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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 15 2006, 03:53 AM (654 Views) | |
| Evil | Dec 15 2006, 03:53 AM Post #1 |
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Welcome to the first round of the Story Contest. We had to contestants for this round: WorldsGreatestMK and JWEfan7284. Please read both stories throughly and than vote for your favorite. Voting for this round ends on Sunday. WorldsGreatestMK: Happily Ever after. by KJ Jayasuriya All was well in Happy Land, all were joyful, none were sad. The Wallagumps played with the Kittytime Clocks, and the Ziggystartums with the Twinkletoe Socks. It was a beautiful day, and nothing could go wrong, but then the sky turned dark and caused alarm. Madness broke as they saw the big Ink Jet, it was Captain Pen and his Army of Pencil Cadets. The good folks of Happy Land didn’t know what to do. They started to cry “Boo-hoo, boo-hoo.” Captain Pen ordered the capture of them all. So the Pencil Cadet drew boxes that were much too small. Then they put all the Wallagumps, the Ziggystartums, the Kittytime Clocks, and the Twinkletoe Socks in the tiny boxes. “Help! Somebody help us!” they screamed. The chance of someone hearing them was impossible it seemed. By luck Mr. White Eraser and his friends heard their cry. They decided to save the people of Happy Land or at least give it a try. Mr. White Eraser yelled to Captain Pen, “Let them go!” “Never!” said Captain Pen. “I will never do so.” “Then we must fight you” said Mr. White Eraser hoping to win. “You can’t defeat us,” said Captain Pen “We’re the king pin.” Then the Erasers and the Pencil had a big old clash, Wham! Slam! Mash and Smash! When all was over only one army still stood, If someone could defeat the Pencils, it was the Erasers that could. All the Pencil Cadets were long and gone, But Captain Pen was still the biggest con. “I haven’t lost, no one can get me. Come give it a try, you won’t succeed.” Then Mr. White Eraser brought out their secret arm. It was Colonel White-Out who had come to saved Happy Land from harm. Captain Pen saw the Colonel and ran away, The Erasermen had saved the day. All was well in Happy Land again, And that bring us to this story’s end. JWEfan7284: ***Back Stage at Marshall's after the show ended Johnny and Sasha are alone packing up there stuff getting ready to leave the arena*** Johnny approaches Sasha and gives her a kiss that gently pushes her against the wall."You did a great job out there my beautiful little China doll"Johnny whispers in Sasha's ear."You weren't so bad yourself J." "So what are you doing later Sasha?"I was wondering if maybe you wanted to go out for a cup of coffee or maybe a walk in the park?"I haven't seen you in a while since you live in Cali and I train in Delaware"You do remember that night in Kansas City right?" How could Sasha forget that was the night there love bloomed into something wonderful and more than just a summer love."I would love to Johnny let me just get my skates,costumes,and take a fast shower at the hotel then I'll met ya in the lobby okay"?"And how could I forget Kansas City that was the night you told me you wanted to be mines forever"Sasha gives Johnny a sexy wink and smile and bats her long lashes at him. Johnny can't resist her charm and pulls her in for a deep kiss."Sasha lets make this night special okay" he says after he pulls Sasha out from the kiss. "Every minute with you Johnny is special"Sasha says while gazing into his emerald colored eyes."So I'll see ya later in the lobby"Should I wear anything in particular?" "Keep it kinda causal my love"Johnny kisses her lips lightly then dashes off to hotel *a hour and a half later* Johnny paces back and forth with a rose in hand after a fan threw at him after he performed "My Way" earlier that day."Where is she?" Sasha appears in a white tee shirt,jeans,some Jimmy Choo flats,a black bombers jacket and some gold earrings."Ready Johnny?" Johnny stands in shock at Sasha's beauty.soft tousled hair,red ruby lips,milky white skin,and her glorious hazel eyes."Wow Sasha you look beautiful even in jeans and a t-shirt".Johnny hands Sasha the rose and checks her out from head to toe. "Oh Johnny stop it your making me blush and thanks for the flower it's lovely"Sasha kisses Johnny on the lips.There teeth click as the pull apart."So where is the three time US national Champ taking me?" "Well he was thinking of taking you out for maybe alittle snack of coffee and scones than maybe a walk in the park"Then we come back here and you decide what you want to do next miss 2006 sliver medalist? Sasha blushes."Okay Sasha lets go" *a small café in Boston* "So Johnny how is your quad coming along last time we talked on the phone you said it was going well"Sasha takes a sip of her vanilla latte and takes a bite of her scone."It's going well I hope I can finally feel comfortable putting it in my LP"Johnny takes a sip of his latte and gets some whip cream on his lips. Sasha laughs"Johnny you got alittle something on the top of your lip let me get that for ya"Sasha reaches for the napkin but Johnny pulls it out of her hand."Wouldn't you just rather lick it off?"Johnny says in a seductive voice "Johnny!!"Sasha yelps but obeys and kisses the cream of Johnny's lips."Sasha I can't wait to have you alone and for myself tonight.It's been too long"Johnny says in a soft voice."I know Johnny I need your love I have been lonely and thinking about you for too long.Now your here and I'm here and no one will break us apart".Johnny touches Sasha's cheek and leans over the table to kiss her ever so lightly. *at the park* "So Sasha how has acting been for ya"Johnny says holding the much smaller women's hand."Good I mean I am happy with the way Moon Dance came out and my CSI:New York episode did well too." "You won't forget me after you become a big movie star and find a new man Sasha?" "Well the only man I see myself with is you.Your all I ever want and all I ever need Johnny you know that." Something comes over Johnny and he grabs Sasha leans her against the tall oak tree next to them."Your all I ever need my Sasha girl"Johnny kisses her soft red lips and grabs her tiny little waist."Let's get you out if these clothes and in something a bit more comfy Sasha" "Okay lets"Sasha whispers in a very seductive voice *Johnny's hotel room* "Just leave your jacket there Sasha I'm going to get us some drinks from the mini bar they gave me.Ooo Champagne and it's in a mini bottle awesome"Johnny pours Sasha a small glass of champagne and pours himself some as well. "oh f**k the champagne Johnny" Sasha throws her drink on the floor and throws him on the bed."I like you on top on me Sasha this hasn't happened since Kansas City and I think it needs to happen more". "Johnny did anyone ever tell you that you talk to much"Sasha giggles as those words leave her lips."Just shut-up and kiss me Johnny."Sasha begins slowly taking off his shirt and kisses his chest."Oh Sasha it's been too long.You drive me crazy."I have waited months for this night Johnny." Johnny turns Sasha over and begins kissing her neck."Oh god Johnny you drive me insane. "I don't want your love Johnny Weir I need your love"..... |
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| JWEfan7284 | Dec 15 2006, 04:02 AM Post #2 |
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Geez I feel like I over did it with mine it's so long.I hope u guys like it.I worked really hard thinking of something good. :) |
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| WorldsGreatestMK | Dec 15 2006, 06:25 AM Post #3 |
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The Kween will Return!!!
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I like it, Emily. :D Well, once again, I am not voting. :D |
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| JWEfan7284 | Dec 15 2006, 12:36 PM Post #4 |
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I like urs too KJ.I don't think I should vote either.Funny cause both of are stories are in the same competition but there completely different.lol :lol: |
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| Leona | Dec 15 2006, 05:18 PM Post #5 |
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awww this is hard. KJ - I loved the story. You did really well making it rhyme and I couldn't stop smiling reading it! Good job! :) Emily - I loved your story too! It's very long and I can tell you spent lot's of time writing it. It would be cool if Johnny and Sasha were together in real life lol So I guess this means I'm not voting! I can't decide because I love them both. You both are very talented! I wish I could write storys that well. |
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| WorldsGreatestMK | Dec 16 2006, 01:26 AM Post #6 |
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The Kween will Return!!!
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Thanks, Leona. :D |
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| JWEfan7284 | Dec 16 2006, 03:34 AM Post #7 |
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Thanxs Leona.YAY thanks for the votes guys.Good luck KJ :) |
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| WorldsGreatestMK | Dec 16 2006, 05:02 AM Post #8 |
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The Kween will Return!!!
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Thanks, Em. You are a great challenger ;) |
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| WorldsGreatestMK | Dec 21 2006, 06:27 AM Post #9 |
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The Kween will Return!!!
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They like ur story, Em. Good Job. ;) |
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| JWEfan7284 | Dec 21 2006, 12:03 PM Post #10 |
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Wow thanks guys.If u like that one ur gonna love my new one. |
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| WorldsGreatestMK | Dec 21 2006, 10:28 PM Post #11 |
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The Kween will Return!!!
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I am going to be sooo jealous, Em. After this I better write a skating story. I guess my childish, and sometimes humor scary stories won't work. :D |
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| Evil | Dec 22 2006, 12:44 AM Post #12 |
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Oops, I forgot to post the final results.
:P WorldsGreatestMK - 2 JWEfan7284 - 5 Congrats, Emily! Voting on round two will begin on Saturday. |
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| JWEfan7284 | Dec 22 2006, 01:09 AM Post #13 |
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Wow I never won anything before but YAY.KJ I like your stories.I think there cute and creative.If u need any help writing stories I listen to songs or look at a picture of Johnny or Sasha and picture something happening in that pic.For the first story I got inspiration from the song "Unchained Melody" The last line in the story comes from that song.Also ask me if u need any help k. :D |
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| WorldsGreatestMK | Dec 22 2006, 05:35 AM Post #14 |
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The Kween will Return!!!
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Sure thing, Em. Same for you :D |
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| JWEfan7284 | Dec 23 2006, 04:19 AM Post #15 |
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Cool I'm sure ur story will be great.Hey Evil u should put the stories up now. |
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| WorldsGreatestMK | Dec 23 2006, 04:31 AM Post #16 |
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yeah, u should :D |
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| Evil | Dec 23 2006, 04:35 AM Post #17 |
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It'll be up in a few minutes.
:) Edit: Voting is now open: http://z10.invisionfree.com/Fire_on_Ice/in...p?showtopic=124 |
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