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[eagle0100] Zhar Manos
Topic Started: Feb 18 2009, 02:18 PM (63 Views)
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Name: Zhar Manos
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Rank: PrivatePosted Image
Psychic: No

Appearance:
5ft 11, Blonde Hair, Blue eyes, Weighs about an average amount, but is not all that muscular. He has the standard Crew cut, and has a big scar on his wrist from a childhood injury. He has no major scars on his face, but has always had very skinny wrists from the injury, but that was not always a bad thing, for he is always very steady when shooting.

Armour/Clothes:
When not wearing his battle armor, he normally just wears the standard slacks, but has a old USA flag across his back. His Armor is red with the lines in black, just his modifications that can be changed if a commander orders it. He can wear a thick jacket when it is cold and he is off duty, but never wears any light sweaters, just either his armor, his slacks, or a thick white jacket.

History:
Was born on Terra, in the province that used to be called Europe. When he was 9, his dad joined the Marines, and disappeared from his life, but he got fascinated by the Marines. He would have posters of them on his wall, and would play all the video games by them. When he was in school, he was elected to be his class leader, and did a decent job at it to, but he felt that that position was not all that important in the long run. He graduated, but was not one of the smartest, but he felt that he didn't need to be, for he wanted to be a Marine his whole life. When he joined the marines, he had huge trouble starting, and he was never in the best of shape... he used to be the one always lagging behind on the runs, but after the humiliation given to him, he was able to keep up. He was always able to shoot strait and well, which was one of the few reasons that the Marines didn't drop him early, and he proved his worth.

Personality:
He is someone who is able to keep his cool, but when in battle he has a huge blood-lust. It is very easy to tell that he is a soldier, and when he walks into any resteraunt, people tend to avoid him. He is normally a very pessimistic person, and when he is in danger he always expects the worst to happen, which is a trait some of his officers in training camp beleived was a good thing. He is able to keep his cool and get over his pessimism in order to efectivly participate in combat. He tends to be ambitous, and is always looking forward to another promotion, although his graduation from recruitness was a good thing.

Attributes:

Strength: 1

Intelligence: 2

Dexterity: 2

Charisma: 3

Constitution: 2


Credits, Equipment, & Transport:


Credits: 150

Equipment:
Gauss Rifle
200 rounds
200 explosive rounds
Marine Suit
5 Incendiary grenades
2 packs of Nukem Dukes
1 Zippo lighter
bottle of whiskey
5 medium rations


Vehicle: none yet :(

Mission Log: none yet :(
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K history is fine but his appearance, personality and clothes and armor need major beefing up I would like two or three paragraphs min for these
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Ok Beefed it up... not sure what you meant did you want 2-3 paragraphs each, or 2-3 paragraphs total... if what i did is fine that is great, but i will edit it some more if need be.
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Good job ya earned me stamp


APPROVED
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Inventory updated
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