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[Genesis Rhapsodos] Lenges Raetors; Quincy
Topic Started: Jan 30 2009, 06:49 PM (85 Views)
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General information
Name:Lenges Raetors
Nickname/Aliases:Conrad's Vice Präsident
Name Meaning:none.
Date of Birth:12/25
Age:25
Visual age:20
Sex:Male
Origin:Born in japan but moved to and grew up in Warsaw Germany

Physical Information
Visual Appearance:Posted Image
General Appearance:Tall and slender not very muscular.light red hair with a ponytail.hair is spiked
Clothing and Armour:wears a black suit most of the time the jacket is alwasy unbuttoned and wears a pair of black goggles on his forhead.
Height:5'11
Weight:150Lbs

Quincy Information

Bow Name:HawkSpear
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Number of Arrows Per Minute:around 150

Quincy Abilites:Heizen (haizen; German for "heat") — This technique creates a transparent, rectangular beam of energy from silver tubes which slices through the opponent. It is activated by the command "Feel the wrath of battle and accept this sacred chalice - Sacred Bite!

Gritz ( gurittsu) — This technique forms a man-sized pentacle symbol which envelops its target. It is activated by the command "A silver rod strikes the five-fingered stone bed - Quintuple Restraining Frames!"

Wolke (vorukôru; German for "cloud") — This technique uses a silver tube to create a large blast. While it may not be intended for use as such, Uryû uses it to cushion the impact of a fall. It is activated by the command "Tilt the goblet to the west - Emerald Grail!"

Sprenger (supurengeru; German for "explosion") — This technique uses five Seele Schneiders to create a pentagram-shaped seal, which when activated causes a massive explosion within its borders. The Seele Schneiders function as accumulators, gathering the necessary amount of spirit particles to create the explosion. The liquid inside a silver tube acts as the trigger. The preparations for the technique combined with the charging time for the Seele Schneiders make its use in battle impractical unless the user has a partner that can stall to buy time.

Hirenkyaku ("flying screen step/god step", "flying bamboo-blind leg")

Ransôtengai ("heavenly wild puppet suit", "disheveled paradise puppet") — this is a high level technique that allows the user to control their body parts using strings of spirit energy controlled by their brain. By using this technique, the user can control their body as one would a puppet, allowing them to move freely despite paralysis, broken limbs, or any other force that would impede normal movement.

Dead Eye:Uses his spiritual pressure and energy to lock onto a target from anywhere within a 25 kilometer area and track them as long as they have some sort of reishi particals around them or coming from them.

Sniper Quincy:as a quincy Lenges isent a very fast shooter even though he is as skilled as he is,His real power is in his sniping,which is has become very good at.As such ther probaly not many that can say there accuracy is better then his own.

Long Shot:With the aid of dead eye,Lenges is able to to snipe his targets from afar.from just about any range you can think of.but to hit his target he needs his arrows to move faster then them so he sends a good amount of energy into his arrows at the zenith of there launch with allows them for a time to move five times faster then the speed of sound.

Piercing Shot:By addind an extra amount of energy to his arrows Lenges is able to shape his arrows and harden there tips so they are able to pierce just about any armor

Other information
Fighting Level:Advanced almost Master.
Fighting Style:Stays almost always at his bows max range and snipes his targets from there picking them apart.if thet start to get to close to him he makes less accuret shots but faster one as he uses Hirenkyaku to further the distance between him and his target.at the same time he sets up traps or activates one he has already set up.These traps have a 2 fold purpose.1: to slow down and distract the target to sniping it with more ease.2:if the first part fails then uses them to damage or kill the target if they are more focused on him rather then the traps he sets up for them.If said target does manage to get past the traps and barrage of arrows then Lenges will pull out an electrified baton and one of the Seele Schneiders to fight them in melee with a combo of powerfull kicks.
Items:a smal pack of Seele Schneiders and an electric baton
Personality:Lazy and laid back,prefers to let others do his work for him if he can but not if it means that they will die as a cause.for the most part this lazy and laid back personality is the reason he went with range rather then numbers with his bow skills
History:As far as he can remember Lenges could never remember his mother and never really talked with his father execpt when he took him to his business partys,it was at one of these partys that he met Conrad Friedhold who he became friends with and later in life his boss.At around the age of 14 he father reveiled that both him and his mother were Quincy's and told him he had gotten to the age where he was to be taught in the arts of a Quincy as well.At first he dident take to it very well but as time went on be became better and began developing his skill more to the point of range and accurcy rather then large and rapid numbers as other Quincy's did.
Other Notes: Whatever else you feel should be added.
Sample RP:As he walked to the Präsident's office Lenges was in his normal lazy and laid back mood as he was nost of the time.when he got to the door he looked at the sectratary and asked.'Is the Präsident in?She replyed.'No he left for a meeting in japan and he dident say when he would be back.'Sighing Lenges turned around and said to himself.'Damn dosent he tell me anything anymore?Guess i better head over to Japan and see what he is up to....'
Edited by Genesis Rhapsodos, Feb 9 2009, 01:11 PM.
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Vengance Never Dies

Post here when you're done.
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done hope it gets approved
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Lower fighting style, fix your code. More comments will come.
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ok done but what do you mean by my coding?i dont see what part of it needs to be fixed
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Half the profile is in italics :|
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fixed
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Can't wait for your character to be approved. I have a feeling that the interactions between Conrad and Lenges are going to be amusing. hope you don't mind that Lenges will probably be a victim of paper fan swats.
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lol sounds fun but im still in limbo right now lol......
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Approved, sorry for the delay
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