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| Penfold | Feb 12 2009, 07:06 AM Post #1 |
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Full Name:Penfold Goddenshaw Codename or Alias: Penfold, or Pen Gender: Male Age: 135 (if its too old for a scout 85) Birthdate: 20/05/40,070 (i think thats how a date would go) Place Of Birth: Covec V Occupation/Status:scout Alignment:loyalist Factions:apart from my chapter: none Canon Or Original?:original (i rarely copy ideas) psychic potancey:none Weapons/Items:going on educated guesses: Bolter, Combat knife, scope, scout armour Appearance: taller than average, rounded face, short black cropped hair, blue eyes, no scarring, muscular build Visual Appearance: i ahve no image as of yet will have one tomorrow Physical Appearance: already done Clothing and Armor:ultramarines scout Armour with bags full of ammo and spare knives General Personality: strengths: routes of home planet weaknesses: new planet routes he dosnt know about likes: close combat dislikes: waiting, always wants to get the job done, will think little else except his mission Character's History: Before joining the astrial lions on Covec V Penfold often played with a wooden lasgun with his friends, he would always pretend he was serving the emperor and destroying the hordes of orks he always wanted to join the imperial guard but he learnt about the Astrial lions and thought he could better serve the imperium by becoming a battle brother while his friends joined the guard he joined the marines and was accepted into their training Role Play Sample: (you've already seen my RP sample but i shall put it again) Penfold trained hard as a scout and exited the tent where new recruits were gathered he had a note to go into the capital and look for scout leader (sergeant) Lentian, as he walked another scout greeted him "Hail brother, you look lost can i help you?" greeted the scout "hail," penfold replied "im looking for scout leader Lentian" " ahh. a new recruit are you? i am Yuorth i am in lentians squad, allow me to show you to him" yuorth offered "thank you brother" Penfold accepted and followed him though many back streets and turns untill finally they came to a cathedral climbing hundred of stairs they reached an arched room, this room was a mess rubble everywhere and 2 arches, one filled with bricks and rubble, the otehr filled with 3 men around a table, 2 of them were pouring over a map while the third was at the window with a sniper rifle looking out over the terrain "cub lentian sir, we have a new recruit" yuorth called Penfold bowed as lentian looked him over "welcome brother, your name?" the cub leader inquired. "penfold brother cub leader" penfold answered "you wish to join out squad? we are welcome for the company, come pull up a chair while i talk you through our mission" lentian said smiling as penfold sat down he introduced the rest of the squad, the sniper being Cosuth and the 4th man being yarath. yarath used a flamer, yuorth used a bolter, cosuth using the sniper rifle, and lentian used chain sword and bolt pistol knowing he was better in close combat he offered to use both bolter and knife at the same time, lentian admired his bravery but declined and told him to use a bolter until he has more experience. Penfold glumly agreed but he agreed quickly Edited by Penfold, Feb 12 2009, 10:15 AM.
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| Penfold | Feb 14 2009, 01:46 PM Post #2 |
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i was told i could make him chapter master of the astrial lions o im making a double post: if i am allowed then this app please if not i still have my old scout *up* Full Name:Penfold Goddenshaw Codename or Alias: Penfold, or Pen Gender: Male Age: 135 (if its too old for a scout 85) Birthdate: 20/05/40,070 (i think thats how a date would go) Place Of Birth: Covec V Occupation/Status:Lion master (chapter master) Alignment:loyalist Factions:apart from my chapter: none Canon Or Original?:original (i rarely copy ideas) psychic potancey:none Weapons/Items:going on educated guesses: Shroud of the lion (adamantine mantle) the claws of the lion (dual thunder hammers) (assuming we are going on the new rules) Lions mane (iron halo as they get them free) Appearance: taller than average, muscular build, a single Green eye remains the rest of his face is bionics Visual Appearance: i ahve no image as of yet will have one soon Physical Appearance: already done Clothing and Armor: astrial lions armour (primary colour: ultramarines blue secondary colour: white trim: gold weapon paintings: red General Personality: strengths: routes of home planet weaknesses: new planet routes he dosnt know about likes: close combat dislikes: waiting, always wants to get the job done, will think little else except his mission Penfold has spent alot of time fighting with his brothers, it was said he sent a proud lion (dread) to combat a whole platoon of traitor guards men, each pride (company) are linked via comm system and tells Penfold if any major wars are happening, he normally uses the whole chapter to fight as one rather than companies, rumors reveal they will fight any man of the imperium if need be and that penfold is secretly under the influence of chaos after his battle with a blood thirster, the astrial lions deny this strongly as they are pure of heart and fight with a zeal rarely seen in the space marines unless you count the sisters of battle (will finish this off sometime) |
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| Amakard | Feb 14 2009, 03:12 PM Post #3 |
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Hey pen im making the modifications for the game but i think chapter master is a bit much, you want a captain knock yourself out but really if you make a master then i have to have 1000 of these guys in the solar system and i think it might ruin the plot. I like the prfile i know the sheet is a bit wonky but im geting to is and ...Dual thunder hammers man wow. you know there 6feet long and about 60lbs a pice right, hes a marine so be it. As a captain take the mantel or the halo then pick one weapon like that alright like a thunder hammer or if you want to be sick a pair of lightning claws....well you cant shoot if you have them Ill work on it tonight and get back with some better info and a chapter master would be at least 200 years old hes just right for a fired young captain though. |
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| bLiNd | Feb 15 2009, 02:24 AM Post #4 |
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A Chapter master is the kind of guy who never leaves the chapters homeworld, can take out a greater daemon in single combat if required and has access to and ENTIRE SPACE MARINE CHAPTER to call upon for anything he chooses. Who told you that you could make him a chapter master exactly? I know it wasn't me, and it doesn't sound like it was Amakard. We're being more freeform and open with things but...having access to a thousand marines, a fleet of starships and being able to go mono-e-mono with things stronger than a Daemon Prince seems like it'd be...really boring to play. There would be no challenge and no call to ever stand up. "Weapons/Items:going on educated guesses: Shroud of the lion (adamantine mantle) the claws of the lion (dual thunder hammers) (assuming we are going on the new rules) Lions mane (iron halo as they get them free)" Why is everyone filling this out like they're buying gear for a tabletop hero? You can't use dual-thunder hammers, you can probably carry one in each hand but even marines in terminator armor wouldn't have the power to effectively use two of them at once. I have no idea what you mean by 'as they get them for free'. Iron Halo's are never 'free', they're a gift bestowed upon a veteran marine for centuries of service rendered, generally restricted to the greatest of veterans to promote them to leaders, or chaplains of course. |
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| Penfold | Feb 15 2009, 04:17 AM Post #5 |
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twas zelderex plus if you look in the space marine codex chapter masters get an iron halo for no points, plus if you look at marnius kelgar when he isn't in his terminator amour he sill wears his gauntlets of ultramar which is more or less 2 power fists, thunder hammers are the same as power fists except the stun vehicles automatically as long as they hit their target edit: besides i made him a chapter master based on my army for tabletop plus i thought i couldn't make him as chapter master, but i was told i could so that's why i did a dual application if you don't like it as chapter master then go ahead and use the scout one Edited by Penfold, Feb 15 2009, 04:20 AM.
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| Zelderex | Feb 15 2009, 10:36 AM Post #6 |
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Yeah, sorry If I caused confusion. |
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| bLiNd | Feb 15 2009, 03:48 PM Post #7 |
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This isn't tabletop, and Marneus Calgar is one of the oldest and greatest chapter masters as far as lore is concerned, controlled the largest and one of the most established and respected founding space marine chapters. If you look, every lore-based chapter master or special character has at least one piece of gear or the like that's unique to them. Marneus Calgar doesn't wield two power fists either, he owns the Gauntlets of Utramar, named for the homeworld of the Ultramarines, an ancient relic dating back to the time of the great crusade itself. Pointing to one of the strongest characters in the tabletop game [he's up there alongside Abaddon was strongest stat-line/gear setup] and saying 'But he has them' isn't a very good argument. It comes across as you treating the game as something you 'win' as opposed to something you 'play to have fun'.
That's the completely opposite direction there. You go from one of the strongest things you could possibly be, to the lowest space marine in the chapters food chain. What's wrong with a battle brother? A veteran sergeant? A newly promoted chaplain or Librarian? There's a lot you could be besides 'Newbie' and 'God-slayer!'. I'm trying not to pick, and I hope I'm not coming across as mean. It's my job to look everything over and raise any issues however. In the end characters are meant to be better, cooler, get more babes and be more fun to play alongside other people as a result. : ) |
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| Penfold | Feb 16 2009, 01:49 AM Post #8 |
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yes but my first post was to be a scout and start at the bottem as thats what i thought you had to be then zelderex said i could make him chapter master like i wanted to at first with the old system i doubted this and seeing as amakard and you blind were offline i thought if i make a double post then all the thought i put into the scout penfold is still there incase zelderex is wrong and as a reply to what you said about marneus: a: powerfists and thunder hammers are the same thing b: yes i knwo they are relic but i put down the claws of the lion, again an artifact of the chapter c: i put down claws as last i checked lions attacked with both paws thus both claws (fear my rhyming) d:i know this following thing is a bit of a pathetic argument but: if you look in the chapter master profile on the space marine codex (could be captain but im quite sure its chapter master) you will see a marine with 2 thunder hammers, thus proving its possible thus my char is allowed two thunder hammers no? |
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| Amakard | Feb 16 2009, 10:06 AM Post #9 |
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As the God emperor and this my second Horus greatest of my general has given you his decree. I will explain to you the difference between a hammer and a fist. A thunder hammer is a weapon with a kinetic force module inside of it which it stores from all the little motions you make and unleashes them when you strike with it. Yes in rules they are the same. but a power fist can crush like a vice and has the same affect as a power sword when it touches material. There for a chapter master is a no no and no more will come on this topic but seeing you want power play a battle brother i know on the table top they seem boring and average but in the setting a real rules game would have a Battle brother with stats similar to the chapter masters of the table top, not necessarily the gear but is every American soldier on the battle field the same looking no you can carry different loads and weapon variations. Any questions and PM me directly and i will give yu the answers. This is final and the word of he on terra. |
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| Penfold | Feb 16 2009, 01:44 PM Post #10 |
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so yeah anyway i wanted the scout at first, i was just checking if i could get the chapter master but i cant so shh but yeah... its approved aint it amakard? |
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| Amakard | Feb 16 2009, 03:24 PM Post #11 |
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ya your scout is |
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