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School writing project please critque; One Piece story
Topic Started: Sep 10 2005, 05:18 PM (300 Views)
Digislave #2718281828459
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Well, the problem was that Moose flamed people and made rude comments about them for caring about Zoro's name, instead of respecting (or at least tolerating) them. Heck, in Mongolian culture, people will give you their stuff if you compliment on it. In other words, if you go to a native Mongolian and compliment on their shirt, they'll take it off right there and give it to you. Hey, noone's making any rude comments on them. Of course, we don't need any further discussion on this. Let's go back to talking about Tokubi-chan's writing assignment.
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Ka Tokubi
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okay, I turned the assignment in. So everyone hold your breath and pray for me. *crosses fingers*
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Ka Tokubi
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Okay, so I'm starting a the big long version of this so could

Chibikitsune
DuoHimura(you have to be something that oversees the getting of the ship)
Saiyako
Overchasm
Ronozoro

please tell me what jobs they want

At the moment:

DigitalDreamer-Captain

Chibikitsune-Navigator(and *permanent* first mate)

Kanthia-*perminatnt* Second mate and gardener

Duo Himura-treasuerer

Overchasm-unknown

Redpirate-*perminatnt* cook

Ronozoro-unknown

Saiyako-unknown

thank you
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