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[Zelderex] Vladamir Zanstir; Kreig Korps, new format, loyalist
Topic Started: Feb 11 2009, 04:57 PM (123 Views)
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Ok, this is my first Char using the new format.

General Information

Full Name: Vladamir Zanstir
Codename or Alias: Zan, Vlad,
Gender:Male
Age: 21
Birth date: September 9th, Terran days/months
Place Of Birth: Kreig
Occupation/Status:Imperial Guardsman
Alignment: Loyalist
Factions: The Death Korps Of Kreig
Canon Or Original?:Original
psychic potency: 5
Weapons/Items: Lasrifle, combat knife, autogun

Appearance

Visual Appearance:Posted Image

Physical Appearance:(I'll work on it if needed)

Clothing and Armor:
Kreig Death Korps standard armor, helmet is fitted with various improvised spikes on the helmet,

General Personality:
General: Fatalist
Likes: Guns, tanks, Combat medics
Dislikes: Heretics, Tyranids, Any commanding unit who doesn't fight or go to the front lines to aid the effort.
Fears: Astartes

Character's History Zan was born on Kreig, raised on Kreig, and trained, on Kreig. For Zan, the Emperor Is less a god than a king. He always has been.
Zan learned his fear of Astartes, not a run in terror fear, more of a, stare blankly in awe inspired fear of a mortal god, kind of fear, from an encounter he had as a new recruit. It was nice out, peaceful day, then some Orks caused some trouble. They were no problem, felled quickly, the real problem, Traitor guard. Two or three squads turned on the men, these squads were the ones manning turrets, and other emplaced weapons. The traitorous bastards also had a handful of civilian cultists helping them, and a minor demon. There was an Astartes there, Dark Angel, he was looking over the defenses. It had been a few years since a major chaos attack, and the Dark Angels were suspicious they would try again, as such defenses were beefed up.
Zan was lucky enough to be showing the Space Marine the positions when hell broke loose. In seconds guns were blazing and rockets screaming. The Space Marine told Zan to stay down. Then the Man drew his gun, the nearby turret wasn't firing on him yet. The man kicked in the heavy door and let loose, with only a few shots the small chamber was filled with blood. It was awe inspiring, the Marine had felled an entire squad in seconds.
Zan isn't sure why, but the event has left him with an awe inspiring fear of Astartes.


Role Play Sample: Zan led a small squad of soldiers, he wasn't their normal leader, he was just the next man down from their now dead commander.
The men ran over a snow drift, coming out to find a squad of Ork Slugga Boyz just waking up from a nap. Zan ordered his men to rush them, guns blazing. The Orks were drowsy and surprised, overwhelmed quickly. The only problem that occurred was the waking of another squad just a few yards away. Six shoota Boyz rushed around from behind a nearby tent, letting loose blind shots. They managed to kill two, one Guard, one Ork.
Zan ordered most of his men to come with him in a rush on the Orks. Zan pulled his stubber and let loose on the group, felling two. It only took seconds to finish off the rest.
Wheeling around the corner Zan and his men found a sleeping Nob, out cold. Zan (With help) hauled the bastard to his feet, waking him, looking it in the eye, then stabbing it.

As the guards walked away, blood pooled around the body, dripping from the bullet hole in the Orks head.
Edited by Amakard, Feb 16 2009, 09:36 AM.
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Hey there dude. Not too bad so far. We do need a history before we can go ahead and approve the profile, and keep in mind that whilst Orks are about the same size and strength of a man, they are as tough and durable as a Space Marine. If you stabbed a Nob and managed to kill it, then you must have had one hell of a power-stabby bit. : )
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Better?
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Zypher Fenn http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7082751/1/#new

The Songs of a distant Earth:
Vansk Dor'Lanian

Warhammer 40,000:
Vladamir Vanstir http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7088865/1/#new

Starcraft: Survival
Zin Vonsk

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Much better, it provides some information on his background and it helps to round out his personality as well. This is looking good and when Amakard get's back online I'm sure he'll move this over to the approved section in no time. : )

Keep in mind however that we're currently in the process of re-working the setup of this World Project and as a result, things may be a little hectic in regards to providing a thread for you to play in instantly. With luck we'll have everything sorted out in a day or two : )
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Well, I already know about the new format, system, etc. That's the big reason I decided to use the new sheet.\

(Edit) This was harder, as I had a sheet in the old format done already
Edited by Zelderex, Feb 12 2009, 04:21 PM.
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Star Wars; Mysteries of the force:
Zypher Fenn http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7082751/1/#new

The Songs of a distant Earth:
Vansk Dor'Lanian

Warhammer 40,000:
Vladamir Vanstir http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7088865/1/#new

Starcraft: Survival
Zin Vonsk

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In honesty, the new sheet is easier to understand than the older sheet with it's statistic system. The new setup is very much in place to allow players to play what they would like to play from the go, as opposed to having to start out as a scout, recruit, trainee, etc.

I've gotta ask though. How the hell are you carrying a rifle, meltagun and a heavy stubber all at the same time? I mean, the first one is standard issue, but the second two are generally what you give to a dedicated trained squad member in a platoon.
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That is a good question, you know what, I'm going heavy stubber.

EDIT: Ok, I'm going with an autogun. (I've made changes neccesary)
Edited by Zelderex, Feb 13 2009, 08:06 PM.
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Star Wars; Mysteries of the force:
Zypher Fenn http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7082751/1/#new

The Songs of a distant Earth:
Vansk Dor'Lanian

Warhammer 40,000:
Vladamir Vanstir http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7088865/1/#new

Starcraft: Survival
Zin Vonsk

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You don't purchase guns like that, most weapons beyond a laspistol are illegal to non-military personnel, and military personnel are required to use what's given to them. Can you imagine a constrict in Iraq showing up with his own tank and raygun or a lightsaber? Most likely you'd just be noted as a better shot with heavier weapons, and be put on a heavy weapons team as a result. Autoguns are heavy too, but really cool.
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Ok i like what your doing and blind says your good to go so APPROVED
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I Cut away the purchase part.

I'm debating wether or not to keep the lasrifle, should I just totally replace the lasrifle with the autogun?
Edited by Zelderex, Feb 13 2009, 10:27 PM.
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Star Wars; Mysteries of the force:
Zypher Fenn http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7082751/1/#new

The Songs of a distant Earth:
Vansk Dor'Lanian

Warhammer 40,000:
Vladamir Vanstir http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7088865/1/#new

Starcraft: Survival
Zin Vonsk

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Probably not, you always need something for when the Autogun jams, runs out of ammo or you have to fall back and abandon it [heresy, but most people would prefer to live those 5 more minutes].
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K, and well, I think I'll take heresy.
[RPGData:96|4|40|40|6|6|33|18|Evil Spear|Phoenix Armor|Ranger|149|None|None|7|1|1|33|None|1|None|None] My characters

Star Wars; Mysteries of the force:
Zypher Fenn http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7082751/1/#new

The Songs of a distant Earth:
Vansk Dor'Lanian

Warhammer 40,000:
Vladamir Vanstir http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7088865/1/#new

Starcraft: Survival
Zin Vonsk

The power and the Glory;
Brendan Gilhooly
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