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Sneak Peeks!
Topic Started: Mar 13 2007, 08:20 PM (82 Views)
WolfPrincess2007	Mar 13 2007, 08:20 PM Post #1
Cosmique Fée Posts: 107 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: March 11, 2007	Here is the prologue to the story! A brief look into Mayonaka's past! Prologue A soft breeze gently sets in motion the green trees and blossoming wildflowers. Soft pads of young wolves can be heard scuffling near an old oak just through the underbrush. A pup of only eight months watches her siblings roll around in the dirt in a ball of fluffy mass mayhem. She smiles to herself, glad to see her family that she loves so much happy and having fun. She slowly looks around her, maw to the air as she drinks in the scents of the late spring air. She pauses quickly as she scents something unnatural and unfamiliar to her forest home. Her neck fur bristles and her abnormally long tail fluffs up more than what is normal. She watches the terra around her with one violet eye, searching for anything that was out of the ordinary. Footsteps can be heard stomping through the underbrush and fallen leaves of an autumn past. Thunder sounds, unnatural and chilling, ring within the sensitive audits of the young femme. A small yip, one of a small pup, is heard as the pack of wolves falls under the unrelenting grip of the ones who walk on two legs. A painful howl echoes all around as the Alphess goes down. The young pup whimpers as she recognizes the cries of her sister and of her mother. She closes her eyes and tries to imagine the happenings as a horrible dream, though the chill that runs through her body tells her otherwise. A new scent fills her nose. FIRE! She avidly looks around her to find the area she was previously basking in the afternoon sunlight completely engulfed in flames. Her violet eyes grow wide as she turns tail and flee's for her life. She hears vicious growling behind her, as if a fight had erupted between the humans and another creature of the forest. She runs as fast as her legs will allow her to, never looking back as she puts as much distance between her and the danger as she can. Tears streak down her delicate face and dark fur. She slows her pace from exhaustion as her pink tongue lolls out of her motuh. She finally stops at the crest of a hill and turns to find her home enveloped in the long tendrils of the unrelenting flames. She howls a high pitched song filled with sorrow and mourning for her losses. She turns to the west as the setting sun casts long silhouettes across the ground. The young fae picks up her pace as the dying light fades to twilight and then to the celestial sky. Stars smile down upon her as she gazes towards what was her most comforting thing. Her past and her future resides within the realms of the unknown sky above. 'I am of the stars, though I have never felt so detatched from them in my life.' she sorrowfully thinks as she watches the twinkling lights above. She gazes towards the sky as she sits down. A comet soars across the celestial realm above. It was quite unusual in appearance as sparks of many hues shower down around the young pup, illuminating the terra around her. Her eyes begin to droop as the stardust lulls her to a gentle sleep. A shadow and a sillouette hovers in the not so far distance as she drifts away into the realm of dreams. A loud noise is heard, unnatural upon this earth. Mayonaka jolts out of her sleep with a start. Her face is streaked with tears as the painful memories of her past revisits her through her dreams. Several questions linger within her mind, though she surpresses them to the farthest depths of her thoughts. She didn't have time to deal with them in her Guardian duties so the answers remain undiscovered. She sighs and rests her head upon her paws as she watches the sun rise in the east.



EternalMothra	Mar 13 2007, 08:31 PM Post #2
Administrator Posts: 92 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: September 3, 2006	Awesome prologue! Very suspenseful!



WolfPrincess2007	Mar 13 2007, 08:35 PM Post #3
Cosmique Fée Posts: 107 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: March 11, 2007	Thank you! My goal was to provoke interest as well as give a little insight to Mayonaka, her history and why she is the way she is. It might get more added when I go through and edit before posting the final draft of the story, but until then, this is it.



Anguris	Mar 13 2007, 10:27 PM Post #4
Advanced Member Posts: 192 Group: Members Member #2 Joined: March 11, 2007	Great begining.
	"Look an undead monkey." Jack Sparrow. My Webpage


WolfPrincess2007	Mar 14 2007, 02:29 AM Post #5
Cosmique Fée Posts: 107 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: March 11, 2007	Thanks! I'm on Chapter 8 right now and tons has happened.. There are a couple conflicts and plots going on and I already know what I"m going to do for future stories.. I think I might be getting a little ahead of myself.. lol.



Anguris	Mar 14 2007, 02:36 AM Post #6
Advanced Member Posts: 192 Group: Members Member #2 Joined: March 11, 2007	Your welcome. That is so cool. lol. I know. Sometimes I get ahead of myself with somethings as well. lol.
	"Look an undead monkey." Jack Sparrow. My Webpage


WolfPrincess2007	Mar 14 2007, 08:21 PM Post #7
Cosmique Fée Posts: 107 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: March 11, 2007	Yeah, I'm already planning for off stories and whatnot!



Anguris	Mar 14 2007, 09:53 PM Post #8
Advanced Member Posts: 192 Group: Members Member #2 Joined: March 11, 2007	Really? Very intersting and cool.
	"Look an undead monkey." Jack Sparrow. My Webpage


WolfPrincess2007	Mar 24 2007, 01:41 AM Post #9
Cosmique Fée Posts: 107 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: March 11, 2007	Yup



Anguris	Mar 24 2007, 03:45 AM Post #10
Advanced Member Posts: 192 Group: Members Member #2 Joined: March 11, 2007	:). Cool.
	"Look an undead monkey." Jack Sparrow. My Webpage


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