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| Silber rache | Jan 17 2009, 03:49 PM Post #1 |
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there was a low hum from the hyperdrive generators as the freighter made its way through hyperspace towards the planet of Naboo. The young Jedi Master, accompanied by his two students where on their way to complete one final training lessons and so the students could be introduced to the Jedi Knights who will train them through their path being Knights, he smiled and turned towards the pair. "are you ready?!" |
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| Revan46 | Jan 17 2009, 04:12 PM Post #2 |
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Kai sat his legs folded under him, concentrating on the Force once more, to better tune himself to the amount of Force in nearby planets. It was difficult as he was still learning to use the Force, so feeling the Force outside of even the ship was difficult. He could feel the small dim of his fellow Youngling's presence, as well as the brilliant light of his Master that he was learning from. Kai couldn't help but wonder which planet they were heading to until he realized that the planet ahead was Naboo. He had heard of the planet before, it was a lush planet with a palace as well as large swamps. He had also heard that there was tension between the Naboo and the native Gungans whom lived in the swamps. He sighed then looked at his Master. "Why are we at Naboo, Master?" Kai asked. |
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| eagle0100 | Jan 17 2009, 05:25 PM Post #3 |
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Vrei sat as well, but was having some significant difficulty's focusing on the force, and attuning to things outside the ship. He was able to sense multiple species of creatures, and some specifics, but couldn't sense anything beyond that. Inside the ship was a little easier, as he felt the Master focusing on the ship, and Kai relaxing. He was puzzling over their destination when he heard Kai's words. Vrei realized that they are heading toward Naboo, Vrei's home planet, which he had some memories of and could get around his old neighborhood. "I'm not sure if I am as ready as I possibly can be for whatever lay's ahead of us, but I will do my best for whatever does." Vrei say's is response to the Masters question. |
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| Silber rache | Jan 18 2009, 05:47 PM Post #4 |
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As soon as Kai had finished asking his question the world around him seemed to be drawn inwards into himself, before him he could see a woman with utter beauty, a sight truly to behold, her eyes blue, but with a darkness round them, as if she was wearing some kind of make up. She stood over a body, a jedi knight by the feelings Kai had surging through his stomach as he looked over them. Then for a moment it felt like it was he, standing over the downed Jedi, a red lightsaber in his hand. "It is you that drew this path, you formed it when you betrayed me... When you betrayed the council, the order... The balance!" he felt himself say, though he didn't know why he was saying it. Then it was over, as if nothing had happened, he found himself sitting in the room once more, seeing the master talking to Vrei "You should be sure, you have came on a long way since we first began working together, you will be ready, even if you are not now, you must have faith in yourself, and in the force that it will guide you along the path that is most right for you!" |
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| eagle0100 | Jan 18 2009, 06:10 PM Post #5 |
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Vrei was very thankful for the confidence of his master."Thanks. I still feel as if I have much to improve on, but if you feel that I will do well, and the force will help guide me, then I'm sure I will do fine" Vrei said. He feels something odd, but thinks nothing of it, as he is a little nervous. Responding to that nervousness, Vrei uses some of the meditation techniques he learned.
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| Revan46 | Jan 19 2009, 01:24 PM Post #6 |
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Kai felt the world around him being pulled inwards and disappearing. In it's place Kai saw a beautiful woman holding a red lightsaber, indicating she was a Sith. In an instant however, Kai was in place of the woman. His montrals and head-tails a much darker colour, while in his hand was a red lightsaber growing blood red. Below him at the foot of his feet was a dead body, with what in his gut said was a Jedi Knight. He didn't understand what was happening, nor why he was all of a sudden holding a lightsaber of the Sith. "It is you that drew this path, you formed it when you betrayed me... When you betrayed the council, the order... The balance!" He heard his mouth say. Then, before he knew it, the image around him returned to that of the ship. Kai hunched over, placing his hand on the ground, his head-tails hanging down. The image had taken such a toll on his body, especially being so young. Concentrate Kai, it was just an image...an image of the possible future, but there is no guarantee it will come true. Regain your composure..[/b] Kai muttered then leaned back once more, trying to regain the calmness he had felt before. Edited by Revan46, Jan 19 2009, 01:25 PM.
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| Silber rache | Jan 24 2009, 11:14 AM Post #7 |
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The masters eyes turned to Kai for a moment, interested in the feeling that he was getting through force, the echoes the force had been sending his way, but first he continued to speak with Vrei "when the time comes, you will be ready, I have shown you all that I can to aid you in becoming ready to become a padawan, there is little more I can teach you without you becoming my apprentice young one!" His eyes then turned to Kai "Is there anything wrong Kai? anything that I can aid you in?!" |
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| Revan46 | Jan 25 2009, 10:34 PM Post #8 |
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Kai grimaced, then regained his composure. "N-no Master...just something I thought I saw...I think I should be okay." Kai responded. Kai couldn't understand what had happened and what he saw. What did it mean when his own self replaced that woman holding the red lightsaber. Did it mean he would turn to the Dark Side, or was it possible it may have just been a potential future. He had heard of seeing the future among a select few Jedi, but he didn't realize it would be this intense. It was took almost all his effort to prevent his emotions from overwhelming him. He knew he would need to tell the Master eventually, but he also did not wish the Master to see him losing grip of emotions. He calmed himself then recited the Code in his head. There is no emotion, there is peace. There is no ignorance, there is knowledge.There is no passion, there is serenity. There is no chaos, there is harmony. There is no death, there is the Force. As he recited it in his mind, he felt his mind and body ease and relax. He could once more hear and see the Force clearly, whereas before it had become distorted from the trouble his mind had been feeling. He took a deep breath and then went quiet once more. Edited by Revan46, Jan 25 2009, 10:35 PM.
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| eagle0100 | Jan 28 2009, 06:23 PM Post #9 |
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"mm so I did sense something. Hey I'm just curious do I have some time to practice what i learned, or will we be at naboo soon." Vrei said, a little happy that he feels ready, and still boosted from the master's confidence |
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| Silber rache | Jan 29 2009, 03:05 PM Post #10 |
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As Vrei spoke he was drawn into a vision of his own, he saw a man hung and held tight into would seemed to be a torture rack, a woman, her face covered in scars and tattoos, a grin held firm on her face as she looked at him before injecting something into his body. "That will make you slightly more willing to listen to what I have to say... BOY!" Vrei wouldn't be able to tell whom either of them where, the man looked like he may be of his own people, of his own race but he didn't recognize him. As for Kei, the master turned his head to look at him, and seemed to look sad for a moment. "There is a saying, young one, make light your burden. I am here to listen, if you have anything to talk about, I may only temporarily be your master, but I will always be here as a friend if there is something bothering you." He never mentioned that he could feel the difference in Kai's mind, the change in the force had been quite drastic. |
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| Revan46 | Jan 29 2009, 05:03 PM Post #11 |
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Kai nodded then focused his mind. He did not wish Vrei to hear what he was going to tell the Master. I saw a woman, utterly beautiful, with piercing blue eyes except there was a darkness about them, almost as if she was wearing make-up. The woman was standing over a Jedi Knight holding a red lightsaber, she was obviously a Sith. However, a split second later...I was in the position of the woman. I was the one holding the lightsaber and standing over the Jedi Knight, and I was speaking words 'It is you that drew this path, you formed it when you betrayed me... When you betrayed the council, the order... The balance!' What could it mean though Master? Does it mean I might become a Sith in the future? I don't want to let that happen... Kai explained through private thought directed to the Master. There was obviously distress etched on his face due to his concern. |
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| eagle0100 | Jan 30 2009, 04:31 PM Post #12 |
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Vrei looked a little shocked at what he just saw, and is silent for a moment, pulling back his senses from the force. "Something is going on here, I get this vision, right after a something disturbed Kai... Hmm..., Vrei thought to himself. "Is everything alright Kai, you look a little distressed", Vrei said. |
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| Silber rache | Feb 2 2009, 10:14 AM Post #13 |
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He reached out towards Kai's mind and began to speak with him "That does sound troublesome young one, it possibly could be a vision of the future, not your own, but that of someone elses. You are obviously not the woman, she was definitely a sith, which is troublesome for the future." He sighed, and turned to look at Vrei, still connected to Kai's mind. "But I shall meditate on it, and try and see if I can come to the bottom of it, clear it, I would suggest you do the same.!" He then reached towards Vrei in the force. "You seem troubled as well young one, is there any aid I can give you?!" |
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| Revan46 | Feb 2 2009, 10:47 AM Post #14 |
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Kai nodded, but thought to himself. I realize the woman was a Sith, but the woman's body changed into my own, I could clearly see my own lekku darkened as a result. If that wasn't me then why would it be a Twi'lek like myself, turned to the dark side... Kai couldn't help but feel tense due to this odd vision. He also realized he hadn't closed off his mind when thinking, so all he could do was look to the Master and to Vrei and wonder if both had heard him. When looking at Vrei he noticed the boy himself was very tense, and he could hear the boys thoughts practically blaring in his mind. The boy had witnessed a vision too, not the same type as his own, but still a vision none the less. He hoped that Vrei was okay, but attempted to return to a meditative state to focus his mind once more. Perhaps if he exuded calmness, it would in turn help Vrei. |
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| eagle0100 | Feb 2 2009, 01:22 PM Post #15 |
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"Yes Master something is bothering me. I just had some kind of experience that I cant describe... It felt like I was somewhere were I wasn't or havn't been... has this happened before" Vrei Had mentioned to the master through the force, while trying to meditate while relaxing himself, pretty sure that everyone can see that he is tense because of what he saw. |
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