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BOBBY; BOBBY
Topic Started: Feb 23 2009, 02:41 PM (126 Views)
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BOBBY
Edited by KaigenHenshi, Apr 9 2009, 11:45 AM.
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A few changes to be made

1.
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Shugosei: By focusing his reiatsu within his zanpakuto Kaigen is able to force Seisora to create a spherical barrier of high speed wind that is capable of deflecting most attacks. Any outside force that attacks the sphere will find itself cut in the same fashion that Sora no Hoeru causes. This is a defensive tactic, however Kaigen cannot hold the barrier for longer than a few seconds, meaning that it is a quick defense measure utilized to off center his opponent then attack.


As this is I don't like it, so add in that it only deflects most attacks of those weaker or equal his strength.

2. Take his Bankai out completely, you'll need to train to gain it.

3. Don't give him so much Kaidou, ya have three options with that

Knowing all Kidou up to 50
Knowing all Bakudo up to 66
Knowing all Hado up to 66

Pick one and if you want him to know Shunpo add that in under Kidou and lower the amount of Kidou he can use
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Edited and done. I still kept his history up to a level that hints his near ability at attaining bankai. At least that way I won't have to rewrite too much for his history.
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Bleach: Dark Revenant
Dyo Kagoshima- Halibel's Fraccion

Ganryu Kuchiki- Leader of the Dark Ones


Bleach: Dawn to Dusk
Dyo Kagoshima- la Primera Espada

Kaigen Henshi- Eighth Division Lieutenant


Eragon: The Rise of Darkness
Xael Lilthanon/Namias- Elf Elder Dragon Rider


Bleach: Apocalypse
Aizen Sosuke


Inuyasha: The Feudal Era
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Kyoraku Shunsui
"Even if i wish for these peaceful days to last forever, it's still only a simply wish. Peace never lasts, eventually conflict will be born again, that is the undeniable truth"

Syao Byako

Shogo Kiriyama
"You listenin' you cowardly prick, you don't come out here right fuckin' now and I'll crush this little bastards head. You take too long in comin' out and I'll crush the little bastards head and piss on it's corpse, you got ten seconds"


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