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| J-Rose | Jan 24 2009, 11:37 AM Post #1 |
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Caribbean Fiend... Bobs evil twin
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Character Sheet: Name: Usani Mecha Age: Looks: 18 Gender: Male Race: Twi'lek Alignment: Darkside Force Sensitive: Yes Rank: (Determined by your experience points) Portrait: (Optional: add an image of your character here) Appearance: Has all pale, white, skin, with red lines along his Tentacles (When I say Pale, I meen Ulquiorra pale) . Has a red outlining his eyes and red iris's, but the pupil is an aura like black. Has some muscle on him, but is more to the slender side, has like a six-pack with a red outline to it. Has a very handsome face, almost like a human face like anakin's but with twilek features. Is rather short for his race, stands at 5'10. While his tails go down to his lower back. Armour/Clothes: Wears baggy black, gi training pants like goku. Has a black tabard with out the top part, but goes down to shin's in the front, and calf muscles in the back. Wear's and open, black, dark jedi robe. He also wears black socks that go to his knee's but are covered by his pants, and also has padding on the bottom of the socks, which makes them extra comfortable shoes. History: Doesn't have much of a known history. Used to do small time jobs for the sith in the outer rim planets. From them he picked up a few pointers like how to control your emotions, and how to use your force. When one day he was under attack during a mission assigned to him by a sith acolyte along the Telosion run. He was under attack by the rebels of another outer rim planet. He was going down into the fields of a small back water planet that was so small it could barely be considered a planet. He crashed landed on the planet with barely any consciousness, he saw a group of black booted people with orange overalls coming at him. He kept his eyes open as much as he could, he then closed his eyes. The trampling and pounding of boots from with in his ship was interrupted by a loud, laser like swish, afew zings, that were quickly drowned out by the bone shaking screams and yells of the dying men. After the chaos Usani could hear an evil laughter and a whisper in his ear. "I guess you are quite the survivor, normally that would have killed the average person." It was a seductive voice, a lady, maybe in her 20's? Usani smiled and said. "Hard to say... Help me..." in a hurting voice. [TIME SKIP] 2 hours later he woke up in the middle of a circle with a dark shrouded figure looming over him. The figure said in the same voice he heard earlier. "Rise... You well learn ways to protect your self from such things like crashes and such... I also sense a darkness with in you, yet your like a hollow of emotions, emotionless as a hollow body... Yet you still have a calmness to you." He finished this by forcing him to rise by choking him with the force. "Aaahhh." He yelled in pain as he felt his throat narrow and crush, as such he was cut off in the middle of a breath which caused him even more pain and also some pain in his chest. She then let him down from the choke. He landed on his knees and said. "Ofcourse master." in a raspy voice from the choking pain that still thrived with in his neck throat and chest. He then arose to a standing position. "So when do we begin?" He asked while still knowing he might die here. She smirked and said. "At once." In a seductively calm voice as she force pushed him across the chamber they were in. He felt his chest throbbing with pain from the regeneration of the choke, but on top of that, this blow made it much worse. He then noticed he wasn't wearing his normal attire of a tank top, some baggy pants, and some boots. He looked around for his vibroblade, but couldn't find it. "Oh man." He said in a worried voice. "This is just the beginning young one." The lady said with a smirk as she began walking toward him with a lightsaber, she turned the lightsaber on and threw it at him, he gazed at it, in all its radiant, red embracing glory. He ducked and it stuck to the wall that he hit after the push. He then grabbed it only to be meet by another force push. He held on to it and put it up in a defensive stance that he used when he got into close combat with a melee user while using his long vibro blade. The lady smiled and said. "Ok lets do this." In her evil and seductive voice. She used her telekinesis to get her lightsaber into her hand. She flashed it on and he noticed that hers had a more radiant bea then his. He didn't mind, but later on noticed the difference. He tried his hardest to strike her, but only managed to tire himself and graze her clothing. "Ok thats enough, i dont want you killing yourself over mere training, but you have proven to be quite adept at using the lightsaber, I need you to kill a few republic troops on the mid rim and come back with there helmets. Understood?" She asked in a seductive voice as she brought him closer with force choke and punched him playfully in the stomach. "Ofcourse madam." He answered in a hurting voice. "Now go." She said with a smirk as she pushed him again with force push out the door. He is currently trying to decide where to go in the mid rim. Personality: He has a very passive personality, very passive as in, most of the fights aren't picked by him, and when they are it is because of some emotional trigger in him such as anger, love, or passion. He doesn't like jedi at all, thats why he only works with the sith because to him the jedi want the force all to themselves, and he is not about to let a weak minded fool take the force away from him. He is very seductive and nasty when it comes to women, he is passive still passive with it though. Attributes Strength: 2 Intelligence: 2 Dexterity: 3 Charisma: 1 Constitution: 2 Abilities & Force Powers: Force Sensitive - The user has the ability to manipulate the force, some people are force sensative and dont even realise it as they could be incredibly lucky or have sort of 6th sense about danger, these are early signs of Force Sensitivity. (Force Sensitive Characters start with this ability) Weapon Skill: Melee – This ability lets you use all the most common & if you can find them some exotic weapons ie: Blunt Weapons, Vibro weapons, & Lightsaber's. Lightsaber Defence – The Force user can defend against another close combat weapon, ie: another lightsaber (Requires – Weapon Skill: Melee). Force Defence – The Force user the power of the force to avoid serious injury in combat, only a calm and open mind can channel this power. Alignment: Neutral Pilot – Use this ability to operate a vehicle, whether it preforms in land, sea, air, or space. Strong Will – This ability is used primarily as a resistance to Jedi/Sith, with a strong will this will allow the owner of this ability to resist mind control and force enhanced suggestions. Credits, Equipment, & Transport: Credits: 500 Equipment: not sure Transport: not sure Experience points 100 Force Alliance points Dark: +2 Edited by J-Rose, Jan 30 2009, 05:35 PM.
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| J-Rose | Jan 30 2009, 01:46 PM Post #2 |
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[ The temptation to leave this Ludicrous world behind is growing stronger... Although there are few of us who are able to break the chains binding us to this horrible reality... The are others who are weak-minded fools who let those same chains seal their fate to the world of reality. May your imagination break you away from the mind torturing and mind numbing Status-Quo known as reality. | |
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| RedBldSandman | Jan 30 2009, 02:07 PM Post #3 |
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Ohhhhh YEAH!
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Jarose... 1.Your history - makes you out to be too skilled in lightsaber combat and the use of the force! He's too powerful for just being an Academy Student level which is the point at which all force users start. Also, he doesn't even have the skills for lightsaber combat or some other force powers that you used! 2. Your skills aren't done properly. You've got to use the list which can be found in the main SW forum and not make up your own as you seem to have done. 3. Weapons, craft etc. are dispensed by the mods and not by you and you've also calculated your Credits wrongly, it should be 500 Credits with that Charisma. 4. We'd all prefer it if you took out references to other characters from mangas or from the future in your descriptions of your character since this is only the Star Wars universe! 5. You've got to add in your rank. This can be found in another thread on the main page of the SW forum. 6. A bit more is needed on your description all together. More on his personality especially if possible. 7. You can't be 2 Dark and 1 Light on your force Alliance Points. Its either Dark or Light, not both. Quite a bit to change since the history needs to be completely redone basically Sorry about that, but it does say in the rules that everyone starts out at the bottom!
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| J-Rose | Jan 30 2009, 05:36 PM Post #4 |
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[ The temptation to leave this Ludicrous world behind is growing stronger... Although there are few of us who are able to break the chains binding us to this horrible reality... The are others who are weak-minded fools who let those same chains seal their fate to the world of reality. May your imagination break you away from the mind torturing and mind numbing Status-Quo known as reality. | |
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| J-Rose | Feb 6 2009, 05:43 PM Post #5 |
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[ The temptation to leave this Ludicrous world behind is growing stronger... Although there are few of us who are able to break the chains binding us to this horrible reality... The are others who are weak-minded fools who let those same chains seal their fate to the world of reality. May your imagination break you away from the mind torturing and mind numbing Status-Quo known as reality. | |
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| Silber rache | Feb 7 2009, 03:40 PM Post #6 |
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Scotlands number 1
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your rank will be student, seeing as you are a Sith, you will start as an apparentice. At the end of the day, it is red that is looking into this one, if red doesn't get into gear and start reading then I will have a word, but continuously posting in the thread shall not change matters, so I must ask you both don't spam the thread as well as spamming our inbox's with requests. I shall have a word with Red and get him to come and check this out |
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| Miyamoto Musashi | Feb 17 2009, 02:24 PM Post #7 |
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The Modern Day Kensei and Keeper of the old ways
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K Ill get ya started in a bit so sit tight and we will have ya roastin Jedi in no time |
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Sorry about that, but it does say in the rules that everyone starts out at the bottom!








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