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I desire to be a better cartoonist
Topic Started: Dec 3 2006, 05:33:40 PM (10,966 Views)
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kiss up to the root admin, fool!!

I think they are pretty good. Gringe should just make a manga already. >_>;
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Zigludo
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うおっ、眩しい!

An attempt at the same character doing different things (NSFW).

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z14/gri...gs/squire-1.jpg
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Err, that NSFW made it sound pornographic. It simply contains nudity; nothing sexual. >_>;;
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gringe
May 16 2007, 07:09:31
An attempt at the same character doing different things (NSFW).

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z14/gri...gs/squire-1.jpg

Hmm... her big smile in the upper left doesn't look very natural. It might be the placement of her nose that makes it do that. Perhaps move it to the left slightly.

For the upper middle one, the finger on her right (our left) hand seems to bend up slightly. It's not natural. It should go straight, or bend down. Nose looks slightly off, too.

I don't see any problems with her in the upper right ones.

Her sad face is okay, but her eyebrows are way too long.

Her mad face looks fine.

Her action post looks mostly fine, too, though the left arm (her POV), looks flat and too short. Her right arm (her POV again ^_^() is also too short. The elbow is also too high up on her arm.

lol boobs. Her hands look gibbled, though I can see why. It's a fairly small picture. Nothing wrong, really, though her feet might be a bit too short (dunno if you did that purposely).
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Thank you kindly for the critique. m(_ _)m
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gringe
May 16 2007, 08:09:31
An attempt at the same character doing different things (NSFW).

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z14/gri...gs/squire-1.jpg

NIPPLES B7
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May 21 2007, 06:28:22
gringe
May 16 2007, 08:09:31
An attempt at the same character doing different things (NSFW).

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z14/gri...gs/squire-1.jpg

NIPPLES B7

I think we should allow that, since it's art and stuff, and Gringe posted a link instead of the image.

That said, I think no secks for you, Gringe. Sorry. :(
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That said, I think no secks for you, Gringe. Sorry. :(

Old (see my topic where I whine about not being attracted to anyone). Why else would I be drawing boobs, dammit. >__>;;;
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Either to save money and not buy Porn or earn money by selling porn.

If you ever want to get a girl, ask her to be your model.

Not.
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Lord Jim
May 21 2007, 22:58:05
Either to save money and not buy Porn or earn money by selling porn.

If you ever want to get a girl, ask her to be your model.

Not.

Actually, many artists have gotten into relationships with models and even married them before. Though that's not how I intend to go about it. <_<
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I interpreted the "no secks for you" as you not being allowed to post /h/.
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Oh, that makes sense. >_>
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Not finished yet, but I wanted to show you guys what I had done so far. <3
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I'd rather wait until you finish it for some real crit, but here's one thing I can point out for now.

The middle girl's right arm (our PoV); the elbow is way too far down. Well, that's how it looks. It'll probably look way better when you shade it.
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gringe, you need to draw more Gheb.


And mechas.
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