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[kin] Kinochimaru; Village Leader/Kusagakure
Topic Started: Jan 17 2009, 01:47 PM (417 Views)
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General Information
Name: Kinochimaru
Alias: Kin
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Country of Origin and Village: Konohagakure
Current Residence: Kusagakure
History: Kin’s mother died giving him childbirth. Kin’s father is rumored to be Orochimaru. It’s also rumored Orochimaru wasn’t aware of it until he met him and he immediately offered Kin the Sound Daimyo position when he came to know about it. Kin, however, refused to be involved with his father’s aims. The rumors are also supported by the fact that Kin has a natural affinity with snakes, seeing how he could summon the highest level of serpents at a young age. Kin was raised by the barkeeper, and therefore he knows a lot about good alcohol.

Kin was always naturally talented, and surprised everyone with his perfect transformation at a young age. He graduated from the academy at the age of eight, which was fairly advanced. As a genin, he trained hard everyday with his sensei. HIs sensei died on a mission, after which he became very quiet and lost interest in training. He passed the chunin exam a few years after making genin. He was the only one to pass it that year, and the kage was impressed with his talent. In his days as a chunin he surprised everyone with his capability of leading a team under times of trouble. He was still very lazy and due to this his promotion to jounin was delayed by a year. Finally, he was promoted, and that was the day he drank lots of wine to celebrate the occassion. He dropped and became unconcious. He was robbed out of all the money he carried that day. Ever since this, he’s been short of money and has recieved bribes, and assassination demands from rival villages and robe organizations. No one knows if he has taken any bribes till date. On one fine day, Kin decided to leave Konoha, and make a life for himself as a Rogue ninja. He knew he would never be Hokage, since most people knew he was Orochimaru’s son, and thought he would ruin the village if he ever rose to that position. Kin left, undetected, and went to the grass village. Why he went to the grass village, no one knows, one can only guess. Once he reached the hidden grass village, he took over. No one knows the specific details of how he did it, and no one knows his true intentions of taking over.

Rank: Village Leader
Faction: Kusagakure
Team: None
Chakra Affinity/Specialty: Earth element, Serpent Arts

Characteristics
Visual Appearance:
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Physical Appearance: The character's complexion is fair, he always smiles, and his eyes are almost always closed, making him resemble a fox in some sort of a way. When he is annoyed or angry, his eyes can be clearly seen, they are red.

Clothing and Armor: Typical robes of royalty, wearing a long white coat on the outside, and black on the inside. No armor of any kind.

Personality: Kin likes to stay out of trouble for the most part. He won’t interfere in anything unless it looks like his comrade might die. He may like to stay out of trouble, but when a comrade’s life is in question he doesn’t hesitate to put his life on the line. Kin is not hardworking at all, man wonder how he made jounin at such a young age despite his laziness. He enjoys female companionship, and is an alcoholic. He is quiet when among men for the most part, and talks very less. Few people know what’s going on his mind.

Weapons
Doesn’t hold/keep any weapons.

Kekkei Genkai
None

Jutsus

Serpent Arts

Name: Art of the Hidden Snakes
Rank: D
Range: Melee
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: None
Description: Kin has long sleeves which are perfect for concealing moving snakes. Toshi can unleash up to 4 snakes, any combination of cobras and vipers for a simple biting attack. This jutsu allows quick and agile directing of snakes to extend Kin's taijutsu range. Also this can be used as a prepatory jutsu for other techniques requiring use of Kin's snakes.

Name: Snake Clone Diversion
Rank: D
Range: Melee
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Description: If a close range taijutsu or ninjutsu attack hits Kin while he has the required hand sign activated, the body will dissolve into a ton of snakes who will proceed to counter attack enemies nearby. Kin will appear somewhere near there, usually behind his opponent, and thus this acts as a sort of substitution jutsu, but Kin must see the attack coming. Only fighting similarly ranked opponents can Kin possibly pull this jutsu off under ambush conditions.


Name: Cobra Venom Spit
Rank: C
Range: 0-50 meters
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: None
Description: Kin calls a snake to his mouth and mixes chakra and his saliva to create and acidic attack. This fires a single bolt or stream of acid which can blind a person should it hit their face or burn any armor or other part of the body it falls on. Streams cost more chakra than a single discharge, but can also be fired from a cobra hidden in his sleeves.

Name: Paralyzing Bite
Rank: C
Range: Melee
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: None
Description: Kin or one of his serpents can perform this jutsu. If either Kin or his serpents bites an enemy, they can direct the effect to their chakra, muscle, or nervous system. The effect is a complete shutdown of one of those systems, and the target is affected partially by where the bite is and what kind of chakra is inserted. This means a small amount of preparation time is necessary.

Name: Chakra Siphon
Rank: C
Range: Range of viper attacks
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Description: Kin can direct one of his vipers to bite onto a person on hold there to the point of death. While doing this, Kin will suck chakra out of a person's system and into hit own. However he cannot inject any poison or venom while siphoning the chakra. Fortunately, the viper will be destroyed first if somehow an enemy can still use the siphoned off chakra to cause some sort of damage, warning Kin in time to break of the link.

Name: Twin Snake Ambush
Rank: C
Range: Anywhere within visual
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Clan: none
Description: Kini will place both hands into the ground and summon snakes from underneath a person. They appear in pairs and can do a variety of things. They can bite the ankles and inject paralyzing poison, they can slither up and bind their legs and go for a fatal strike for the neck, etc. Naturally the more demanding the target ont eh body, the longer it takes and increasing chance of escape.

Name: Serpent Dance Manipulation
Rank: B
Range: Visual
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, offensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Description:
This is yet another of the illusionary serpent arts. A gold or silver cobra will emerge from Kin's mouth and begin a special dance like the blue or red cobra for the Entrancing Snake Dance. Once this is done, Kin will put a target equal to or lower than his strength under a deep sleep. This jutsu can put multiple people to sleep, as long as it's in a 10 meter radius. The technique will take a few minutes to take full effect, so the victim will have a short period of time to come up with a resistance technique.

Name: Cobra Clone
Rank: B
Range: melee
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Description:
Kin can create a versatile clone to help him handle harder opponents or larger numbers. Kin will sacrifice a certain amount of chakra to summon very special self healing snakes. These snakes will combine together and form a physical replication of Kin. This clone is good for Taijutsu and any of Kin's Serpent arts. If cut the snakes will disperse and recombine themselves. This clone can be destroyed by a high end attack, or some type of energy based jutsu.

Name: Great Serpent Forest
Rank: B
Range: 0-10 meters from self
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu , offensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Description:
This jutsu requires a mediocre amount of chakra for something of its rank. Kin will issue snakes forth from his mouth and sleeves and drive them into the ground. All around him cobras and vipers will emerge and bite at, spit acid, or attack anyone close enough. Each emerging serpent will have a 3 meter raidus for physical strikes, and a 15 meter radius for spitting venom. Kin can hold this for 3 posts, but is unable to move.



Name: Scalar Limbs
Rank: A
Range: Self
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Description:
A defensive technique. Kin can turn the outer skin of his body into hardened scales if he can anticipate an oncoming attack. The jutsu works by skinning one of his own cobras and hardening it with chakra to create a defensive layer rather quickly. However these scales can splinter and remain hard even after falling off, making it an offensive technique as well.

Name: Blade Serpent Golem
Rank: A
Range: 0-10 meters
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu type offensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Description:
Kin will emit dozen of snakes through openings in his clothing, and cause them to open their mouth and wield a single sword. Up to 20 snakes can do this, and the combination of sword and snake length allows the to attack up to 10 meters from Kin, making this a truly deadly combo attack. This can also be used with a minimum of two snakes for less chakra costs in which case, it's barely a C rank.

Name: Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, offensive
Elemental Affinity: n/a
Clan: n/a
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Kage Bunshin jutsu to create an offensive clone. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but with the formation of a simple release seal the user can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion. This technique is usually used to attack at a charging opponent, meant to exploit an opening before the opponent is aware.

Name: Doton: Tengen - Heaven's Rebuke
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, offensive
Elemental Affinity: Earth
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The shinobi will provide blood and slam their hand into the ground channeling chakra directly into the earth. The combination of blood and the massive amount chakra allows the user to form a massive stone hand that erupts from the ground. The movements and will of the user that summoned it can then control this hand.

Name: Doton: Bakutsu Shoha - Exploding Earth Shockwave
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu, offensive
Elemental Affinity: Earth
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth element. The user will form a string of hand seals and then slam their fists into the ground, releasing immense energy directly into the ground. This force causes the ground to shake and heave, cracking in some places as if rocked by an earthquake.

Name: Hiaburi - Burn to Death
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, offensive
Elemental Affinity: n/a
Description: An advanced Genjutsu technique that forces the victim to see themselves ignite on fire, and then burn to death until all of their skin, muscle, flesh and organs are burned away and nothing is left but a skeleton. The jutsu takes only minutes to take full effect, but in the time that they are burning they have the chance to either cancel out the Genjutsu or get knocked awake. If they don't manage to release themselves from the Genjutsu before they only see themselves as bones, then they'll be forced to sit there for 24 hours, laying limp, doing nothing but staring. They wont be able to move or breath, just sit there, lifeless, in agonizing pain, for 24 hours as they stare off into nothing.

Name: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu - Camouflage Concealment Technique
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Jutsu type: Stealth

Meisai Gakure no Jutsu is one of the secret Grass Village's techniques. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja camouflages himself with his sorroundings, basically making himself invisible and difficult to detect. This can only work if there's greenery around you (bushes, forests etc.). The only way one can detect the Ninja's presence is through the Sharingan or the Byakugan eye or similar chakra sensing kekkei genkai. If the ninja tries to attack while this is in use or he tries to move a lot he gives away his position.
Edited by kin, Mar 1 2009, 12:29 PM.
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Can't edit my post, there's just 1 thing I gotta edit - the specialty is summoning a snake type and using combinations with it, not senjutsu
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Negro please.

You should be able to edit your post fine, what message comes up when you try? Secondly, your character can't take such a high position as Daimyo and have jutsu like that. The village leader of the Grass village could have power, but there are only five Kages and Daimyos are politicians not super ninja.
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oh i found it

well I am the government of the village, just like pein is the government of the rain village
Edited by kin, Jan 17 2009, 05:17 PM.
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Negro please.

As if Pein is a normal situation? No, if you want to be a Daimyo, you can't have any jutsu. Daimyo aren't super ninja. You can be a village leader. And what's this talk about you founding the village? The Village Hidden in the Grass has been around already, some 19 year old couldn't have found it.
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Pein's strength/abilities are not normal, but the concept of being both leader/daimyo is, mainly because they are minor nations and easier to control then something huge like the fire country. the village hidden in the grass was not really talked about in the anime/manga or your storyline, so we don't really know how long it's been around. also im pretty sure the manga/anime said those minor nations didn't really have hidden villages, which is why i said i found it. Anyways, edited.
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Negro please.

Yes, but leader/Daimyos are never powerful ninja! They're politicians. Village leaders or Kages are ninja. I never said you had to be a Kage, there's no such thing as a Grass Kage, Kages are just the village leaders of the five powerful villages, you'd just be Village Leader so stick that into Rank.
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done
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Negro please.

I edited it a little, if he's the Village Leader of Kusagakure, his faction is obviously Kusagakure, I mean he controls it. :p


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Name: Serpent Dance Manipulation
Rank: B
Range: Visual
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, offensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Description:
This is yet another of the illusionary serpent arts. A gold or silver cobra will emerge from Kin's mouth and begin a special dance like the blue or red cobra for the Entrancing Snake Dance. Once this is done, Kin will put a target equal to or above his strength under a deep sleep. However if he traps a person of lower level than him, he will temporarily control their actions for two posts. He will not have any ability to cause the person to cast jutsu, but the pawn can be a very effective way to stop any other teammates. This can work on multiple people, though keeping more than one person in thrall will prevent Kin form moving. (So just for recap, he controls their physical motions, not their entire chakra network so he cannot make them cast jutsu.)


Still too powerful, you don't control chakra but you could just make them stab themselves, and you can instantly put anyone you want stronger than you to sleep?
Weaken it.

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Name: Lifeless Regeneration Technique
Rank: A
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu - Fuuinjutsu, offensive
Elemental Affinity: -
Description: The Lifeless Regeneration Technique reuiqres a series of hand seals and a small amount of blood on the hands drawn before the hand seals are performed. Kin will then slam his hands into the ground, a small seal will form on the ground and all lifeless creatures within a twenty meter radius, [some parts of the radius may be exluded upon Kin's will] will come back to life for a limited period of time, around half an hour, usually. They are not as strong as they were when they were living and have the mobility and strength of the average, normal Human, Ninja or not.

Nah, take this out, too powerful. You can just instantly bring all your dead snakes back to life? Let alone humans, I wouldn't allow that as it is.
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Name: Serpent Dance Manipulation
Rank: B
Range: Visual
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, offensive
Elemental Affinity: none
Description:
This is yet another of the illusionary serpent arts. A gold or silver cobra will emerge from Kin's mouth and begin a special dance like the blue or red cobra for the Entrancing Snake Dance. Once this is done, Kin will put a target equal to or lower than his strength under a deep sleep. This jutsu can put multiple people to sleep, as long as it's in a 10 meter radius. The technique will take a few minutes to take full effect, so the victim will have a short period of time to come up with a resistance technique.


that's the new version, and i took out the other technique
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Negro please.

Perfect. Now, Grass Village doesn't have many ninja yet, so if you know any good Naruto fans or other Naruto forums, you may want to try to recruit some possible players that could be Grass ninja. For now maybe you could explore the world of Naruto and have fun. :D

Approved, keep in mind guys and gals, you may have three characters in total this does not mean you absolutely have to have three but that it is the maximum of what you can have. However, you can only have one major canon character tops, so if you already took one major canon character your next character has to be an original or a minor canon character. I'll be the judge of what canons are major and minor, but common sense makes it obvious. Major members of the series and faction leaders, etc., are all usually major canons. But when in doubt, ask, it never hurts and maybe I'll allow you to have the canon you want.
Also remember that you can only have one character from each village or organization. ^_^
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http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7085868/1/#new

Would like to add a jutsu, I am rp'ing out on how I learned it in that thread.


Name: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu - Camouflage Concealment Technique
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Jutsu type: Stealth

Meisai Gakure no Jutsu is one of the secret Grass Village's techniques. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja camouflages himself with his sorroundings, basically making himself invisible and difficult to detect. This can only work if there's greenery around you (bushes, forests etc.). The only way one can detect the Ninja's presence is through the Sharingan or the Byakugan eye or similar chakra sensing kekkei genkai. If the ninja tries to attack while this is in use or he tries to move a lot he gives away his position.

Edited by kin, Feb 9 2009, 06:42 AM.
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Negro please.

Let's say something more interesting, like the grass grows and helps camouflage him in high greenery such as forests or grass. However, he becomes visible when moving a lot or trying to attack and abilities to sense chakra such as kekkei genkai eyes can detect him (so "undetectable" is irrelevant).
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aight, i added he gives away his position when trying to attack.
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Negro please.

I wanted you to add all of my suggestions, otherwise it's untenable.

Especially:
However, he becomes visible when moving a lot or trying to attack and abilities to sense chakra such as kekkei genkai eyes can detect him (so "undetectable" is irrelevant).

Not just "BYAKUGAN AND SHARIGAN DURRRR".
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