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| TFE Magnus | Feb 21 2009, 09:50 PM Post #1 |
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Whose Roleplay Duel do you think was best? Try to read them all before you vote and then vote, consider which one was the best written and most interesting. Feel free to post in this thread saying why you voted. http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7089528/1/ NO VOTING FOR YOURSELF, I'LL KNOW IF YOU DO IT AND YOU'LL BE DISQUALIFIED NO WHORING YOURSELF OUT IN THE C-BOX EITHER Atredis: Spoiler: click to toggle It was a hot day in the rain forest today. The heat however was the least of the problems for the two Gundam pilots. One was Zechs Marquis in his Gundam Epyon, the other was the Gundam Pilot Heero Yui in Wing Zero. The two stood tall above the forest around them. A strange silence spread out around them as they summed each other up for the coming battle. Birds could be heard chirping and squaking their way through the air, while the forest floor was crawling with activity as the animals fled for their lives away from the battleground to be. Zechs gripped his controls tightly, had they not been metal he probably would have snapped them. This is the moment that I have dreamed of for so long, the moment that would finally decide who is the better pilot. Heero sat in his cockpit anxious but unflinching. He was the prime example of a stoic as he checked over the last few readings from his scanners. Zechs Marquis the Lightning Count. Finally I get to put you to an end and with it war all together. The two pilots then thrust their controls forward demanding instantaneous responses from their Gundams. The two drew energy swords and clashed midway. They then flew backwards away from each other and Heero raised his giant laser cannon and began to target Epyon. His cockpit flashed red as he gained a lock on his target. He pulled the trigger and soon a giant golden blast flew towards the other suit at high speed. The blast sent trees, animals, anything around it flying outward as it cut a deep trench through the ground on the way to its target. Zechs smiled and maneuvered his suit to the right and flew straight towards Heero. Heero responded by dropping the giant cannon and drew his sword again charging back at Zechs. The two were about to collide when Zechs used his whip to grab onto Zero's leg and pulled it tripping the great giant up. Heero though caught off guard countered by trying to line up his slide to try and strike at Zechs who was about to pass over him. Heero slashed up trying to cut Epyon in half in one blow but Zechs was again ahead in this game. He rolled his suit over and tried to dodge by rolling ending up getting Epyon's left leg damaged by the energy sword. Heero then regains his posture and charges in on Zechs who is still barrel rolling just a couple hundred feet off the ground. The forest beneath was in chaos from the heat and mass amount of air moving it was being torn to shreds. Zechs saw Heero charging forth and maneuvered his suit so that he could shoot straight into the sky. He spread his wings and dove back down on top of Heero. Heero then activated his own flying device and shoot straight up like a rocket towards Zechs. They collided again and began to swing at each other like two sword masters in a fight to the death, each trying to gain an advantage any advantage over the other. They streaked across the skies in a flurry of sword clashes and rolling motions. They finally broke up and flew away from each other for only a second. Zechs tried to use his whip again to try and gain another advantage but Heero saw it coming. As soon as the whip went for his leg again he stuck his sword down and the whip wrapped around it. He then pulled back on his blade drawing in Zechs like a fish on a fishing line. Heero then stabbed straight forward hoping to impale Zechs as he flew straight at him. Zechs however caught on and flew in the opposite direction ripping his whip to pieces. Now the fight was more even now that Zechs had lost one of his most valuable weapons. They paused their fight in order to soak up what had just happened over the course of the few minutes that had went by. The forest was a complete wreck with trees uprooted and miles of land blasted away. They both saw the cost of their battle but were both determined to end it once and for all. Zechs looked across at his opponent and said, "Heero Yui you and I both seek to end war but the means of which to do it are different for us. I seek peace through war you seek it through pure pacifism. This battle will decide which ideology is correct and which is flawed. Now show me what you truly can do." Heero listened to the white haired man and took in his words before replying, "Trying to create peace through bloodshed only creates more bloodshed. My time as a Gundam pilot has shown me this much. No matter how many factories we blew up, how many suits we destroyed, or how many people we killed war continued. It's time to end this Zechs you and your wrong train of thought." The two charged at one another and clashed swords once again. The massive brawl moved around the forest quickly from one spot to another as the two rivals fought for what they held as the true way to reach peace. Zechs brought his sword down hard and cut off Zero's left arm but Heero returned the favor by chopping off Epyon's legs. The two suits sparked as raw electrical power zapped out of the wounds, this fight wasn't going to last much longer. The two separated and Zechs offered a challenge, "Let us make this the final blow, winner take all." Heero responded "I was thinking the same thing." The two charged again for the last time and clashed for the last time. Heero swung horizontally while Zechs went vertically. A moment passed as each suit came to a halt just past each other. Epyon's head slid off and the suit exploded in a ball of flames. Zero's entire left side soon slid off and Heero jumped out just before the suit exploded. In the ashes of the battle Heero found the helmet of his rival "It seems we were both right, but also both wrong. You were a worthy opponent." He then walked away from the huge ball of flames that used to be the two greatest weapons in mankind now nothing more than scrap metal. Rinji79 Spoiler: click to toggle They wore masks, all around the dank, dark parking garage they lined up around the two in the middle. White and black masks glared a the two in the middle of the crude arena they had constructed. Laughter could be heard as they finished putting up the wired fence that surrounded Rinji and Sion as they did not take eyes off of one another. This was it; for years they had fought one another, taunting each other and growing the intensifying the anger between them. None of that mattered anymore, they were determined to become friends and they knew this was the only way to do it. Rinji's face was hardly seen, as it was colored mostly black with white stripes running down his chin. He was dressed in completely black leather, like Sion, who wore the paint of a pale, white skull on his face. He could feel it, there was the tension. He knew Sion could feel the same thing because his breathing began to heave. Their sight became red, and Rinji clinched his fists harder. This was the end. Sion was the first to strike, his hand came out of nowhere, balled into a fist, and struck Rinji square in the cheek. Rinji slumped to the side for a moment, but as Sion attempted to follow up with a kick, Rinji grabbed hold of his ankle, and swiped a mean kick into Sion's back. The skull-faced fighter felt a horrible rupture go through his kidney and he cringed, grunting in pain. Then he grabbed onto Rinji's shirt collar, slamming his knee into his gut and causing him to spew saliva and droplets of blood from his mouth. Rinji's orange skin showed from underneath the paint as he was pushed up against the metal bar in the corner of the cage. Rinji only saw flashes of red as Sion's fist blared into his T-zone. His head hit the bar hard, but on the rebound his forehead collided straight with Sion's painted nose. A crunching sound echoed through the garage as the cartilage was shattered instantly, and bloody snot poured from his nostrils. The orange-skinned young man cried out in sheer vigor as he spun around and bashed his foot into Sion's chest, making him bang against the wiring. Rinji walked up to him and hammered his fist straight into Sion's back, causing him to slump more. As Rinji prepared for another strike, however, Sion delivered a crushing upper-cut that blasted a wave of pain into Rinji's eye, causing him to stumble backward. For a moment, he looked at Sion, but soon that eye began to swell horribly, and he could only witness Sion's on-coming with his one working orb. Sion grasped his hair with one hand, and smashed it against the metal pole in the corner. Rinji could only hear ringing at that point, but the instant he got a good angle, his elbow swung across and caught Sion in the chin. Blood spewed from his mouth, but he came back for another hit at Rinji. The humanoid caught Sion's fist then smashed the back of his fist against Sion's cheek. The mangled skull paint was hardly visible as he dropped to the floor. Rinji in a fit of furious adrenaline got on top of Sion and there was more. One punch, Sion's face was bruised and swelling. The next punch, there was a dark void where Sion's mouth filled with blood. The third punch, Sion's eyes closed, only showing a slight bit of his cornea and pupil. Finally, Rinji stopped, and breathed the fury out of his lungs. He dropped down beside the one who lied there and panted, blood dripping from his mouth and sweat running the paint down his face. "We do feel alone..." Sion said, as he turned to the side, and spat a huge red loogy beside him. He could only open one of his eyes, and that was half way. He got up slowly and put his arm around Rinji's shoulders and lied his head on his right one. Both of them sat there as the crowd silently dismantled the wired fence. Rinji looked at Sion face to face, both of them sharing a moment of silence until Sion spoke again. "We do feel alone..." ImSlipUrKnot Spoiler: click to toggle "Ah, c'mon Dutch, if we gotta carry the shit all the way to Mexico, shouldn't we at least know what the fuck it is?" Revy had been going on about the mysterious parcel for nearly three hours, even Rock was getting sick of hearing her. "Listen, part of the contract is to deliver the package with the seal unbroken. If we break our contract, they have every reason not to pay us." Rock spoke quietly, trying to placate the gun-toting hot-head. Revy only snorted, "Yeah, whatever, Rock. You wanna find out what's in that crate just as bad as I do." As she spoke she moved closer to him and lowered her voice, breathing the words into his ear. Drawing back Rock shook his head, "Maybe I do, but I also don't want to give our client any reason not to pay us." "Rock's right, Revy." Dutch finally spoke up, "We wanna get payed, that crate stays closed." He flipped the intercom switch, "Benny-boy, you open that crate yet?" "Nope, I could care less about what's in it, but we finish this job and I think I'll finally have saved enough money to upgrade all our electronics." "Unidentified vessel." The radio crackled to life, "Heave to and prepare to be boarded, you are in restricted waters. I say again, Unidentified vessel, heave to and prepare for inspection." "Shit." Ducth said, "If there's one thing I know these asshole's'll do, it's open that crate. Hang on to something." He firewalled the throttle, the little torpedo boat fairly leaped forward across the pure blue waters of the Pacific. "If we can make it to Borneo I think we'll be alright." Suddenly a line of gunfire sititched it's way across the water a few feet in front of the boat. "Unidentified vessel, heave to and prepare to be boarded. This is your last warning." "Revy, go up top and take a look." Dutch said, hoping that they only had one pursuer. "Bad news Dutch, we've got three on our tail and I think I can see two more a little farther back." Suddenly something on the lead boat winked. A few seconds later sparke began leaping up around Revy as the bullets hit the steel side of the boat. They were only rifle rounds, harmless to the PT boat, but deadly for Revy. "Rock, hand me up the rifle." She grabbed the anti-tank gun that was the biggest weapon on board, aside from the four torpedoes. She looked through the scope on the rifle and took aim. She couldn't see anybody, but she found a window. A moment after she pulled the trigger the window shattered, she could make out a grayish red splatter on the wall. Teh lead boat began to slow, but only for a moment, someone new appeared in the window. Revy was just about to take another shot when she saw more muzzle flashes. She flattened herself out on the deck of the boat, bullets whizzing past her head. "Fuck." SHe said, "I wish we had a rocket launcher." The pursuing vessles fired another burst, this time something started grinding, thick black smoke began pouring from the engine compartment, "Fuck!" Revy spat, more vehemently this time."Dutch, they got the engine." "I know, I just lost all control over our speed, looks they're gonna get us. Why don't we run up a white flag so they don't just blow us out of the water." He replied calmly. Revy grinned, a milicious glint in her eye, "You thinkin' what I think your thinkin'?" She drew one of her Barreta 92F's and chambered a round, then she flicked the safety off before repeating the process with the other gun. She ducked under one of the torpedo launchers as Dutch came up with a white flag in hand. By now the boat was at a dead stop, drifting with the current. He waved the flag to make sure it was seen, then he waited for the pursuing boats to catch up to them. Revy had been right, there were five boats in all, now they ringed the Lagoon Company, every one of them with at least three guns pointed at the mercenary boat. One boat pulled up right alongside them, tieing the two vessels together. Now that they were closer Revy could see that they were Malaysian naval boats, none of them had anything bigger than a 20 mm cannon, but they were fast. Three men came off the lead boat, they spoke quietly with Ducth for a few seconds before two of them went below, the third stayed up top, presumably as a guard. Revy slid out from under the launcher and snuck up on him. She grabbed his mouth and snapped his neck before runnign along the deck and jumping onto the boat that had tied up alongside. There was only one person on the deck of the first boat, Revy pulled her cutlasses out and shot him once through the head. When she landed on the deck she rolled behind a bulkhead and peered around the corner. Here came two more, drawn by the gunshot. Revy turned the corner and fired two shots from each gun. The two men fell. "Let's see, that makes six I've seen, ships of this size usually have ten people aboard. If I were the captain I'd leave..." She pointed the gun at the wheelhouse, which had wooden sides. "The pilot." She fired four shots into the wheelhouse and was greeted by the sound of a body slumping to the floor. "And I'd leave the guys who know how to shoot." She spun around and emptied her clips, diving behind another bulkhead. "Damn, how many was that?" She wondered aloud, reloading her guns." She peeked around the corner and counted, three bodies lay on the deck. "Next." She said, grinning from ear to ear. She went around to teh bow of the ship and stood behind the cannon mounted there. She had a perfect view of two of the other ships, none of whom seemed to have heard the gunshots. "Let's enlighten them." She turned the cannon on one of the ships and poured fire onto it. The unsuspecting vessel was caught completely by surprise. Revy blew the wheelhouse clean off the ship and walked the gunfire along the length of it's hull. She must have hit somethinh important, the rear of teh ship exploded in a huge fireball, Revy could feel the heat across three hundred feet of ocean. She turned the cannon on the second boat, which had begun to move, and repeated the procedure. She shattered the wheelhouse again, but failed to cause another explosion, only slightly disappointed Revy left her cannon and disappeared into the bowels of the ship. It wasn't a large vessel, only a few feet longer than the Lagoon. She found the armory quickly. "Oh yeah baby." She said when she saw a tube and three RPG's laying next to a grenade launcher. When Revy appeared back on the dck she saw that the other two boats had moved to help their stricken comrades. The one that had exploded was already sinking beneath the waves. Revy took aim with one of her RPG's and fired at the second boat she had shot up with the cannon. She hit it directly amidships and tore a gaping hole in the side, it sank even faster than the first one. The other two boats turned on her. She quickly reloaded her launcher and fired again, this one went wild and high. "Shit." She didn't have enough time to reload again. The other two boats opened up with their cannon. Revy turned and ran aft, ducking behind a gun mount. The two boats came up, one on either side of the vessel Revy had ravaged, to see what had happened. Revy ducked to port and jumped across the small water gap that separated the two ships. She fired a grenade at the wheelhouse as she jumped, it exploded, the concunssion from the blast knocked two gunners into the water. She ran aft, loosing another grenade as she went, this one down the engineroom hatch. She leapt from the now forlorn ship back to the first, then back onto the Lagoon, and then onto the last Malaysian ship. She landed right next to a gun mount, the gunner was so astonished that he failed t shoot even once. Revy punched him in the jaw and the man fell, unconcious, to the deck. She fired a grenade into the wheelhouse, and then one over it. the twin explosions engulfed the bow of the ship in flame. Tossing the grenade launcher into teh watter Revy went down into the eingie room. She pulled her cutlasses out and shot one of the engineers. "The rest of you are coming with me." No one argued. Back aboard the Lagoon, Dutch, Rock, and Benny had tied up the two men who had gone below, one of them was a Captain. When Revy brought three engineers, one of them carrying a gunner, onto the ship the two naval officers looked as if they had just seen a child run over by a car. "So." Ducth said, "Which one of you thinks you can fix our engine?" He looked at the assembled prisoners. "Winner not only gets to live, but he gets to float around in a life raft with a radio." Revy, still grinning wickedly, lead the six captives to the engine room. It actually took two of them to fix the engine. Despite the threat, none of them was killed. They were given a radio and a life raft. "That radio's range is only about ten miles, and the battery's good for about six hours of continuous use. Use it wisely." Dutch said as he lowered it to them. The one naval boat that still ran had had it's throttle firewalled and it's wheel tied into a straight position. If the fuel lasted, it would run into the island of Java in about five hours. "That was fun." Revy laughed, "Fuckin' idiots actually thought they had us for a second." She laughed for a few minutes, wiping a tear from her eye she turned serious in a second, "So Dutch, seriously, after all that are you really gonna not look in the fuckin' crate?" The King of Fap Spoiler: click to toggle The cries of the beast chimed like a choir in Tetsu’s ears, giving him a wicked feeling of pleasure deep within the confines of his twisted mind. He never could resist the temptation of snubbing-off the occasional creature to feed his sadist thirsts. Some would have labeled him a madman, others would call him a demon, but he knew what he truly was, and it was what made his killings a form of art that topped the works of Picasso or Dali. The Quincy strode slowly towards the body of the now dying hollow, its eyes trying to catch a last glimpse into the moon before letting out one last feral cry. “WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!” The Quincy released his bow once more and aimed for the beast’s heart, assuming that the creature had a heart. He licked his lips, smearing the blood of the beast and the fluid of his mouth all over his face, and fired; the kickback of the bow had been strong, but not strong enough to knock a being as balanced as Tetsu back any further. He cackled, his voice following the same tempo as the dozens of arrows being fired from his pitiful looking bow, which had been an old family relic of sorts, being handed down from generation to generations like some useful trinket. It hadn’t been too useful, but it was partially Tetsu’s fault for not honing to his families notoriously decisive battle tactics that left most who watched in a hazy gaze. His grandfather, the famed Quincy Commander Soryu Tsumari who had been lost in the Quincy Slaughter over three to four hundred years ago, wouldn’t have been particularly pleased with the way he had been doing things, but he was dead, his opinions were drivel to Tetsu, who saw the old ways as sort of a back-draft for mediocrity. Tetsu sealed his bow once more; there was nothing else for him to do other than cower the streets in search of better garb, his being soaked in the smelly substance called “hollow blood”, and shelter. He sneered once again at the body, which had already begun the process of de-animation, and yelled triumphantly a curse for the other’s to hear. “Rotting miscreants of another time…leave now or you shall be wasted by my bow. I can hear the fear in your other worldly chatter; you speak of me as if I were the famed Van Hellsing and wish me to die by the hands of the shinigami. But oh…..how you miscode my actions. I am here simply to feed my hunger for death; and every one of you has been added to my menu.” As corny as his words had sounded, he meant every little phrase of it. He was contempt in no longer battling and no longer wished to be in the cruel ironic glow of moon, which made the blood of his slain foe glow in the most ominous of colors. He was simply wishing to find a place to rest his thoughts for the night, a nice tree or thrown out mattress would have been just swell for now until he was able to locate a home that better suited him. And as quickly as he had came, he faded into the background of the city streets. The King of Fap Spoiler: click to toggle The cries of the beast chimed like a choir in Tetsu’s ears, giving him a wicked feeling of pleasure deep within the confines of his twisted mind. He never could resist the temptation of snubbing-off the occasional creature to feed his sadist thirsts. Some would have labeled him a madman, others would call him a demon, but he knew what he truly was, and it was what made his killings a form of art that topped the works of Picasso or Dali. The Quincy strode slowly towards the body of the now dying hollow, its eyes trying to catch a last glimpse into the moon before letting out one last feral cry. “WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!” The Quincy released his bow once more and aimed for the beast’s heart, assuming that the creature had a heart. He licked his lips, smearing the blood of the beast and the fluid of his mouth all over his face, and fired; the kickback of the bow had been strong, but not strong enough to knock a being as balanced as Tetsu back any further. He cackled, his voice following the same tempo as the dozens of arrows being fired from his pitiful looking bow, which had been an old family relic of sorts, being handed down from generation to generations like some useful trinket. It hadn’t been too useful, but it was partially Tetsu’s fault for not honing to his families notoriously decisive battle tactics that left most who watched in a hazy gaze. His grandfather, the famed Quincy Commander Soryu Tsumari who had been lost in the Quincy Slaughter over three to four hundred years ago, wouldn’t have been particularly pleased with the way he had been doing things, but he was dead, his opinions were drivel to Tetsu, who saw the old ways as sort of a back-draft for mediocrity. Tetsu sealed his bow once more; there was nothing else for him to do other than cower the streets in search of better garb, his being soaked in the smelly substance called “hollow blood”, and shelter. He sneered once again at the body, which had already begun the process of de-animation, and yelled triumphantly a curse for the other’s to hear. “Rotting miscreants of another time…leave now or you shall be wasted by my bow. I can hear the fear in your other worldly chatter; you speak of me as if I were the famed Van Hellsing and wish me to die by the hands of the shinigami. But oh…..how you miscode my actions. I am here simply to feed my hunger for death; and every one of you has been added to my menu.” As corny as his words had sounded, he meant every little phrase of it. He was contempt in no longer battling and no longer wished to be in the cruel ironic glow of moon, which made the blood of his slain foe glow in the most ominous of colors. He was simply wishing to find a place to rest his thoughts for the night, a nice tree or thrown out mattress would have been just swell for now until he was able to locate a home that better suited him. And as quickly as he had came, he faded into the background of the city streets. weehay Spoiler: click to toggle He sat still on his white throne staring at the three men standing before him, his long black cloak covered most of the throne and his body. His hands rested softly on each arm of the throne, his eyes were closed and a smile graced his face. Slowly his two hands raised off the arms of the throne and moved into a slow clap, the sounds of both his hands hitting softly against each other echoed throughout the large empty throne room. "Congratulations on making it this far and now I guess you figured after making it this far you'd slay me and end all the suffering and death I've caused this world" His voice was deep and in some ways it was as comforting and warm as a loving mother speaking to her beloved children. He slowly opened his eyes to reveal the pure golden eyes of god, the eyes that had allowed him to gain the incredible power he had, a power so far beyond anything else in this world that only a god could truly defeat him. These eyes prevented him from ageing and had done so for the passed three hundred years but the true power that lay within these eyes was not the prevention of ageing, it was the fact that these very eyes allowed the host to learn all magic. The ones who possessed these golden eyes did not have the boundaries that normal beings had, these eyes broke those boundaries. "It seems no one has learnt yet that no one can kill me, the attempts at taking my life are futile. These pointless heroic efforts will only lead to more death, to more suffering, these efforts will cause the very things you all wish to prevent" Before he could continue one of those men facing him stepped forward, he wore silver armour which held in the middle of his chest the royal insignia of Rocian, A silver horse standing firmly as two golden serpents slivered around it's body and sent their fangs at the horses head. He extended his right arm out aiming the palm of his hand at the head of the dark lord sitting in his throne. Small red spheres of magical energy began to spiral around his hand, combining one after the other until they formed a glowing red ball that floating just inches away from his hand. "ENOUGH" He screamed angrily, his voice shaking with fear as he tried as hard as he could to hide it but he could not deny the fact that he was facing a terrifying man, a man that had took over the world single-handedly and ruled over it for almost three hundred years "Accept the fate that has come before you, accept that the day of your death has come. We will not fail those who have put their trust within us, we will kill you on this day no matter how you struggle" The ball of magic then shot away from his hand and towards the head of the dark lord, the power of the of magic within the ball ripped through the walls and floor as it flew towards it's target at a terrifying speed. "Then I'll show you the meaning of true fear" He spoke as he slowly stood up from his throne, the fireball coming at him was suddenly overpowered and the magic within it was dispelled. The fireball was ripped apart before it got near the dark lord and as he stepped on the ground all three men facing him felt the force of his magical power. The walls, floor and ceiling began to crack as he continued to increase his power and when it seemed it could not grow any further he released a huge blast which destroyed the entire room and catapulted the three men standing before him out of the room. The walls and floor shattered instantly and the ceiling exploded into the air and towards the armies of men and beasts below them surrounding the giant black castle. The dark lord floated in mid air and streams of black energy began to slowly circle his body, his menacing golden eyes stayed fixed on the three fools before him. Both his hands slowly extended to point at them, the black energy slowly curved round his arms and into the palm of his hands. The energy began to pulse as it mixed together, everything around him seemed to die instantly, there was no wind or air surrounding him. The wind avoided him as if it had become terrified of the man dressed in black and any oxygen that came near him was instantly devoured by the black magical energy of the hell. "You spoke bravely despite the fear that was tearing at you very soul, the words that escape your mouth are nothing but words to comfort yourself in times of despair they mean nothing. Let me show you death in its truest form, let me send you to the pits of hell" The black energy fired out in a beam, heading straight towards the three men that death so closely approached. It seemed however that death was not ready to take their life's, the black beam was destroyed meters away from the men and as the dark lord stared on in shock one of the men stood. Wearing the same silver army as the other, he however had the black eyes of the devil, a pair of eyes similar to the dark lords. The power these eyes held was different from the dark lords, they did not grant the user the ability to learn all magic, no instead they nullified all magic within a certain radius of the host. This ability however made it impossible for the host to learn any magic whatsoever but for that sacrifice came a great power that could turn the tide of a battle in a single moment. "Magic will not work against me.." However before he could finish speaking pain began to overcome his entire body, something had pierced his chest and as all sound seemed to escape his ears he could still very clearly hear the sound of his own blood falling to the ground. His trembling hands moved slowly onto the object that had placed so much pain on him, he touched the cold steel blade of the sword that cut through him. He looked back towards the dark lord only to find that he had vanished, he started to panic and search for his enemy frantically, his eyes widened with shock as the realisation came to him, he slowly looked towards his left hand side to find the dark lord beside him with his hand on the sword that was taking his life away from him. He tried to pull the sword out but his attempts were futile and as a result of his efforts the blade was pushed further into his body, he collapsed to his knees as blood rushed up his throat and out of his mouth. His eyes slowly became dull as his head fell limply to the side, the sword was ripped out of his body and he collapsed to the ground, death had come and taken his life. Revan46 Spoiler: click to toggle Naruto was against the ground, his hands one on top of the other, stuck together by the black chakra pike that Pain had stuck through his hands. As he lay there he felt an odd feeling as though someone was controlling his chakra, and keeping him from using it. He couldn’t let what was happening to him continue, and looking over to Fukusaku’s unconscious body, he curled his fingers despite not being able to move his hands. He looked up at Pain in pure anger and tried again to focus his chakra, still feeling as though someone controlled it. However, he noticed something as he lay there, sweat was rolling down Pain’s forehead, he realized that even if this Pain was a puppet, it was still taking a large amount of chakra to control the pike.
Naruto focused his chakra further, bringing forth a small amount of the Kyuubi’s chakra as well and pushed it through his hands. As he did he felt the pike begin to lose its’ weight. Pushing more chakra through his hands he felt the pike losing more and more power until, to the shock of Pain, Naruto flung the pike out of his hands and jumped back picking up Fukusaku and quickly ran and placed him by Shima. He quickly turned back once more and faced Pain smirking. ”You think I didn’t notice that to keep control of the chakra of a person, it took a large amount of your own chakra. By putting more and more chakra through my body it overloaded the chakra pike and as a result allowed me to escape from it. Now, it’s time to end this Pain. You’re the last one left and I’m going to stop you, and then I’ll find the real you and stop you once and for all.” Naruto yelled to Pain then made the seal for Kage Bunshin once more. “You can try Kyuubi, Bansho Tenin.” Pain commanded, stretching his arm forward once more. As Pain did this, Naruto felt himself being flung forward once again, but this time he anticipated this. Flying towards Pain, Naruto quickly retrieved a scroll from his pouch and summoned a small scythe and swung it right at Pain’s neck as he reached the Akatsuki leader’s puppet body. At this moment, Naruto took the short time he had to focus his natural chakra to activate Sage Mode once again. As the circles appeared around his eyes, Naruto felt energy returning to him and readied himself for his plan. Pain ducked but as a result let go of his power in order to duck. Taking this time Naruto quickly summoned two Kage Bunshin and threw them at Pain and tied the leader’s body up with chains that they both held. Naruto then held out his hand while one of the clones jumped over to quickly form a Rasen-Shuriken in Naruto’s hand. Holding it above him Naruto released it and sent it spinning at the Pain in front of him. However, Pain did exactly what he expected and Naruto felt himself fly backwards as a result of Shinra Tensei. He quickly back-flipped and dodged the Rasen-Shuriken that had been flung back at him. With the Shinra Tensei this time, unfortunately for Pain, both of his clones had held onto the chains wrapped around the Akatsuki leader and as a result, Pain was now tied up. “Well it looks like I finally got you exactly as I needed. Using your Shinra Tensei I was able to use my clones in conjunction to tie you up further that once you used your attack the chains would tighten and as you see now, you can’t even move your arms at all. I don’t know if you need your arms to use the attack but no matter how many times you use it, you still have a five second time span that you recharge in. Now tell me where you really are, or your body is going to be destroyed.” Naruto said, looking intently at Pain. Pain’s face stayed emotionless, almost as if the chains and everything else were inconsequential. He looked to his left and to his right to see his former bodies; Asura was destroyed and in pieces because of the first Rasengan, Naraka and Animal were dead or incapacitated due to the Kyuubi’s dual Rasengan, Preta was turned to stone and his arms were destroyed as the Nine-Tail had broken through them, and Human path was ripped to shreds with only his head remaining because of the Rasen-Shuriken that the brat had thrown. He looked back up at the Kyuubi and summoned more chakra, projecting it outward but only felt the chains tighten even more because of the two clones. If he kept doing this it would rip him apart, so instead he used his chakra and cast Bansho Tenin once again bringing forward the clones and causing them to collide. Upon seeing the clones collide Naruto grimaced and knew he had only one chance more, despite having lost Sage mode from sending the Rasen-Shuriken. He’d have to bring forward the other clone from Myobokuzan so that his Sage Mode would return. He called over to Shima who although was crying over Fukusaku, opened the scroll and reverse summoned the Naruto clone gathering natural energy. Naruto quickly released the jutsu and the outline around his eyes returned as the clone's collected energy filled his body. Naruto quickly sent two more clones at Pain and watched them get blown away once more, however this time Naruto was quicker and ran right at Pain as soon as Shinra Tensei had been used. 5…4… Naruto thought counting down till Pain could use the power once more. This was his chance; Naruto quickly focused his chakra into his palm creating a Rasengan that was larger than his normal one, but smaller than his Great Ball Rasengan. 3… Naruto thrust his arm forward hurtling the Rasengan directly into the centre of Pain’s body. Pain looked up at Naruto stunned and then was flung backwards by the force of the Rasengan. As he hurtled backwards, Naruto grabbed the end of the chain that was still wrapped around Pain and pulled it back causing Pain’s body to fly back towards Naruto. Naruto then flung it down so that Pain hit the ground, then with one final move Naruto slammed his fist into the body causing several hundred cracks to be heard as the body lay broken. Panting Naruto looked down at the body below him and then looked over to Fukusaku and Shima. “I guess, this part is over. But now we need to find the real Pain, and help Fukusaku-dono.” Naruto said to Shima, walking over to her and picking up Fukusaku. “Shima, I still feel his life energy present, I have to get him to Sakura-chan.” Naruto said, then quickly picked up Shima and headed to find Sakura, leaving the broken and incapacitated bodies of Pain in the crater behind him. |
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| TFE Magnus | Feb 22 2009, 09:24 PM Post #2 |
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Negro please.
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