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| Severus Snape | Sunday Nov 20 2005, 12:54 AM Post #1 |
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Hey all, this is going to be the first part in a series that I hope will kick off. For those of you who don't know, it's starring my character Lotarius. In the series, Lotarius is the main hero, and his adventures through time. What he does, is watch over the timelines, making sure history stays exactly how it was supposed to be. The first part of the series takes place during the American Revolution (1775-1783.) Before I start writing, just let me give you a history tour on the subject. We all know that North America was colonized by the British and the French during the 1600s. Things were not looking too great, as there were disease outbreaks, conflicts, and other internal problems. Racism was evident, as was great intolerance. In the late 1700's, however, the people in the Thirteen Colonies (later known as America or the United States) were becoming increasingly more angry with the british. At this time, the British were placing heavy restrictions on the people. There was taxation without representation, and many felt that Britian was in no place to control America, considering how far away it was. Eventually, the cololinists were fed up and revoluted. They declared independence on July 4, 1776, however it would take many years of war for it to be recgonized. George Washington led the Americans in battle, with help from the French. Despite many chances he would of lost, Washington led his people to victory. In 1783 the war was over, and Britian recgonized America's independence. However, in my story, the British forces are starting to overpower that of the Americans. No one knows the reason to this. Britian is also planning world-wide domination and seem to be succeding. It seems like nothing can stop them and their mysterious source of power. That is the basic plot of my story. I will update this later with an overview on Lotarius' specias and some character profiles. I hope to have chapter one up by Friday. |
![]() He just kept talking in one long incredibly unbroken sentence moving from topic to topic so that no one had a chance to interrupt. It was really quite hypnotic. - Captain Picard | |
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| Squirrel | Sunday Nov 20 2005, 03:09 AM Post #2 |
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Black and proud american!
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Ohh...nice....but I hope Lot gets a partner or something. And give him a personality too. |
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| Dark_Willow | Sunday Nov 20 2005, 04:35 AM Post #3 |
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Sounds like it will be good You got my best wishes for you ^____^ |
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| Severus Snape | Sunday Nov 20 2005, 04:56 AM Post #4 |
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Thanks and here's the bios for two of the main characters. *Note - in this part of theseries, Lotarius in in his childhood Name - Lotarius Species - Lotemkian Age - 27 in Lotemkian years, 14 in Earth years. (30 is considered to be coming of age in Lotarius' society) Appeareance - Light skinned alien humanoid. Has scales on his arms and some on his face. Has brown hair .However, due to experimental testing, he can morph into another species. Like the rest of his species, his blood is blue. As with Lotemkians his age, he looks as a 14 year-old human would look like. Weight - About 130 pounds Personaility - He is part of a minority of his species that experience emotion. Because of past troubles, he is often very edgy, is afraid at times, has feelings of guilt, and often at times will lash out when he's angry. Weapon - Has a long-ranged phaser that can shoot through walls. He may use his shuttlepod if necessary. Religion - Follows the mainstream Lotemkian religion Interests - He is interested in weaponary, ancient history, particularly that of Earth. He is eagar to make contact with friendly species. Story - Lotarius has a troubled history for a young age. He never knew his mother, as she left for mysterious reasons. He lived on his father's ship for two years until it was attacked and destroied by the Ithians, his species enemy. His father was murder before his eyes, and somehow, Lotarius killed a nearby Ithian and disabled the control of the ship. He and the survivors of the ship were taken to an Ithian prison camp. In the camp, Lotarius faced horrible conditions. He saw death constantly, was abused, and spent the majority of his youth in a dark prison cell. After a few years, a squad of Lotemkian ships attacked the prison and recsued the prisoners. Lotarius was at age 15. He spent the rest of his time on his uncle's ship. At age of 25, he had reached an important part of his species' customs. He took a shuttlepod from his uncle's ship, and spent two weeks alone on a desolated planet to communicate withhis people's gods. On his way back, he found out that Ithians destroied his uncle's ship.He blamed himself for the attack, and has spent the past years trying to find his way home while evading the Ithians. He does not know how important he will be in the future. Name - Lorian Species - Hologram Age - N/A Though he has been built for over a year Appearence - Models Lotarius' uncle, whom Lotarius spent the most time with. He is fair-skinned, black hair that is balding, lookslike a 30 year-old man Weight - N/A Personailty - Lotarius programmed him with a talkative and intelligent personnality. He shows signs of intelligence, often arguing with Lotarius on certain topics. He is witty and frequently questions wheither or not Lotarius is fit to make the journey. He is also overprotective, although Lotarius turns him of when he is displeased with him. Weapon - He happens to be a pacisft and will only fight to protect himself. He will use any means necessary to protct himself and Lotarius Religion - None, as he is a hologram Interests - He is interested in literature Story - He was created by Lotarius to keep him company during his time on the shuttlepod. In the future, he is usually Lotarius' partner on his missions. |
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| Severus Snape | Thursday Nov 24 2005, 09:27 AM Post #5 |
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Just to make sure, are morethan two people interested? I got tons of ideas, and I would appreciate it if more than two people look at this. I happen to be big on feedback. |
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