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The War of the Orders; roleplay
Topic Started: Mar 30 2006, 11:25 AM (4,153 Views)
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The war of the Orders
It has been two years since the destruction of the second Death Star. The galaxy is still in turmoil. The New Republic fights the still powerful Empire.
Two secret organizations rise. One full of Dark Jedi, another full of Light. They both remain hidden yet wage war against eachother.
Swerto the leader of the Dark Jedi Order flies on an urgant mission to Kamino...
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Swerto's fighter exits hyperspace above Kamino. There he has heard a few Jedi have surfaced and where fighting in one of the floating cities. Swerto sends a probot down and watches
taken from the fight betweeen zitz and Neal in the light arena.






posted by zitz
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zitz kneels near the edge of a platform over the great sea. He sits down, cross legged. he meditates.

i wonder how he will choose to show himself - zitz





Posted by Neal
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Neal starts to walk toward Zitz

Hello Zitz its a nice day out isn't it now get up and fight - Neal

Neal kicks zitz in the bottom of his mouth and backs away waiting for the attack

if i can only enrage him enough to lose control i can take him - Neal





Posted by Zitz
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zitz gets up and smiles
you obviously don't know me very well-Zitz
zitz takes off his cloak, cracks his neck and takes out his lightsaber
ready for me?-Zitz






Posted by Neal
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Why yes young one i am dont get to cockey or i might have to shut that mouth of yours - Neal

Neal is ready to fight he is worried about his saber though it broke in an incident back inside

Come and attack me young one - Neal





Posted by Zitz
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zitz backs away slowly until he reaches the edge of the platform. he uses force speed and begins running toward neal lightning fast. 5 feet before he reaches neal zitz jumps in the air spinning and ignites his double-bladed lightsaber on both sides. neal. . .




Posted by Neal
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Neal sidesteps twice

nice try young one but you missed - Neal

Neal uses force speed,jump, and push to make it look like he is flying

you will never beat me like that - Neal





Posted by Zitz
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like what? -Zitz
zitz continues running, finishing his attack. he immediataly turns around and force jumps into the air across from neal. he takes out his pistol and shoots to his left forcing neal to move to the right.
why do you run? - Zitz





Posted by Neal
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Because i dont need to use brute strength to win - Neal

Neal pushes the blast away and pulls out zitz pistol crushing it

Lets only use the force and sabers to fight young one -Neal

im doing it he is going insane




Posted by Zitz
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thats what you think "lmfao literally" i thought you would have noticed an intruder in your own mind? Never mind i intended no harm-Zitz
zitz stands and waits




Posted by Neal
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what you were in my mind ahh i feel what you did no matter this will teach you-Neal

neal sends pain into zitz's mind and attacks from the inside

you are going to lose you are to young-Neal


Posted by Zitz
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AAAAAhhhhhh!!-Zitz

zitz falls to the ground, convulsing in pain. he uses force heal, gets back up, and shields his mind. he is more determined than ever.

you are misled, age has nothing to do with the force. -Zitz

once again, zitz waits.




Posted by Neal
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you think healing will help you can not heal what is not there the pain is not real but you can feel it your mind cannot block me-Neal

neal starts to lower toward the ground





Posted by Zitz
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I have no fear of you neal-Zitz

zitz gets back into a fighting stance and ignites his saber and puts it up to guard himself




Posted by Neal
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you can not guard your mind with a saber-Neal

neal starts to walk towards zitz sending thoughts of his family dieing then of Hyro dying at zitz own blade




Posted by Zitz
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that is a clever trick. Ingenious. I would've never thought of it. I would never do those things. I will not kill you. This is not a fight to the death. We are not Dark side.-Zitz
zitz ignites his saber and makes several quick attacks against neal breaking his concentration. The visions stop.




Posted by Neal
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neal pulls out his saber and attacks the young fighters hands

you will not make it through this the vision will continue to form as long as i wish i do not control it - Neal

the vision starts up again




Posted by Zitz
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Yet again, something i would have never done. That attack borders the darkside.-Zitz
why do you carry so many sabers? Do you feel afraid of an attack?-Zitz
zitz puts his lightsaber away and makes a another dash at neal




Posted by Hyro
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Hyro stands high above watching the two of them fight studying there tecniques and attitudes
hmm-Hyro





Posted by Neal
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no young one i dont fear attacks i fear using my touch with the force - Neal
neal sidesteps and then attacks the young ones legs cutting one of them






Posted by Zitz
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zitz ignores the wound
explain why you struck at me while i was unarmed? Why did you not just protect yourself?-Zitz
zitz kneels down on the other side of the platform





Posted by Neal
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because you never let an opponet get away you had a weapon in the force-Neal

neal backs off then looks at the leg that is now almost severed he falls down in agony at what he has done






Posted by Hyro
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We all walk a thin path from the dark side-Hyro
Hyro says this to himself while watching them





Posted by Neal
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neal looks at his cybernetic leg

the bastard from the jedi did this 2 me why did i do it to zitz
-Neal






Posted by Zitz
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it is all right neal, i exist to better other people.-Zitz
zitz uses force heal on the leg which makes it better, but there is still a wound
i think we have both learned something about ourselves. i am sorry if my methods have made any lasting damage
Do you wish to continue?
-Zitz







Posted by Neal
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neal stands up and jumps toward zitz ignitine 2 sabers and doing acrobatics to stop zitz.

"you are almost worthy of the title knight zitz"
-Neal

neal jumps back uses saber throw then charges at zitz with another 2 ignited









Posted by Zitz
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zitz ignites both ends of his saber and blocks the thrown saber. it is deflected and bounces to the edge. zitz starts running toward neal







Posted by Neal
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the two are advancing on each other neal concentrates with all his will and ignites the blocked saber its coming at zitz back and neal at the front and sides
try and stop this-Neal








Posted by Zitz
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"maybe"-Zitz
zitz starts a saber lock against neal.
the saber spinning quickly towards his back

"maybe not"-Zitz
zitz turns off his saber and does a backflip over the saber neal is pulling towards himself.






Posted by Neal
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thats a mistake-Neal

neal pushes the saber then jumps in front of it cutting his back

pain that works 2 -Neal

he then cuts a gash through zitz stomach





Posted by Swerto
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A small probot in the distance watches recording and sending the video feed live to a small ship in orbit. Inside his Eta-2 "Actis" Interceptor Swerto sits and watches thinking.
At last Neal I have found you... I see you now walk the path of the Exile... Too bad for you... You had potential in the old order... but now we have been reborn... You should have stayed...-Swerto
Swerto continues to watch studying the moves
Now you fight like a coward not to the death... you really are a fool-Swerto





Posted by Hyro
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Hyro sits down and crosses his legs, he ahead lost in thought







Posted by Neal
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neal attacks zitz with a force flame attack from his inards to
burn zitz







Posted by Swerto (for Zitz because of absence)
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Zitz pushes neal back and runs into quick retreat. He sees his master in the distance. He jumps up to Hyro and they run to a shuttle. They sence the coming of one strong in the darkside.
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Swerto Readies his ship to land on Kamino. He orders the probot to return the the ship as he plummets through the atmosphere toward the area.

Taken from Duel between Neal and Swerto in fighting area in open galaxy

posted by Swerto
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The Eta-2 "actis" interceptor plummets toward the small platform Neal is sitting on with his Lightsabers activated it. Swerto stops right above the Platform and instrucks his droid to fly away. Swerto jumps out doing a flip and pullingh is lightsaber out but not activating it. He puts it out to his side.
Hello Neal... It's been a while-Swerto





Posted by Neal
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"Hello Swerto"-Neal

Neal stands and looks at Swerto with his lightsabers still drawn





Posted by Swerto
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So why did you leave the dark order? I promised you power... you didn't take it... I'm dissapointed

Swerto keeps his lightsaber at his side and just continues to glare at Neal.-Swerto




Posted by Neal
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The only way for me to reach my true power is through fighting with those i used to care about-Neal

Neal starts to analize his surrondings while gathering power




Posted By Swerto
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Fine... so be it-Swerto

Swerto pulls his DE-10 blaster pistol out and aims it at Neal. Swerto pulls the trigger. A single blaster bolt flies towards Neals face. Neal swings his saber and deflects it back at Swerto. Swerto activates his lightsaber and swings it in a circular motion deflecting it off to the side. He puts his blaster back in its holster. Swerto gets in his Nexu stance.

Your move-Swerto




Posted by Neal
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Neal is still gathering power for his next few attacks. He charges at Swerto with his red saber spinning.





Posted by Swerto
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Swerto quickly sidesteps to dodge the lightsaber and slashes down knocking it toward the ground. He puts his hand in front of him and pushes Neal with the force. Neal lands on the other side of the platform nearly falling off.
Still too impatient? I thought you learned that-Swerto




Posted by neal
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you still have to look to the future -Neal

neal started to release the energy he had been gathering he charges at swerto when swerto jumps he focuses his attack into the palm of his hand getting his gut




Posted by Swerto
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Swerto looks down at his stomach and grins. THere isn't even a mark. Swerto pulls his lightsaber in front of him. Swerto jumps back and pulls his lightsaber behind his back. He uses the force to go to extreme speeds then dissapears.
Find me... If you can....



Posted by Neal
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swerto i would be afraid the attack did nothing to the outside of your body but your insides are already going to start to burn-Neal

neal uses his force analize to see swerto

found you-Neal



Posted by Swerto
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No you didn't-Swerto
Swerto stops concentrating making the manifestation of himself show infront of him. Swerto activates his lightsaber and goes uncloaked and runs at Neal from behind. Swerto makes a quck slash to the side and Neal barely blocks it. Swerto puts his hands on the ground and does a backflip over Neal. He slashes down and cuts one of Neals sabers in half. He keeps slashing in quick vigerous strikes. He lets his defense down to increase the offensive speed and strength. Then he jumps back and goes back into a defensive stance. Swerto puts his hand in front of him and shoots a storm of lightning into Neal. Neal falls to the ground and begins grabbing his chest as his heart starts to fail. Swerto keeps launching the bolts through Neal. Swerto stops and cuffs his hand into a choke shape and Neal slowly lifts from the ground grabbing his neck as he is deprived from air.
Now Neal... It is your time to leave.-Swerto
Swerto uses the force to throw Neal off the edge of the platform into the waters below. Neal barely stays afloat finding it hard to swim in the extremely turbulent waters.



Posted by Neal
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Neal starts to concentrate he uses force push on the water. He lands behind Swerto

Next time think of the consequences-Neal

Neal starts to analize Swerto he finds the weakest point and uses force push on it




Posted by Swerto
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Swerto doesn't even move. Instead he spins around with his lightsaber still activated and spins it around. Swerto cuts Neals other lightsaber in half.
I know the consequences do you?-Swerto
Swerto puts his lightsaber in front of Neals face then spins around ready to cut Neals head clear off. Neal ducks and jumps back.



Posted by Neal
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Neal turns and unleashes a blast of energy to Swerto

Your body is already losing power Swerto my blast of energy could kill you if you keep fighting-Neal

Neal starts to run toward Swerto



Posted by Swerto
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Swerto concentrates with the force and lifts Neal from the ground by the neck
Then I guess it's time for me to end this...-Swerto
Swerto cuts Neal off from the force draining him of all the energy he could use to get out of the choke. Swerto begins to slowly crush Neals throat as Neals offensive energy leaves Swerto leaving him back to normal. Swerto lifts Neal up higher. Swerto concentrates building up force energy between them ready to launch Neal into the distance. Swerto pushes causing Neal to fly a few landing pads higher where Hyro still stood watching hitting him in the chest knocking him down. Swerto reactivates his lightsaber and runs and jumps the same distance. He slams down upon Neal slashing and cutting the other lightsabers in his cloak. He then stabs down into Neals leg.
Now Neal you have a choice... come back to the order... or die... personally I don't care which you choose. Just next time we fight maybe you'll actully do a little permanent damage.-Swerto





Posted by Neal
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I am an exile and will always be an exile i dont wish to take sides i am going to become the greatest master of the force and the living force. -Neal

Neal starts to gather energy

by the way you still forgot the living force i can use it at will-Neal

Neal breaks free of the hold




Posted by Swerto
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Then run coward-Swerto
Swerto pushes Neal and Hyro back toward a parked shuttle.
It's what you're best at isn't it? By the way you have twenty seconds to lift off and leave this place.-Swerto
Swerto throws an explosive under the shuttle





Posted by Neal
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Neal leaves but through the force he sends a message to swerto

how am i good at running-Neal





Posted by Swerto
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Swerto just jumps up in the air landing on top of his ETA-2 "actis" Interceptor and flies off in the other direction
You just are



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As Swerto speeds off in the distance he enters the coordinates for the Dark Orders HQ well aware of the tracking device on his hull
I'll draw Hyro there... then destroy him
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Neal is walking around in the swamps of Dagobah his latest hideout

How can i beat swerto and become a warrior
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A spirit of a dead Jedi shows herself.
Defeating my son will be no easy task... he has been seduced by the dark side of the force. It is his greatest strength, and his greatest weakness. Get to him through his heart... if he still has one. You must destroy that which he cares for most. Go after his apprentice.
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Go after Kenya I have never dueled her so i do not no if she is as good as her master or not but i can put her in a situation swerto will have to get her out of
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Neal starts preparing for the upcoming mission to lure kenya to him
She better be weaker than her master
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ok lets try to keep this all in the same spot at once... i'm gonna delete your post ok hyro?
The ghost of Swerto's mother dissapears
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Swerto's Interceptor exits hyperspace next to 2 mile long star destroyer, the Vleaski Doethu, or black death in irodese.
Open the docks and prepare for hyperspace. We're leaving now. Set destination for Korriban
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Hyro floats in space in his X-Wing looking at the datapad
right where are you going
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Swerto walks on the bridge of his Star Destroyer and turns to the captain
Change of plans we're going somewhere in deep space... I dont' care where just somewhere secluded
The Star Destroyer enters hyperspace
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Hyro punches the coordinates in to his on-board computer
where are you going?
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The Vleaski Doethu stops when it exits hyperspace
Prepare the communications. When a small X-WIng exits hyperspace hail it. Also face all weapons toward the it. I want you to be able to destroy it in seconds
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Hyro enters hyperspace and stops infront of The Vleaski Doethu
...crap
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Swerto hails Hyro's X-Wing
Hello Hyro.. why have you decided to follow me out here... i hope you see now that it was a mistake... not that you can leave now. I entered into an area in deep space where there was a gravity well. You cannot enter hyperspace unless you leave it. Too bad... Now your going to die. But before you die i'll answer one question.
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yeah i have a question....have your men got a good shot? cuase im just a small X-Wing and im a pretty good at flying this thing
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hmmm, so how is this going to work then swerto?
Hyro starts to punch things into his onboard computer
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Swerto just looks off the bridge. He frowns sensing what Hyro is going to try to do.
I'm dissapointed Hyro. Captian shields at maximum. He's going to try and attack.
Swerto turns and leaves the bridge heading toward the hanger to get in his ETA-2 "Actis" Interceptor.
Your not outrunning this.
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R2-T3...find me a door
Hyro Speeds towards The Vleaski Doethu
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Swerto's Interceptor flies out the hanger moving directly at Hyro. He opens fire forcing Hyro to make a hard right.
Hyro.. you know what kind of ship this is? This is an ETA-2 "Actis" Interceptor... also known as a Jedi Interceptor. The last time these where in wide use was the clone wars. Now the select few are more manuvarable than the most advanced imperial ship. They have more firepower and more speed. These ships are deadly.
Swerto begins to toy with Hyro staying directly behind him not firing and not moving an inch to either side of Hyro's fighter. Hyro tries to shake Swerto but he can't. Swerto begins to get bored. Swerto opens fire on the astromech droid. The laser blasts hit the droid destroying it instantly. Swerto aims for the weapons capacitor. Swerto opens fire hiting the shields. Swerto holds down the trigger a barrage of lasers heading toward the ship. He goes through the shields and hits the capacitor. Swerto aims for the engine. Swerto pulls up as Hyro flies directly toward the bridge of the Vleaski Doethu. Swerto sets all missles to lock onto Hyro.
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Dammit looks like ill have to make my own door
Hyro beings to fire as he flys towards the bridge, the shield dont break untill he fires a shield disropter onto it, a small hole opens up on the bridge and Hyro begins to fire at it again just before he hits it the bridge wall explodes and Hyro ejects and falls into the bridge the safty doors close after him but he makes it though
from the frying pan into the fire
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How the hell did you shoot when I destroyed your weapons capacitor... oh well... I guess i'll have to stop you before you find out what the hell this place is.
Swerto lands in the docking bay and takes a turbo lift to the bridge. When he gets there everyone is unconcious and Hyro is nowhere to be found. Swerto pulls his lightsaber out and activates it.
Hmm... He'll soon find out THIS is the temple... I should just hurry and kill him then before he escapes and tells the enemy.
Hyro you'll be dead soon you hear me? I know you do.
Swerto dissapears
I sense you...
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Im dead you destroyed my X-Wing, i spent years on that. and i know where you are too swerto. and thanks you for showing where the docking bay is.
Hyro is hidden with the force
i sence alot of anger in you, more so than any other Dark Jedi ive meet, why is this so?
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Swerto is hidden directly behind Hyro. He senses Hyro. Swerto pushes his hand behind Hyro and disconnects him from the force.
Now i'll give you three guesses why I'm the leader of the Dark Jedi and how I got there. I'll give you a hint. I killed the old leaders myself. My anger gives me strength.
Swerto dissapears again and Hyro can't sense him because he is disconnected from the force temporarilly.
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