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| KaigenHenshi | Jan 24 2009, 06:21 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Vorta Nehelam Gender: Male Class: Warlock (Complete Arcana Handbook0 Race:Human Level:2 Alignment: Lawful Evil Deity: Mephistopheles Appearance: ![]() Description: Vorta is a tall, almost foreboding figure. His face sharp and angular, his crimson eyes watching everything within sight, taking in the passing faces and features of each city for future plots or plans. Charismatic in his appearance he wears a traveler's outfit yet he has supplemented his appearance by dying the majority of the outfit a coal black and the trim a deep blood red crimson, his long, crimson cloak trailing behind him. His black hair kept and falls to his shoulders. Personality: Vorta is a cold individual, caring naught for those who surround him. Proud to the point of arrogance he looks down upon others who would compare themselves with him, seeing others as mere pawns for him to play in his game. He is not above acting kind or just so that he might further his plots for power, more than willing to allow manipulate the minds of another so that they would steal a desired item for him to save himself the trouble of sneaking about to steal it himself. He is a collector of arcane artifacts, either good or evil he is always willing to spend his time in study of an item so that he could find yet another way to advance in power throughout the world. History: Vorta originates from a small noble house of wizards and merchants. Raised for the duration of his youth within the family house he had much time to spend studying the arcane arts, an affinity for the powers of spirits and eldritch more profound within him than any past members of the house. Soon however when he reached the age of fifteen he was ambushed by several bandits while riding his horse. Unable to defend himself with sword and shield he began the countenance of a spell he had heard one of his elder cousins speak on time. By uttering the first word of the spell he could feel the eldritch forces gather about him, however the spell did not work as he had hoped. Instead of laying waste directly to his foes he felt the powers of eldritch awaken within his being, grabbing hold of those powers he struck out with devastating force, killing the surrounding bandits with ease. Upon returning to the noble house he found himself surrounded by wizard and priest alike, the abrupt unleashing of his powers had set off many of the sensory equipment in place. As opposed to being welcomed he found himself a test subject, his powers unlike the others of his family. So he spent a grueling year as a forced lab rat, his only freedom were the books of the family study. So he studied, until at last he was able to secure a route for his escape, utilizing the many magical scrolls his family had left laying about. Left without a home to return to Vorta stole one of the family horses and fled their land, his heart filled with hate for his "family" who had treated him so wrongly. For years he traveled, in search of ways to live as well as further his studies, in personal exile from those around him. However one day in his travels through an ancient ruin he discovered a hidden chamber within the catacombs. Within was a great alter, one dedicated to the Lord of the Eighth, Mephistopheles. Even still he found tomes, tomes that promised power to those willing to accept his ways. Eager for the chance at power he made his pact upon that alter, stealing away what tomes he could. So he traveled even further throughout the lands, gathering what knowledge he could. Though through frustration he knows now that the time for study is finished and that his knowledge must be implemented for him to truly succeed. Having recently gathered a handful of warriors to his side now he walks freely through towns, having little to no fear if his identity is revealed as a warlock, one of the few following him being a young fight dedicated to Lord of the Eighth, bound to Vorta by contract of loyalty so that he would help further the warlocks agenda. Attributes STR: 15 Ability Mod: +2 DEX: 16 Ability Mod: +3 CON: 14 Ability Mod: +2 INT: 12 Ability Mod: +1 WIS: 10 Ability Mod: +0 CHA: 16 Ability Mod: +3 WOUNDS/CURRENT HP 9 HP/ 9 S.P.D./ N/A AC/ 17 Flat footed AC: 14 Touch AC: 13 Your equipped attacks ( Attack 1 Morningstar +2 atk 1d8+2 dmg Attack 2 Dagger +2 atk 1d4+2 dmg Attack 3 Eldritch Blast +4 atk 1d6 dmg Attack 4 Attack 5 (Only post the ones your character has) Skills: Primary attribute: Bluff +5 (3 ranks +3 Cha) Concentration +4 (2 ranks +2 Con) Disguise +3 (No ranks +3 Cha) Knowledge (Arcana) +3 (3 Ranks +1 Int) Knowledge (Religion) +3 (4 Ranks +1 Int) Knowledge (The Planes) +3 (2 Ranks +1 Int) Sense Motive +2 (2 Ranks) Use Magic Device +5 (2 Ranks +3 Cha) Initiative Modifier: +7 (+3 Dex +4 Improve Initiative) Saves: Fort +2, Ref +3, Will +2 Equipped armor: Chain Shirt Equipped shield: None Equipped items: Traveler's Outfit Inventory: Items on Self Backpack Chain Shirt Map w/ case Scroll case Morningstar Dagger Flint and Steel Block and Tackle Ink (1 oz Bottle) Parchment (6 Sheets) Ink pen Waterskin Soap Trail Rations (1 day) Items in Wagon w/ Horse Heavy Horse Bedroll Trail Rations (5 days) Silk Rope (50ft) Winter blanket Horse Feed (6 Days) Bit and Bridle Riding Saddle Iron Pot Fishing Net (25sq ft) Cold Weather Outfit Feats: Weapon Focus (Eldritch Blast) Improved Initiative Invocations: Devil's Sight: see normally in darkness and magical darkness. Mercs: Gru'shkala (Merc Leader) 4 sp day Race: Hobgoblin HP 12 Class: Warrior 2 Attributes STR:18 Mod: 4 DEX:14Mod: 2 CON:16 Mod 3 INT: 10 Mod: 0 WIS:8 Mod: -1 Cha:8 Mod -1 Attacks: Longsword: +4 Atk 1d8+4 dmg Javelin: +2 Atk 1d6+4 Dmg 30ft range Saves Fort: + 5 Ref: +2 Will: -1 AC: 16. (10 base +3 Studded Leather +1 Light Wooden Shield, +2 Dex) Flatfooted AC: 14 Touch AC: 12 Skills +3 Listen -1 +3 Spot -1 +3 Intimidate +4 (using str) Equipment: Longsword 3 javelins dagger wooden shield studded leather armor light horse bedroll 7 days rations 2 torches 10 gold Bit and Bridle Riding Saddle [Alright, I've got this first character done, including his hired mercenaries I drew straight from the Arms and Equipment guide. The Hobgoblin leader was advanced using proper rules including for his daily upkeep. Nearly everything was pulled from the Player's Handbook aside from Vorta's class the warlock which is from Complete Arcana pg 7. I will be creating my second character the fighter mentioned in Vorta's character history soon. For the stats I used an automated die roller, if you'd like the link I'll be happy to give it to you.] Edited by KaigenHenshi, Feb 19 2009, 01:05 PM.
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Heroic Genesis Jackie Estacado Bleach: Dark Revenant Dyo Kagoshima- Halibel's Fraccion Ganryu Kuchiki- Leader of the Dark Ones Bleach: Dawn to Dusk Dyo Kagoshima- la Primera Espada Kaigen Henshi- Eighth Division Lieutenant Eragon: The Rise of Darkness Xael Lilthanon/Namias- Elf Elder Dragon Rider Bleach: Apocalypse Aizen Sosuke Inuyasha: The Feudal Era Sesshomaru | |
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| Belial | Jan 26 2009, 11:58 AM Post #2 |
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Ok to start off with that is an awesome profile but their are a few things about it, Like where did you get all the money for this I didn't think A Warlock got all that much money? and I doubt you'd have a wagon, and a dog hanging around justt starting off, maybe later Also you gain another 2 hp for your con modifier and I do something different for the Mercs, first of all being that you can either chose to pay them 1 platinum (10 gold) per month or allow them a share in your treasure you find, Remember though that when going to town you do have to spend money to train in knew skills and feats, unless you have some one who can train you. And the final being is though you can chose his race and class, I generate most of the other stuff. Also you need to describe your eldrich blast, what it looks like and that kinda mess, and where did you get your powers from, be it demon or fey. I actually have a formula as to how to generate stats. you have 82 points to spend. you went over it by one but Im not to worried about it your stats seem fairly manageable, their aren't like 6 18s ever where. Anyways great profile and thank you for actually reading the rules, or bsing it enough to make it look like you did, so that you could make a character. Edited by Belial, Jan 26 2009, 01:02 PM.
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| Belial | Jan 26 2009, 12:37 PM Post #3 |
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1stly I am awarding you 2nd lv now for your little band of warriors, for the time being they are mostly fighter adepts, you probably only have a 3 of them plus your Hobgoblin here, as your only lv2 you dont actually lead them, their merely gathering around you because of your presence, your first quest will be to prove to them you are worthy to lead them, (I've got it planed already, mostly) Your Hobgoblin will be a lv one ranger or fighter probably. ill fix him up for ya, some of the rules in the manual I never really liked much. That should help increase your chances of survival. And I already have that sight but thank yas. Edited by Belial, Jan 26 2009, 01:04 PM.
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The Creed is secret and their fore it must stay secret do you want to know what the secret is then reed the spoiler O.O Spoiler: click to toggle CLICKS IT NOW!!!! ![]() | |
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| KaigenHenshi | Jan 26 2009, 09:24 PM Post #4 |
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I actually wasn't sure about starting gold for you if you were going to go with the standard 500gp start from the DM manual or the PHB starting gold, so I went with the safe side of more cash and then figuring out how or where it should be toned down. As for the mercs and their cash requirements like I said I got it from the Arms and Equipment Guide. It has a base formula for levels, merc races and their required pay. If you want me to go with your rules then its cool. As for Vorta's originated powers I'd probably reveal something further down the lines of demonic but I haven't decided. I can always fix that if you want. Edited by KaigenHenshi, Jan 26 2009, 09:25 PM.
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Heroic Genesis Jackie Estacado Bleach: Dark Revenant Dyo Kagoshima- Halibel's Fraccion Ganryu Kuchiki- Leader of the Dark Ones Bleach: Dawn to Dusk Dyo Kagoshima- la Primera Espada Kaigen Henshi- Eighth Division Lieutenant Eragon: The Rise of Darkness Xael Lilthanon/Namias- Elf Elder Dragon Rider Bleach: Apocalypse Aizen Sosuke Inuyasha: The Feudal Era Sesshomaru | |
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| Belial | Jan 27 2009, 03:06 AM Post #5 |
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no problem Like I said most of this looks Manageable so Im going ahead and Approving it, but I didn't like the wagon and dog, so i got rid of it. I was going to go with what was in the PHB for money but Ill allow what inventory you have plus 62 gold. And like I said go ahead and put your character at lv 2 |
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| KaigenHenshi | Jan 28 2009, 12:46 AM Post #6 |
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Sure thing. I'll get to it in a few. |
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Heroic Genesis Jackie Estacado Bleach: Dark Revenant Dyo Kagoshima- Halibel's Fraccion Ganryu Kuchiki- Leader of the Dark Ones Bleach: Dawn to Dusk Dyo Kagoshima- la Primera Espada Kaigen Henshi- Eighth Division Lieutenant Eragon: The Rise of Darkness Xael Lilthanon/Namias- Elf Elder Dragon Rider Bleach: Apocalypse Aizen Sosuke Inuyasha: The Feudal Era Sesshomaru | |
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| KaigenHenshi | Jan 28 2009, 11:52 PM Post #7 |
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>_> Well that's about enough to piss me off. I've lost the pdf file for the warlock class. |
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| Belial | Jan 30 2009, 10:37 PM Post #8 |
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wow that sucks dude. |
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The Creed is secret and their fore it must stay secret do you want to know what the secret is then reed the spoiler O.O Spoiler: click to toggle CLICKS IT NOW!!!! ![]() | |
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| KaigenHenshi | Feb 2 2009, 02:42 AM Post #9 |
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Yes indeed. >_> And the other pdf I tried DL'ing was a broken file. No luck for me. |
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Heroic Genesis Jackie Estacado Bleach: Dark Revenant Dyo Kagoshima- Halibel's Fraccion Ganryu Kuchiki- Leader of the Dark Ones Bleach: Dawn to Dusk Dyo Kagoshima- la Primera Espada Kaigen Henshi- Eighth Division Lieutenant Eragon: The Rise of Darkness Xael Lilthanon/Namias- Elf Elder Dragon Rider Bleach: Apocalypse Aizen Sosuke Inuyasha: The Feudal Era Sesshomaru | |
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| KaigenHenshi | Feb 19 2009, 01:03 PM Post #10 |
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Aight I found my stuff. Any idea when we're gonna get this RP up and running? |
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Heroic Genesis Jackie Estacado Bleach: Dark Revenant Dyo Kagoshima- Halibel's Fraccion Ganryu Kuchiki- Leader of the Dark Ones Bleach: Dawn to Dusk Dyo Kagoshima- la Primera Espada Kaigen Henshi- Eighth Division Lieutenant Eragon: The Rise of Darkness Xael Lilthanon/Namias- Elf Elder Dragon Rider Bleach: Apocalypse Aizen Sosuke Inuyasha: The Feudal Era Sesshomaru | |
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