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Whose story did you like the best?
JWEfan7284 4 (66.7%)
WorldsGreatestMK 2 (33.3%)
Total Votes: 6
Story Contest Round 2
Topic Started: Dec 23 2006, 04:41 AM (598 Views)
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Welcome to round two of our story contest. Once again we had to contestants for this round: JWEfan7284 and WorldsGreatestMK.

Please read both stories throughly and than vote for your favorite.

Voting will end on Wednesday.

JWEfan7284:

**Johnny's Russian Hotel**
Johnny cries as Sasha places her arm around him."Sasha I thought I had it this year.I have no idea what is going on with me.I'm falling on the simplest jumps and ugh I have no idea whats wrong."

Sasha places Johnny's head on her lap and gently brushes his curls away from his tired and puffy eyes."Oh baby it will be ok.I know how it feels this has happened to me many times before in the past.I think you need alittle vacation or time off to think things through."

Johnny picks his head up off Sasha lap and sits up on the bed."Maybe your right."Maybe I do need a small little break and with Christmas coming around the corner this is a really great time to relax and have fun." Johnny takes a deep sigh."Where are you thinking Sash?"

"Well your just going to have to wait and see aren't you now.But trust me you'll love it Johnny."Sasha kisses Johnny on the forehead."I got to go Johnny but I'll see you tomorrow pack your stuff and be ready bye 10:00 am okay".As Sasha walks to the door Johnny grabs her arm."Sasha don't go I don't want to be alone tonight.I want the love of my life in my arms tonight."

"Well since you put it that way I guess I could stay a while"Sasha gives Johnny a sexy wink."Sasha you know I can't resist your beauty and charm" Johnny pulls her on the bed and kisses her neck.

"Johnny not tonight your going to need your rest.The flight is non stop and I know your going to need plenty of rest."Johnny lifts his head up and stares right into her hazel eyes."That's a risk I'm willing to take."Johnny continues to kiss her neck and slowly start taking her shirt off."Johnny not tonight I promise tomorrow night but not today okay please."Sasha gets up and heads to the bathroom to wash her face and take a shower."Johnny you have any clothes I can wear tonight?"

"Well I didn't have plans on either of us having clothes on tonight but I'm sure I have a t-shirt you can wear."Johnny digs around out of his suit case and throws Sasha a plain white t-shirt."Thanks you should get to bed I'll be there after a quick shower okay babe."Sasha heads to the bathroom and feels Johnny undressing her with his eyes."Ok my love"

**First class seats on a non-stop trip to New York City**
"So Sasha New York is are destination?"Sasha takes her seat next to the window and grabs her small duffel bag."Yeah I mean what is better than Christmas time in New York?"Johnny nods his head and whispers in her ear"Well what is better than Christmas time in New York with the women I love."Sasha feels her cheeks get hot and changes the subject."So Johnny I had planned maybe a quite dinner for two then maybe a quite evening for two in the hotel and have room service and relax for today?"

Johnny grabs Sasha's small head and kisses her lips in a deep passionate kiss."Sorry Sasha your lips were begging for a kiss from me."Sasha adjust her seat and takes the arm rest off."Well Johnny I don't think my lips are done begging."Sasha grabs his head and begins kissing him.Then Johnny starts to slip alittle tongue in.After a couple of minutes of some major tongue on tongue action Sasha pulls him away."Lets save it for tonight."Johnny takes a deep sigh and kisses her hand."Okay so tonight I think we should just relax and have dinner in the room sound good to you pumpkin?"

"Sure and pumpkin?"Just as Johnny was about to answer Sasha's question the pilot announces that there about to land."Yay were hear and I didn't even have a nervous break down.Sasha giggles."Glad cause I'm sure I couldn't handle it."Both of them get there belongings and head out of the plane.

**Superior Guestroom 226,The St. Regis Hotel,New York**
"Sasha how did you get us a room at the St.Regis you know how expensive this place is?"Johnny stares in aww as he sets his luggage down next to a large arm chair and takes a seat."Well my appearance on CSI:New York gave me a couple of extra bucks so I thought f**k holiday inn I want this night is going to be special."Johnny pats his knee and kindly gestures Sasha to sit on his knee.

"Come here Sasha sit on Santa's lap"Sasha giggles and drops her coat to sit on Johnny's lap."What do you want for Christmas my dear?"Sasha ponders his question and bites her lip."Umm I want my boyfriend to win Nationals,my movie moondance Alexander to do well,oh and a nice wet kiss on the lips."

"Well my dear I'm not sure about the movie or the nationals medal but a kiss is something I could get for you"Johnny grabs Sasha waist and lifts her off of his knee and throws her on the bed.Johnny quickly unbuttons Sasha's blouse to expose her soft white skin."Oh my Johnny you move quiet fast don't you."Johnny licks his lips and starts kissing Sasha's stomach and slowly reaching her lips."You have been tempting me to long Ms. Cohen now it's my turn to have alittle fun."Sasha turns Johnny over on his stomach and starts kissing his abs one by one.

"Johnny I want to make you sore for months"

"Why so I can be even more sore than I already am"

Sasha giggles."Johnny I'm hungry you have the room service menu?".Johnny lies on the bed for a second then gets up to find the menu.

"Here it is.What do you want Sash?"Sasha bit her lip."well maybe some chocolate dip and strawberries with champagne would be nice."

"Alright"Johnny dials the number as Sasha buttons her shirt back on.Soon enough there's a knock at the door and Johnny and Sasha are sitting on the bed feeding each other chocolate covered strawberries.

"Johnny do you think I'm pretty"Sasha says as she stuffs her mouth with chocolate.

"Oh course I do.Your so regal and stunning."You could stop a man dead in his tracks."

Sasha blushes."And your eyes Sasha there beautiful and your lush red lips make me quiver everytime I see them."I think your the most beautiful thing in the world Sasha.

Sasha stares at The Swan his every move graceful and flawless.Sasha then dozes off knowing she's the luckiest girl in the world.

*~*FIN*~*


WorldsGreatestMK:

Untitled...or so It's called

by KJ Jayasuriya.

The leaves brushed against his cloak, as he stepped further and further into the dense forest. Droplets of rain water tumbled down from above the tops of the trees from an earlier rain. With bow and arrow in hand, this Apache indian was on the hunt of a lifetime. His name was Little Crow, he had just became the greatest huntsmen in his tribe when their villiage was attacked.

The invaders were other indians whom had ran away from their homes, they said it was because of a beast that had slaughtered many people before. Little Crow decided to find this... beast... he had just entered the jungle of where it lived, when he heard a terrible roar followed by a scream of terror. He began to pace quicker and quicker at each sound. He knew if he could defeat this beast then the other tribe could live back in their villiage and wouldn't have to take over. Little Crow was close now, VERY close. He could hear the creature breathing, its hot heavy breath sounded like a trains smoke stack. He could actualy feel the creature's breath now, he knew he was getting closer and yet... he still couldn't see it.

Then, from above him, something heavy came down on his back with a thud. He tumbled down to his knees, and looked up in utter astoundment. What he saw, was huge, it had giant fangs and razor sharp claws. Saliva dripped from its mouth, then it let out a terrible screach and Little Crow ran and ran. He never stopped, he never looked back, he only ran. He ran all the way back to his villiage, and there he managed to choke out the word.. "run." Little Crow then died on that very spot. He had been scared to death by this beast, and his last word was a warning, that the creature was close behind him, and to run away and save yourselves. But it was no use, the others just got scared and didn't even obey the warning. They sent out hunting parties but no one came back. After a while they just forgot about it, they ignored other warnings and kept their feelings inside them.

The beast, on the other hand, didn't, it evolved and grew hungrier and hungrier each day. By the time it had completely evolved, it didn't look all that scary anymore, it actually, looked more friendly. That beast, is now known as a gorilla. WE think it as nothing, the indians, may have thought different...

(to be continued)....
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I like ur story, Em. Once again, I am not votting :D
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Dec 23 2006, 05:03 AM
I like ur story, Em. Once again, I am not votting :D

Yours is good too.Mine is so long once again
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My story is short, and I know for sure, you are the crowd favorite... :D
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Leona
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You both make it sooooo hard to choose who to vote for!
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Dec 23 2006, 07:15 PM
You both make it sooooo hard to choose who to vote for!

Hey Leona did u like the second part of my story?I worked pretty hard on it and the inspiration was that song "Baby it's cold outside". ^_^
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Alright, I've voted :) Good job to both of you Emily and KJ!
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Ugh I have to make my new story soon.Maybe New Years or the day after.It's gonna be kinda sad too.:(
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Both are amazing. I love them - it was hard!
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Voting has ended for this round.

JWEfan7284 - 3
WorldsGreatestMK - 2

Congrats Emily!
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Congrats. Em. I will work on my story at home :D
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Wow this is cool.Thanks guys I work hard on those stories :)
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I work hard on mine tooo.... :D
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