going for 'minutes,' not hours, because most people don't allow hours to pass between 'I'm hungry,' and going to go get food.

Smilies are NOT to be used in conjunction with RPing, use words to describe things, not pictures.

Please, include a bit more detail in your posts. Or at least, some level of detail, at least a bit more description is going to be necessary for this RP to really work well, so we don't get confused by one another. And.... if you can't... then I don't think the RP is going to work out well for you anyway.

So, everyone else should probably disregard this, although it doesn't effect anyone else anyway, so it doesn't really matter.

That post aside, J.A. Lover, bit more information on where you are, please. If you want to be near where the rest of the gang is, or near the house or something give us a bit of description to help us know if we're to run into you. Typically a post should run until someone else has to react, unless it's getting to be really long. So if you're still off by yourself, you need to add until you're in the general area where everyone else is, and if you are already there, then you need to describe your surroundings enough so we know where in the vicinity you are.

If I missed anything, Digi will get it...